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A Ray of Hope—(AR) part 4 pg1 (finished) (Page 3)

kashishk IF-Sizzlerz
kashishk
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Posted: 01 January 2009 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Hey it's really fabulous FF, I really loved it.
Pls continue soon.
I am waiting eagerly and PM me if possible.

And ya very very happy new year, have lots of fun.
Kashish


Edited by kashishk - 01 January 2009 at 3:20am
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Posted: 01 January 2009 at 4:12am | IP Logged
hey ania
just done part 2
as a new yr resolution i'm avoiding reserving posts and commenting right away,saves me time somehow
so lemme tell u what i thot of part 2
well it was kinda short ,may be coz i didnt want the meeting to be short
oh well,loved how u desbribed her expressions and his effects on her
the change in feelings is awsomely written
the queue ,he ipod
haha laziness and boredom came easy wow,thats me
thanx for that line,will use it for myself hehe

ok so moving on,he remebered her and offered for the lift,i like
and finally he gave his name like delivering a movie dialouge haha cool!
the next morning description i loved it,coz u just described it so well wid her emotions

now me back to part 3
thanx for the pm

love
Hina

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Posted: 01 January 2009 at 4:26am | IP Logged
ok done with part reading pt 3
wat was that about?
i bet she'll turn out to be his sister
i was sad to know anjie's ill state
but none the less glad he spoke a little more
not all tho
lots happened in this pt but gave us lots to think
me gonna reserve my comments as of yet
and will give u a whole essay once u give us the last part
love your writing ania
cont soon and pm me if u can
and i've bookmarked the link,i wont lose it this time

love
Hina
prernawaghray IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 January 2009 at 7:55am | IP Logged
hey ania
aww yaar that was sooo touching their parting was really sad
well wanna know how they meet
but seriously lovely part
keep posting
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Posted: 02 January 2009 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 03 January 2009 at 10:57am | IP Logged

hey ania, just read the three parts....it was a good read, will wait for ur long part now, want to see how u end it...great job, very well written

tc

harika

lookwhoshere Senior Member
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Posted: 04 January 2009 at 2:37am | IP Logged
hey...just read it all...n enjoyed reading it!! an unusual story....oh n luved sum of the lines like, the one whr she followed his lead like a kid lost on a school trip..hehe..LOL
cud imagine it all happening..places like Paris cud be so confusing if unknown..lol..French as they say, bolte kuch aur hain, likhte kuch aur hain!
continue soon hun..gr8 job!
luv,
anu.
suvrati IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 January 2009 at 9:20am | IP Logged

hey read all ur prts updated uptill now n u know what ur writing is commendable i mean the language used is quite high....can imagine ridzspeaking in british accent...n armaan ..he was so rude to her in the beginning n then like  he was ready to talk n all n was fr some mp work like whats it?
hey plz continue soon n ya its sad only 1 more prt left h....hey cant u cotinue ...that was really going nice...
n plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me darling if u can.

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