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A Ray of Hope—(AR) part 4 pg1 (finished)

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will comment soon :)

edit:
thanks for the pm ania
just read part one
i know i'm pathetically slow with reading
i like to enjoy it nice and slow(can't say the same about writing u must knowLOL)
ok coming to the first part
i just lovedddddd the way u depicted her emotions
the whole scene of her sitting on the window edge and her state of insomnia
i cud feel her dejection to make Paris the choice and then the little mention of her brit accent was cute
her American cousins not liking it haha,believe me the American accent is much harder to comprehend
god,its impossible to undastand what they say hehe
oh well
then came the window shopping bit,aha loved the criticize what u like to refrain yourself from buying it theory,me gona try that now lolz
and aha the set of green eyes wow,just that little description initially said it all
his stuck up attitude awesome,wud love to see how things progress
ok lemme read part 2 in a little while and me shall comment sooner than before
cheers ania
loving your short story
love
Hina



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Aww Ania...
I'm so glad you started a short story..You better update this one fast, I'm dying to read A Mistrusted Trust! Update that too when you get time...No rush!
 
You're doing an absolute stunning job with this short story..You already know that I love the detail and imagery you put into the sentences..It makes it more realistic to visualize! So Kudos Ania!
 
Armi is so mean..well, as of right now he is ..Wonder how he melts...Riddhima sure has the wrong impression of him right now..Let's see how her impression changes...continue sooon! Loving it Ania

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dis is a gr888 one.. waitngg 2 read more
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hey ania
beautiful dear
keep writing plz pm me
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