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kuch to hua hai PART 18(pg 17) - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
helllo guys im sorry ..and i think u have suffered alot ..so here is the part

PART 17

Kripa leaves for her room when the phone rings again and she picks it up

K;hello

N: oh hi kripa ..its me niati
K: oh yeah ...

and then the whole time kripa had the phone in her hands she kept on saying yeah ok no prbs ...
10 mins later she hangs up and goes to her mom

K:maa...
Maa...
G: kiya hua kripa??
K: maa abhi niati ka phone aaya thaa aur woh kehrahi thi ke kal hum sab log camp pe chalain...kiya jaoon??

G: beta aap mujhse kiya pooch rahin hain??..main to keh bhi doongi ke aap jain laikin aap ke papa shayd manaa kardain
K: mama ....acha theek hai main papa se baat karloongi ..
saying this she leaves..

now Prithiv,mishty,aaliyah and angad are sitting and having a chat.

when kripa enters

P: aray kripa are u going to niatais camp party?..
K:haan bhai main jaoon to laikin papa aur how do u know about the camping trip??

P: haha ..i have my ways ...

K: to josh called u already??

josh was niatis bro and prithvis best frnd,

P: yup..

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guys im sorry for the short update and im sorry that i updated afetr along long time ...ill update tomm inshallh
plz dont hate me for this
cuz i have other commitments too.

luv ya guys

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Posted: 18 years ago
wow read the whole thing today and it's great pls write somemore soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice!!!!!!!! cont.. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey guys ...sooooooooooo..how is the march break going ??..huh?...ok so my break is going fine and having alot of fun...lol

HERE IS THE NEXT PART

PART 18

K: bhai jab aapko josh anin bata hi diya hai to ....who is going to talk to dad and uncle??

A:main ..nahin main nahin karsakta ....main nain naa bolne ki strike ki hui hai

K: (kripa hits him on the head )to abhi kiya kkarhhae the?? idiot

Anagd just bites his tongue ...mishty and aaliayah both eye kripa to ask prithvi ,
K:bhai papa se baat karo naa..plzplzplz

kripa says making a cute face..where aaliayh alos joins in

AA:bhai....pwetty please!!
A: bhaii ..pwetty pwetty plz

M:pwetyy pwetty pwetty plz with a bunny nose and cherry o top...
P:ok ok ..ab itna bhi mat karo .pooch loonga,,,
he says ..smiling and all pf them ..hug ..prithvi..
" we luv u bhai"

P:yeea yea..

prithvi heads to the hallway where suryabhaans room is ...and the rest of the gang is behind him ..they ..stop in front of the door...

P:yaar main nahin jaraha..(he says scaredly)

K: bhai ..ur such a chicken..jaao na..

every body says ..in a whisperjaoo naa..and pushe him in the room...

P:ahem ...papa..he says as he walks in the room...
now prithvi is standing his hands at the back ...

S: haan beta...he says looking up from the book
P: papa ...woh ..
S: haan beta bolo itna ghabra kyoun rahe ho/?
P:woh kal niati aur josh ke saath hum sab camping chale jain?? he said all of this in on breath

S: haan haan beta jayeay...kitne dinon ke liye...

P:umm 3/4 days papa

S:ok

and prithvi practically runs out of the room...

K: bhai kiya hua??

AA: bhai bolo bhi..

M: prithvi?...

P: kia yaartum logon ko itne mushkil kaam karne ke ke lie main hi milta hoon??

A: to iss ka mtlab hai uncle nain mana kardiya?

P:nahin ..woh maan gaye...

WOW.... so we actually are going ....
hehe ..they all said it together,,

its the next day ...8:30 in the morning when angad enters kripas's room

A: mahraniji uthiye..

meanwhile p,m,aa are waiting downstairs...

P: kripa uthi ke nahin?..

Aa: kaise uthe gi..time nahin hua naa..abhi to uski aadhi ratt hui hai...

M: oye ..uss ki taang kyoun khech rahi hai?..

Aa: to poora khech leti hoon ..
aur waise bhi woh to prithvi bhai ki behen hai naa tumhain kiya problem hai...

M:w/e..

UPSTAIRS:

A: kripa utho...

K: angad ,,,kya hai..soone do naa..

A:9 baj rahe hain hum sab to tayyar hain aggar aapko chalna ho to ajye ga...

K: WHAT???

A: yes..ab uthiyay madamji....

K: haan uthgaye ,,angad ..ek kam kardo plz...take my bag downstairs...

A: ok ...and picks up the bag ..

A: baap re ..itna bhaari hai ..
kripa hum camping ke lie jaarhe hain ... koi shaadi mian nahin ...

K: angad 😡 😡 😡

afetr 15 mins ..kripa comes downstairs ..wearinga white capris and blue tank top ..

and they leave


so who do u like it?...
more to come

NEXT:their boat gets messed up in the middles of the sea..
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful amazing pls cont da nxt part soon i cant wait until their boats get messed up pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey thnx guys for all ur lovely comments ill be continuing as soon as possible
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey...nice part...plzz continue soon!!