Posted: 07 September 2009 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
@CCC :D ... i still dunno if that was intentionally so!
anywaz... yeh most of ur comment is an echo of ur mind, i think for
once, specially coming to this last part and its inordinate nonetheless
ever persistent delays i was getting pestered. Still, no excuse is
enough or fair... ! the rahul-adi-realization bit was more distinct in
my mind than the justice i did to it, if i hadm like u mentioned, done
a better job, i believe it would have fit! just wanted A- space for
rahul thinking, B- his realization of the feeling being love striking
him only in an instant and not in time and C- i was most certain i
wanted Adi linked into the bit and not out of parental love or the
boy's concern alone... as in, not in favor of muskaan for what she
could be to Adi (which had been a possibility after he saw his pic in
that wallet) but as his need to have her, and hers similarly... so
yeh!.. over all, there are bits of this part i would have personally
liked much, elsewhere in a better overall update! haha! didn't i say, i
agreed almost verbatum with ur comment? (when don't i?) so well, tout
est bien qui finit bien !! (guess what!)
@prathi... the bits that were left without elaboration were
partially intended yes, and i'l take that credit, not all of it though!
some of it, as i said in my note was just rough finishing! ... still,
on the whole, except towards the end, i enjoyed doing this fic, still
strongly believe it was destined to be RM and so! i guess its my lesson
on how to deal with, if ever, protagonists NON-armidz! :D thanks for
the wonderful comments prathi, ur prompt replies are always a boost!
@smriti.. offense is never taken hun! i'm glad u voice what u
really think, and personally i don't know how anyone could let this
particular part, leave aside the fact that its the end, to this fic
without pointing out the obvious flaws! yeh, grave ones in someways...
i told nij too, i personally saw the parallel of adi and muskaan far
more clearly than i was able to portray and i think if i'd persevered,
which i didn't, i might just have managed! ... but oh well!... nijal,
in name and char, fictional and real, i love! ... had to be so!.. and
all those chars, mostly the neg ones, that i easily wrapped up are more
the in transition guys... the fic when i had started it was meant to be
short cause all i had to end with was them falling in love, realizing
and confessing... as the title goes! of course, problems never end with
that one fact alone right? they are only deterred or diminished or
simply postponed! thanks for the wonderful feedbacks!
Edited by spln - 15 September 2009 at 8:43pm