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Posted: 02 January 2009 at 11:39am | IP Logged
part 6 updated(page 3)
hey guys i am new here i am already writing this story in dmg blog and nw starting here also if interested to read then pls comment. deepu i guess u are happy now
epic 1

(this is the time when armaan and ridhima got engaged and they are soon to get married sasnk is not so happy bt he agreed as because everybody else is happy and ridhima also they both know and thrying there best to convice that ridhima ke liye armaan se accha koi nahi ho sakta.. anjali has started liking atul, and rahul is now very confused as to see ar jodi some how he feels that jodi ho to ar jaisi and he has decided to leave sanjevi after ar marriage. bt anyone not know it and muskaan has now started loving rahul and she is disturbed as to why he is going away.
in sanjeevani
nurse station
dr kirti assigned duty to everybody as she very well know that ar if given duty together they will not do so.
rahul and ridhima: in general ward
armaan and muskan: have to treat a emergency case which has come in icu.
atul : in kids ward
anjie: assiting dr sasnk in surgery all disperse.
in icu
armaan: kya yaar is dr kirti ka bhi screw dhila hai jab dekho tab humhe alag kar deti hai.
muskaan: are haan yaar sach main rahul
armaan: main kuch samjha nahi
muskan: trying to round of are yaar tumhe aur ridhima ko sath dena chahiye tha aur mujhe aur rahul
armaan: haan haan aaj kal rahul pe bada pyar aa raha hai.
mu: isski to baat hi maat kar ek who hai pata nahi kyun mujhse khicha khicha rehta hai.
in general ward
rahul: kya hua ridhi khush nahi ho tum dono ko saath main duty nahi di.
ridhi: khush to nahi hoon par sahi kya agar armaan samne hota hai to kaam kam kuch aur zada hota hai.
rahul: ha ha who mujhe batane ki baat hai kya waise abhi bhi who kaun sa tumhe kaam karne dega
ridhi: matlab
rahul: who dekho kaise waha khara tumhe nihar raha hai.
ridhima: looking at armaan and giving her stern look tum yaha kya kar rahe ho kaam nahi karma
armaan: are yaar yeh muskaan mujse samalti nahi hai khoon dekh te hi uska dimag kharab hi jata hai jaise taise usehe bana kar aaya hoon aur maine patient ko injection de diya hai who aaram kar raha hai.
rahul: getting worried who thik to hai na
armaan: tujhe uski itni phikar hai to jake dekh le na. keeping his hands on ridhi arms.
(meanwhile nurse come armaan ji aap jayye dr kirti aa rahi hai he just give kiss to ridhima on her cheek and ran. he has told nurse to inform him abt kirti.. ridhima is shocked and shying by sudden act of armaan.)
atul is meanwhile playing with children and for a change anjali is seeing him from glass and is haapy by seeing him to take such good care of kids.
( ridhima was passing through fire escape suddenly someone puuled her inside)
ridhima: kya kar rahe ho armaan
armaan: wohi jo mera kaam hai aura b to yeh bhi nahi keh sakti ki koi dekh lega ab to sabko pata hai.( holding her tight form her waist.
armaan: caressing her hair and kiss her cheek was about to kiss her lips and and and as usuall pager rings

prerecap( ar marriagr date is going to be fixed.)


Epic 2 hum sath sath hai
ridhima jana hoga pager emergency hai.
armaan: is pager ki to main

gupta house

everybody are there as there is date fimalised for ar marriage and pandit is seeing the kundalis and every body is happy about it except armaan he is very nervouse as he want marriage dt should be as soon as possible par panditji says before 1 monts there is no shubh muharat armaan shouted wtttttttttttttttttttttt everybody looked at armaan.
armaan: ek mahine pandit jiiiiiiiiii pls toda jaldi nahi ho sakta.
rahul giggling inhis ears : haan haan tumara bas chale to aaj hi kar lo.
armaan: giving him stern look.
pandit: soory beta iske pehle koi mu harat nahi hai
everybody else ok par dt kya hai ha its 2 oct.
armaan very disturbed bt ridhima was happy as she can get some time with her parents.
everbody has gone after dinner its 1 o clock in night and ridhima gets a call from armaan
armaan: kya kar rahi hoooooon
ridhima: itni raat ko koi kya kar sakta hai.
armaan: haan haan tum aur tumare papa meri neend udhake khud so rahe hai.
ridhima: ab kya hua
armaan: kya hua ? us pandit ko kisne bulaya tha
ridhima: papa ne
armaan: ab samjha woh is ek mahene main tumara brain wash karenge mere khilaf
ridima; armaan tum
armaan: cutting in between ok sorry sorry main mazak raha tha acha suno I love u and give her a kiss on phone
ridhima: blushing
armaan: knows it oye hoye tum sharmate hue bai pyari lag rahi ho

ridhima: tumhe kaise pata just standing and checking kahi who balcony mein to nahi hai.

armaan: baith jao zada takleef karne ki zarrorat nahi hai mujhe pata hai tum kya kya kis waqt karti hoo ab tumhe itna to janta hi hoon na
ridhima: ohhhhhhhhhh mujhe nahi pata tha
anjali in between are yaar tum logon ko to neend nahi aati kam se kam mujhe to sone do yaar pls
ridima: acha main phone rakhti hoooooooon di jag jayegi k bye
armaan: ridhima suno bt ridhima has kept the phone he in his minds.
shit yaar tum kab aaogi mere ghar ko ambhalne aur mujhe.
in the morning ridhima gets bunch of red roses she always get from armaan after angagement
in sanjeevani
rahul is sitting and deep in thinking ek maheena aura b aur nahi hota mujhe kuch bhi karke muskaan se door jana hi hoga uske saath rekar to yeh nahi hoga.
meanwhile muskaan comes ad is happy seeing him alone she just sit besides him and admiring him in his red tshirt.
suddenly rahul sees it
rahul: are tu yaha kab aaye maine dekha nahi
muskaan: dekhek ha kaise kisi soch mai jo tha
rahul" aisi koi baat nahi hai chal mujhe ek case ke bare main dr kirti se discuss karma hai phir milte hai.
muskaan: dr kirti se baad main baat kar lena yaar abhi brefing ke liye time hai
rahul: nahi yaar bahut important hai
muskaan: tu mujhe batayega problem kya jab dekhomujhse door bhagta hai aakhir baat kya hai
rahul aisa kuch nahi hai
muskaan: main sab samjhti hoo tumare paas aaj kal mere liye baat karne ka time nahi hai
meanwhile they are fighing ar just enterning and looking into one another eyes they don't know there is rm already there
as ridhima is walking without seeing rahul and bumb into it and both fall and eyes contact
armaan: just puuling ridhima kya yaar rahul dekh nahi sakta bechari ko kahi lag jati to
muskaan: sach kehte hai log pyar main andhe ho jate hai galti ridhima kit hi aur tu rahul pe bhdak raha hai.
armaan: kya baat hai muskaan aaj kal rahul ki badi phikar karne llagi hai.
muskaan shy slghtlly
rahul: seeing that are aisa kuch nahi hai tumhe kya lagta hai tum dono pyar karte ho iska matlab sab karte hai kya ok yaar mujhe jana hai.
armaan: isse kya hua bahut dino se badla badla lag raha hai.
mu: ha mujhe bhi oye hero tu baat kar ke dekh na
armaan: thik hain dekh to hoon
atul anjali
anaji is giving lift to atul now a days to hospital as ridhima is busy with armaan.
atul: thanks anjali lekin tum hamesha kyun aati hoon mera ghar to tumare raaste ke beech bhi nahi padta.
anjali: iuts ok waise bhi mujhe akele drive karma acha nahi lagta aur ridhima ko to armaan lene 7 baje hi tapak jata hai. yaar in dono ko dekh ke lagta hai koi kitna pyar kar sakta hai raat raat bhar bat karte hai aur phir subah phirse itni kya bateen hoti hai
atul:haan yaar yeh to mujhe bhi nahi pata in minds baat to hoti hai karne aur sune wala chaiye mera dost mera bhai kitna lucy hai.

prerecap( armaan talks to rahul)

guys  do comment i should continue here or not
love u karan
karan ki dewani mithila


Edited by mithila2 - 05 February 2009 at 9:12pm

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hey nice ff do continueSmile

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Hey dere..
I'm glad u've posted your FF here as well..
Well I'm the same Anonymous who commented on your epic when you started writing again after a long time hope you remember..

luv
Rucha..



Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 02 January 2009 at 12:56pm

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nice fanfic plz continue soon

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Posted: 02 January 2009 at 11:07pm | IP Logged
HEY MITHILA :)
 
ROCKING PART...
 
PLEASE DO CONTINUE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE :)
 
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART TO COME :)
 
CONTINUE SOON :)
 
 

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Posted: 02 January 2009 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
hai mithila,
you are really a very good writer
i loved the first two episodes...
will be waiting for more episodes to come
please do continue as soon as possible
loving your ff :)


Edited by DipikaGupta - 02 January 2009 at 11:12pm

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I was one of the readers on the blog.
from now on, i wil be reading ur ff on india forums.
gr8 job..
actually, i can not visit the blog regularly but i visit india forums. so, im reallly happy to read hssh here.
thanks for sharing it here also :)

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guys thanks for supprting me.
epic 3
Recap: AR dt finalized muskaan is not happy seeing rahul behaviour


fire escape

rahul is sitting there and armaan just paas bye and see him and go inside

armaan: teri itni himaat tune meri jagah par baitne ki himmat kaise ki

rahul: tu to aise baat kara raha hai ki yaha terenamm ka stamp laga hua ho

armaan: han han stamp nahi hai par yeh meri jagah hai

rahul irritated: thik hai thik hai tu hi bait mainja raha hoon

armaan: are yaar main to mazak kar raha tha itni seriously kyun le raha hai ab bol kya problem hai
rahul: problem koi problem nahi hai yaar its just ki main thoda thak gaya hoon

armaan: ab mujhse to jhooth mat bol main tumhe bachpan se janta hoon tu muskaan ke saath
rahul: sensing it wt he is saying he says oh main bhul gaya mujhe dr kirti ne bulaya hai.
armaan: oh really dekh in sab bahanp se kuch nahi hoga tumhe batana hi hoga ki kya hua hai jab tak nahi batayega main nahi jane doonga.
rahul: tu to aise bol raha hai jab ridhima ke saath tera jhagda hua tha to tune meri madat lit hi?
armaan: lit hi rahul tumhe yaad nahi tumne kaha tha upperwale par chod do aur maine uske saath naye seere se sab shuru kiya ab sab thik hai.
rahul: tu lucky hai armaan par main nahi
armaan: ab mujhe bataega ki problem kya hai nahi to main muski ko bata do kit u usse kitna pyaar karta hai aur jo uske liye natak tha who tere liye sachahi.
rahul: not telling anything
armaan: thi hai fine main use batane jar aha hoon
rahul: nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii pls rukja
armaan: to bata kya baat hai.
rahul: main sanjeevni chod ke jar aha hoon
armaan: kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa par kyun
rahul: main muskaan ke layek nahi hoon teri aur ridhima ki jodi kitni achi lagti hai main muskaan ke saath aisa lagta hoon jaise hoor ki gale main Bandar ko bandh diya ho.
armaan: wt yeh kya bakwas baat kar raha hai tere dimag main aisi bateein kaha se aayi.
rahul: aisa hi hai armaan isseliye to dekh who bhi to tujhse hi pyar karti thi par tu uske naseeb main nahi tha shayad koi aur aajaye jo tumari tarah hoo to uski zindagi sawar jayegi main jar aha hoon matlab jaa raha hoon mujhe iske barre main aur discussion nahi karni.
armaan; meri baat to suo rahul.


there was someone else also listning this after rahul went she comes its ridhima

ridhima: yeh isse kya ho gaya kaise kaise batein kar raha hai tumhe kuch karna hoga.

armaan: baat kuch aur hi hai main use janta hoon who is reason ke liye muskaan se door nahi ja sakta baat kuch aur hi hai.

anjali atul
anjali: sitting in locker room and wating for atul with money plant in her hand.
atul coming sees it and says: yeh money plant yeh tumare haath main kya kar raha hai.
anjali: main yeh tumare liye layi hoon tum udaas the na tumara money lant tooth gaya issiliye
atul: oh thankyou tumhe yaad tha u are so sweet.
anjali: iski koi zaroorat nahi hai ab hum bahut ache dost hai aur ek doosre ko janne bhi lage hai so no need to say thankyou right.
meanwhile dr shubankar is just moving around the passage in the hospital very nervously

dr armaan: kya hua sir aap bahut tention main ha kya baat hai.

dr subankar: aapki to life set hai shadi kid t bhi fix ho gayi par mera kya maine socha hai aaj dr kitiko shadi ke liye propose karroga par kaise kuch samjh nahi aa raha. aap to is khel main mahir hai aap meri madat karege

armaan; sure sir

dr shubankar: very happy thanku armaan

dr armaan in mind huuuuuuuuuu kitno ki madat karo ek rahul hai aur ek aap aurek mere sasurjee jo maan kar bhi nahi manne.

meanwhile rahul is seeing some case file and is very seriously reading it bt just then rahul got hurt from pillar and his file was fallen down its written rahul garewal on the top of the file armaan sees it and trying to pick it up rahul rushed and pick it not allowing armaan to see btits late armaan has already sees its name.

(prerecap wt happen to rahul is it something serious.)

love u karan
karan ki dewani mithila

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