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~The girl next door~ pt 29b&c pg 140&142 07/01 (Page 144)

hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 08 January 2010 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spln

sadly u r first (again) :(
hope no more

*evil grin* huhuhahahahhahaha!!! i broke into her account cuz you ALWAYS (99.9%) give me the third spot...oye chup kar,kita conveniently bhul jati when i give u the first ,bp rules follow karne padte yar and as um the firts one to read, i shud also be the first to comment :D haan ye thik hai ,btw  did u sleep at all last nite ?

hinz, itna entertaining part tha! i only wish you would have posted the whole thing, the flow would have been amazing then but...:D yeh i tend to learn things the hard way ,but glad it still made u smile

Armaan is a sweetheart, and Riddhima is about as adorable as him (this is a rarity i find in only ur fic, most of the times i hate Riddhima :D ) haha i know u do...adn Muskaan to *grins knowingly* meri favorite hai!  wo to hona hi hai The gang is full of punks...a bunch i'd very much like to know and meet sometime :D  :D  poor kids! 'you knew all along' hahaha...that cracked me up!  oho random ,par its started to snow again ,aaah i'm sick of it

The song :D one of the best of last year, i guess....been singing it ALL day since yesterday..khair, will see the vm laterz!  yeh? me too i've been singing kite time se

Lovya hinz....7th jan, a day that changed my life (chotu sa) somehow too :D  haan na ,ab to bade sare reasons mile hai celebrate karne ko and well, it was great tawking to u after so long...! i know,felt great and in a way relieved ,muah bp !


The kid.

P.s. can write your LONG comments in my post :D  hehe nj was shocked to see her spot filled

prernawaghray IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 January 2010 at 7:11am | IP Logged
hey hinu di
how r u???
happy new year to u!!!
the best part was the game ... they came to know the truth :)
n i really like the game from the kkhh days :)
the song was sooo apt di
i really like the atif-version of the song :)
n the vm was also lovely (kudos to the vm-maker)
but ridz's reaction was unknown na di...
can u plz put in more of hers in the next part
or maybe it would be better with AR convo so taht evrything gets cleared :)
update soon di
even bride to be
SunainaTM007 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 January 2010 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Heyy Hina !!!! :)
yayyy...part c !! :) it was really really very nice... loved reading it ! :)
riddhima making up another excuse abt emma and anji getting worried abt her gloominess..aww :) armaan being worried abt ridzi's reaction and desperate to see her atleast once..aww :) cute !...
the vm u chose n the song was awesome.. suited the situation very much !.. really nice choice :) their reactions to the song n to each other's presence was well-penned.. i specially liked the use of "love will find a way" .. it was really cute !
the word game was really nice... and the ending was like really cool :) now AR know that the gang already knew abt their secret ... and  they face the gang together now...right?.. hope its that way :)
a great enjoyable update hina !:) loved it tons !...
jaldi se update.. cant wait for the next part !!... really jaldi se please :) :)
thanks for the pm !..
Suvarna.... Goldie

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Posts: 2148

Posted: 09 January 2010 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Hey Hina ... thanks for the update and PM. Fab song in background and VM's superb. Thanks to the maker for creating this one. It was cool to see KaSh and golden period of DMG.
Now coming to the updates -
So much has happened in the mini updates of part 29. But the end was mind boggling. I mean AA and RM did not spare poor AR. And Anj-Muskaan combination is killer. Hahaha ... Emma ka Abhi ban gaya.
Well, glad Riddhima has decided to confront ... much awaited bit of this fic. And high time Abhi comes in picture.
Waiting for more Hinu ... update soon.
maanu Goldie

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Posted: 11 January 2010 at 10:53am | IP Logged

hi hina.....

awesum update........ but too many pieces...

the flow wud have made it even more wonderful.....

finally everybody speaking up..

but eager to know whats next.

do contiue soon......

thanks or the pm


Edited by maanu - 11 January 2010 at 10:54am
hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 7:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Prasanthi

padhle jab bi tu wapas aye
(thats is if the updt is posted by then :P )
Will be back to form by weekend. So, please..Tongue
edit 2: (comment for part b)
lo ji.. a small part again, humph! haan haan short tha na
poor ridzie. she is going to have a tough time. our detective girls are not going to leave her.  lol part was nice hinu though short. where did she go now?
waiting for part c.



Originally posted by Prasanthi

reserved  this time for a longer update :)

Atlast, a start of the new year!Tongue kya baat karri yar,i was supposed to finish this last year me hi,but jo bi...
Gang rules!!! LOLLOL. This one reminded me of the gang scene on DMG before Karwachauth in 2008. huh? yad ni ara muje ,kya tha wo scene but anyway ,Muski n Anjie on toes to find out the truth between AR. Girls can never be at peace when there is something for gossip, right? of course,birth right jo hai
Anyway, coming to the part, Ridzie! where is Emma?! hahahaha.. the name has been abused so many times that in real now when I meet anyone with that name I will be on a roll LOL hahaha  :D. Poor Ridhima how many issues can she handle? Armaan's resltessness is so apt. :) God only knows, oh sorry, Hina only know how n what is his fate. ni yar Hina is clueless this time,i'm juggling between the many ways i cud take this in ,i need help ! kya karoon ?
I feel now AR together will face the gang now, haina? hmm i get what u want ,but i dunno if i wanna take it that way  Ok for this.. jaldi se next part dena.Big smile yeh i have the update after the next ready ,just have to writ a part to build a connection ,sorry i know this doesnt make sense,lemme post and u'll understand
Little drops of water make a mighty ocean...same here. Little funny parts made the whole update enjoyable.Tongue glad u enjoyed Pras !



Edited by hinanaziri - 14 January 2010 at 7:39am

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hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AR-lover

HEY I M A NEW READER.....................I LOVED THIS FIC







 Kshma ( is that  short for Karishma or kshma as in forgive?)

Originally posted by anu_k12

hey hii...
I jus read ur entire ff in last 4 days...
I must say its absolutely fabulous...
plz add me to ur pm list...

thanks so much hun
will pm u soon with an update
hopefully today! :)

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 January 2010 at 5:10am
RKDramebaaz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 January 2010 at 1:10am | IP Logged
omg it was sooooooooooooo......guuddddd.....
hve no words
i really luved it...n wats dis abhi concept yaar???
n riszie n ammy plzz get along...but u kno da mre tym it will tke da mre parts we will get too read hehe...
i luved da VM it was so natural n seems to go wid da stry..!!
plzzplzz cont soon n hey...
write longer parts....dis r too small for da readers hehe...not too small...but wen it end evry part seems small only...but plzz do write big parts.....ooops i mean LOOOONNNNNNGGGG Parts..!!!

love ya loads

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