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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 9:41am | IP Logged

~reserved~

 *edit* thx K!

alllrite dt was smg..!! more than nethin i think i liked d lingo...d way u used d words...really deepened d whole idea...!!bravo on dt kratz!! okay d part...was awesome!!
juss enuf details..bt still so strong..armaan hurtin at abhiz hand arnd d waist...i kept thinkin now hell c ridz bein in pain d way abhiz holdin her...bt it never cme...ma stupid thotz! :D and ten d encounter..ohhhhhhh...jaanleva!!sexy gurl!!..d use again...bullet..shot!! hahahahhah!! niceee!!! wer she frum?and i htot tey were in college? hmm!!! bt hey...tne abhi in d same house...wat tey brothers? did i miss smg?
lmao! grt goin!!

luved it! :D

NZ!



Edited by missypatel - 09 January 2009 at 1:27pm

spln IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 9:41am | IP Logged
haha

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dam kratz how cud u lolz

*edit*...indeed kratz u need reprimanding severaly for this....watever the HOW CUD U means here...u know better than me dotcha!!!

oki the part...i went back n re read the intro for the plain heck of it...n glad i did...man can i say i love the armaan here n not appear a prospective lunatic???? possibloy i have owned that status long to try in shun it awya anymore ....yeh yeh lunatic me...wat a guy....gosh geme someone like himmmmmm?!!!!!

haha loved the part girl....rustic, powerful n full of impact...n yet u revealed nothing of consequence....hahahahaha fab job!!!kudos kratz....post the next bit soon coz this left me with a taste to linger a wile n just that!!!


Edited by spln - 09 January 2009 at 2:38pm
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 10:12am | IP Logged
hey krati.. that was so good.. so much of suspense sweetie.. Armaan is so much struck with her.. liked this part soo.. much.. plz continue soon.
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Hey Krati,
Fabulous part yaar, I really loved it but only want to know why ammi is taking revenger what had ridzi done?
And I was shocked while reading ammi and abhi know each other before ridzi comes( I am sure there s something behind but what?).
Now i am becoming very very excited.
Pls pls pls continue soon and thnx a ton for the PM.

Kashish
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 10:36am | IP Logged
wow amazing partt!!! really intriguing past of armaan and ridhima here! cant wait to see how it unfolds! Tongue
SillyAngel Goldie
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Whaooo
that part was very good and sad at the same time...:(
 
if Armaan really had loved her and wanted to ger her back then he should the nicer way LOL...dont mind me hehe
 
lets just hope Abi has some secret affair haha
 
ur a very creative writter!
 
xo
 
 
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Wow Krati ... amazing update. Waiting for you to unfold the story ... Cheers,
Suvarna
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Posted: 09 January 2009 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Hey Krati
WOW what a part this resolves lots of my questions i must say ur born writer al ur consepts r totaly different n they r just captured my heart it was just amazing i loved it sooooooooooo much
thnxs for sharing this FF with us
luv
nruti

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