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~The girl next door~ pt 29b&c pg 140&142 07/01 (Page 145)

hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AR-lover

HEY I M A NEW READER.....................I LOVED THIS FIC







 Kshma ( is that  short for Karishma or kshma as in forgive?)

Originally posted by anu_k12

hey hii...
I jus read ur entire ff in last 4 days...
I must say its absolutely fabulous...
plz add me to ur pm list...

thanks so much hun
will pm u soon with an update
hopefully today! :)

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 5:10am

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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 1:10am | IP Logged
omg it was sooooooooooooo......guuddddd.....
hve no words
i really luved it...n wats dis abhi concept yaar???
n riszie n ammy plzz get along...but u kno da mre tym it will tke da mre parts we will get too read hehe...
i luved da VM it was so natural n seems to go wid da stry..!!
plzzplzz cont soon n hey...
write longer parts....dis r too small for da readers hehe...not too small...but wen it end evry part seems small only...but plzz do write big parts.....ooops i mean LOOOONNNNNNGGGG Parts..!!!

love ya loads
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SunainaTM007

*reserved ... part b finally :D  
heyyy hina !!! :D
finally part b... and i really really loved reading it !!
the others teasing riddhima and poor ridzi making up excuses... and the other always coming up with questions that leave her in a fix and also thinking hard abt another story... she was sooo cute , when she tried to make up excuses for their questions :) :)
atul n rahul coming to her rescue in the end... but still anji n muski following her in :)
part b was really fab... it was sooo cute !! :D
cant wait for part c now ;)
soooo jaldi se update !!

hey Suni ,thanks so much for the cheerful comments hun
always look forward to them
glad u liked the chotu sa part

Originally posted by SunainaTM007

Heyy Hina !!!! :)
yayyy...part c !! :) it was really really very nice... loved reading it ! :)
riddhima making up another excuse abt emma and anji getting worried abt her gloominess..aww :) armaan being worried abt ridzi's reaction and desperate to see her atleast once..aww :) cute !...
the vm u chose n the song was awesome.. suited the situation very much !.. really nice choice :) their reactions to the song n to each other's presence was well-penned.. i specially liked the use of "love will find a way" .. it was really cute ! aha,u noticed  :) had a bit of of Shahrukhkhan in me then  lol
the word game was really nice... and the ending was like really cool :) now AR know that the gang already knew abt their secret ... and  they face the gang together now...right?.. hope its that way :)
err yeh sort of but not really LOL
a great enjoyable update hina !:) loved it tons !...
jaldi se update.. cant wait for the next part !!... really jaldi se please :) :)
thanks for the pm !..
*hugs* hugs to u too

thanks for reading and liking Suni
like always u'r comments made my day

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 7:29am

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hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maanu


verysmall update.....

curious to know wat is ridzis reaction.... and u r delaying it.......

do continu soon........


sorry yar,i never intend to delay,it just happens so :S

Originally posted by maanu

hi hina.....

awesum update........ but too many pieces...

the flow wud have made it even more wonderful.....

finally everybody speaking up..

but eager to know whats next.

do contiue soon......

thanks or the pm


thanks for the comments hun
will post a longer part soon
and yes i agree the flow wud have been much better if it had been one single partOuch

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 7:09am
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tarm

Hey Hina my name is Tahmina cal me tarm.Winkhey tarm,welcome!

I realli luv ur FF its so cute. And yh if i wer in her spot i'd also pick Armaan over KD and defo over Abhi - urgh his intentions dnt seem sweet 2 meAngry. ahaha,nah he isn't really that bad a person,just the time was wrong

but u knw wen Ridz discussed da matter wid KD bt changed da names etc but Armaan knw who she was tlkin about does dat mean he knw bout her nd Abhi? well yes and no ,he doesn't know its Abhi

Anywayz plz update soon and pm me as wel. tnx byeSmile

Originally posted by tarm

Plz bring AR together i mean he did confess and admit his mistake plz dnt mke Ridzy stubborn like in da real DMG showUnhappy. i wont i promise  I luvd da part of da game wen she sed 'hate' and he sed 'love' bck - dat was a real good reply back.Thumbs Up thanks Embarrassed

Anywayz i didnt gt a pm plz do pm me as wel. tnx. byeSmile
P.S. I never actualli heard KK's version of da song bt in my opinion i liked Asif's better probz bcoz iv heard dat more so i like dat version better bt KK's version is nice as wel especially da guitar.
yeh the music's fab in both ,and i agree the atif version is more popluar coz it was included in the movie


thanx for the sweet comments tarm,
looking forward to more ( wen i update of course :S)

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 7:36am

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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arluver15

that was a nice part
a bit short n not too much in it
cont soon
will be waiting..............

lol ,i know it wasn't much ,thanks anyways

Originally posted by arluver15

hey hina
that was gr8 part
realy nicly done in 3 bits
to b honest i find this part c of 29 better then a n b
the truth is out
this game is killing i sud try it with someone.... trust me,its fun i 've tried it a few times myself
loved the song.... i liked the second verzion the KASH mix song was better the the first one
nice pick
right now i m so out of bollywood
i have not seen any movies since april of 2009
i leave in USA.............and to top it dont have cable or hindi dish or anything except the broken antana which can only have 3-4 chanels
so i was like wow i need a lot a cathing up to do.....
thanxs for this amazing song
loved it very much aww,nruti hope u get to catch up with the bolly world ,glad u liked the song and VM(thanks amna)
updat soon
love ya

thanks again for the comments nruti
i'm hoping to post a part soon

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 7:40am
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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 5:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanju_veni

hey lovely  update

Had so much fun reading it

Thanks for pm

thanks hun,
glad that u had fun reading

Originally posted by mina_18secret

hey hina...
i'm new here... i loved this ff.... pls let Ridz forgive Armaan and bring them together...
continue soon and pls pm me...

welcome mina,
yes i am hoping for a happy ending ,will get them together soon
for the comments

Originally posted by aati1429

wow... that was amazing

thanks :)

Originally posted by aishar

nice part!


Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 7:43am

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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prernawaghray

hey hinu di
how r u???
happy new year to u!!! HNY to u too hun,i've been good,u? howz Hyd after all those strikes and rallies ?
the best part was the game ... they came to know the truth :)
n i really like the game from the kkhh days :) :)
the song was sooo apt di thanks sweety,i had been waiting long to use the song,and thot this was the right time
i really like the atif-version of the song :)
n the vm was also lovely (kudos to the vm-maker) yep great job by the VM maker
but ridz's reaction was unknown na di...
can u plz put in more of hers in the next part will do
or maybe it would be better with AR convo so taht evrything gets cleared :)
yeh i'll so a convo with a bit of both
update soon di
even bride to be oh yeh ,completely forgot abt that WinkLOL

cheers Prerna

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 8:00am

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