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~Deceit and revenge~pt-4pg-25(31/8)Hpy bday nij :)

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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 11:10am | IP Logged

She gasped as she felt the familiar touch on her bare waist. She felt him pulling her closer and she breathed in his musky cologne and looked up immediately as she realized it was the same cologne, the eyes too looked familiar but she couldn't see the rest of his face since it was a masquerade ball she was at.

"You look beautiful." He whispered pulling her closer than she already was. His proximity, the cologne, the touch'it was all very unsettling but she kept dancing having no other option. She felt his fingers rub on her skin as his hand slid a little lower and she closed her eyes drowning into the moment. The shimmering lights falling on her closed eye lids and they danced on the floor but a little later she didn't feel the light anymore'the noise was a lot less, she quickly opened her eyes and was startled as she found herself in a room'he must have brought her here and she was too lost in the moment to notice. What was wrong with her? She moved out of his arms and was about to say something when he pushed her onto the bed behind her and taking off his jacket he was over her the next moment.

"What are you doing? Get off me." She yelled and looked at the door but it was closed and with the loud music playing outside, she doubted if anyone would hear her.

"Let me go." She saw him smirk as he opened the top few buttons of his shirt and than she saw him reach out to her earring and take it off. "What'what are you dd..doing?" she stuttered as his face inched closer. The pallu of her sari slipped off her shoulder and before she could move to settle it back she saw him take off his mask and her eyes widened and she mouthed soundlessly, "Armaan!!"

And the next moment his lips crashed onto hers'and his body fell completely onto hers and they sank into the bed.

Riddhima felt her heart beat get faster as his lips rubbed against hers'she had been right throughout'

Though something at the back of her head was telling her to stop him, to move away but her heart did not coordinate with her head and she found her hands moving towards his hair as she clutched and rubbed her body against his'

She suddenly felt a flash of light on her face and than heard some noises and found Armaan moving off her and she gasped as she saw a number of news reporters standing there holding camera and clicking non stop. She quickly got up and pulled up her pallu as she heard him whisper, "I told you I'll be back'I hope you like the surprise, Mrs. Riddhima Abhimanyu Modi."

Part1- page7
Part2- page13
Part3-Page 20
Part4-Page 25

Edited by krati.mehra - 31 August 2009 at 12:28pm

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hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 11:11am | IP Logged

lolz for the reserve first of all
i was like huh,Kratz never told me about this
but then hey
it was an awesome surprise

so mrs.Ridz Modi exposed
man the intro had me thinking loads
yar kratz u better be updating this quicker than ablaze
i love your stories and the way u write adds that touch of thrill even id it aint a thriller
great intro kratz
keep the stuff coming
love it all

Edited by hinanaziri - 28 December 2008 at 6:58am
spln IF-Sizzlerz

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Prasanthi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Wow.. one more interesting one from ur side... its quit captivating part... do continue soon
SillyAngel Goldie

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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Oh man im hooked this is soo intenseee
please do do do continue soon lol
-Cherry- IF-Addictz

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thats all i can say
Taira Senior Member

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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Tumne na humse kuch kaha tha..
Humne bhi kuch kaha nhi..
Ye fic kab post ho gaya..
Humko to pata bhi nhi...
ahahha...aur sunao boring really u were like u not posting it fir abhi kya hua...batana to tha na...dumbo...
anyways, reserved for now...will get back soon..

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