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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Ika! Beautiful! The first one scared the hell out of me. Woh uss din waala Rahul yaad agaya. the aggressive one who was totally man-handling Muskaan before the confession. But the second one totally blew me away! So beautiful. I seriously had to wait 2 minutes and let it sink in. Most important thing in writing is that it should flow smoothly... like music. You did an amazing job of keeping the flow. They were both very different from each other, yet very unique in their own way. Mind blowing! Thank you so much for the PM. I'll be sending you a PM soon regarding something you'll be pleased about. Wink Can't wait to read more of your work.
 
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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 10:07am | IP Logged
first of all thanks a lot for the pm... Smile you are an awesome writer yaar... very different!! keep it up!! Clap
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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AshiYuvi4life

Ika! Beautiful! The first one scared the hell out of me. Woh uss din waala Rahul yaad agaya. the aggressive one who was totally man-handling Muskaan before the confession. But the second one totally blew me away! So beautiful. I seriously had to wait 2 minutes and let it sink in. Most important thing in writing is that it should flow smoothly... like music. You did an amazing job of keeping the flow. They were both very different from each other, yet very unique in their own way. Mind blowing! Thank you so much for the PM. I'll be sending you a PM soon regarding something you'll be pleased about. Wink Can't wait to read more of your work.
 
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Hey Komz Hug missed you alot! Where did ya vanished? LOLLOL scared ya? woah, means did a greeat jobLOLWink I know, I just fell in love with aggressive Rahul ALOT!Day DreamingBlushing Head over heals man!!Embarrassed
2nd one even I loved it alot
Day DreamingDay Dreaming so full of passion naDay Dreaming. 2 mins?ShockedLOL Awww.. chalo next time will make sure its more than 2 mins!!WinkTongue

Aww!! thankyou so much for all these
comments, I'm so pleased to hearBig smile Flow??!!BlushingBlushing Thankyou!

And yea! PMS, I'm waiting for your pms missy!Wink oohhh spl PM.. waiting for itWink send soon.

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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by muskaan_ankita

first of all thanks a lot for the pm... Smile you are an awesome writer yaar... very different!! keep it up!! Clap

ThankyouBig smile
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Posted: 27 December 2008 at 2:38am | IP Logged
amazing !!! I havnt read anything like it ! awesome !
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Posted: 27 December 2008 at 4:15am | IP Logged
Ika that was awesome!!!!it was really cool!!!!!i personally like the first one better....but the second one was sooooo passionate!!!!!!i really loved both of them!!!!you really are a great writer!!!!do write more such stuff!!!!we  RM fans are simply thirsty for stuff like this!!!!!
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Posted: 28 December 2008 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by I-luv-Mayank

amazing !!! I havnt read anything like it ! awesome !


Thankyou Apoorva, I'm glad you liked itEmbarrassed
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Posted: 28 December 2008 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by justluvmayank

Ika that was awesome!!!!it was really cool!!!!!i personally like the first one better....but the second one was sooooo passionate!!!!!!i really loved both of them!!!!you really are a great writer!!!!do write more such stuff!!!!we  RM fans are simply thirsty for stuff like this!!!!!

Awww..thankx Saku... You know as my personal cohice I also would say Obsession one.. I liked it alot.Smile
I know..other one is quite passionateEmbarrassed. wil ltry and update soonSmile.
Thans for appreciationSmile.

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