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Actually...Love(AR FF) ll~Completed~ll - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi sameera! really interesting concept.
continue soon and pm me whenever you update.
 
thanks,
mona :]

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Posted: 15 years ago
the intro sounds gud plz contd
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Posted: 15 years ago
OKE SO ARMAAN IS KINDA HATEGURU
THAT WILL BE FUN
THEY BOTH HAS exchanged personality :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey amazing start
add me to the list sweety.
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey sameera vey nice concept

i like the characterisation a lot

pls include me in pm list

chandni

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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 1:
DR Armaan..app ke ghar se phone aaya tha..app please apne father ko call back kar lejye.....
ghar se phone lekin mere ghar pe to koi bhi nahi hai......mere parents to london mein hain........no sir aap ke parents mumbai aa gai hain..the nurse informed armaan....
wooh....armaan jumped with great joy...completes his work and rush towards his car........armaan mallik was the best neurosurgon in mumbai..and a handsome guy also.......oh armaan...ruk yaar kahan ja raha hai????............rahul came from behind..
arre rahul mom dad aa gaye hai....bus unhi se milne jaa raha hoon....tu bata teri duty khatam ho gai????
nahi yaar...abhi kahan wo....muskaan hai na..uss nai jeena haram kar rakha hai....
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†to kis nai kaha tha shaadi karne ko.....mein issi liye shaadi se chirta hoon...shaadi ke baad zindagi kharab ho jaati hai..har waqt ki chik chik lagi rehti hai...
acha to tu kabhi shaadi nahi kare gaa????? asked rahul...
nahi...mere liye mere patients aur mere profession se barh kar kuch nahi hai.....haan haan tujh se kaun behes kare khair chal tu jaa aur haan unty uncle ko meri taraf se hi kehna.....ok....and armaan leaves....
it was dark and the road was clear so armaan was driving peacefully..
suddenly a girl came in between totally drunk and asked...meri gari kahan hai.........?????
armaan. got shocked...app ki car hai aap ko pata hoga...nahi tumhe pata ho chahiye......armaan saw her drunk and feels really angry..i don't know parents apne bachoon ko aise kaise chor dete hai....woh bhi iss tarah...actually the girl was wearing a black tube dress

Dekheye mujhe late ho raha hai ...wo  app ke friend aa gaye hain..app jayen....the girl turns and sees her friend..hey...ridhima tum yahan kya kar rahi ho???hum tumhe kab se dhoond rahe hai...chalo abb vivek tuhara wait kar raha hai.....
dekhye ye kuch zayaada hee drunk hain..app plz inhe in ke ghar puhcha dein......oh..hello..tumhe kya problem hai????
suddenly armaan's phone rings and he leaves as it was urgent her mom was not feeling well...
after reaching home he quickly ran towards his mother's room and found her in high fever.....mom are u ok???he asked worriedly...
yes beta i am ok ite just a fever due to cold..you dont worry...tum batao how was your day.....
it was good..par aap log yahan achanak...kaise...kuch bataya nahi.????
wo...hum nai socha ke tumhe surprise dein...but armaan knew that they were hiding something from him.....armaan..meanwhile actually forgot about ridhima..he just hate those type of girls...but still respects them.....
In the morning at sanjivani....rahul came and hugs armaan...
hi rahul.....hi armaan...tu kaisa hai...
armaan: kaisa hai matlab ...teri tabiyaat to theek hai naa????
wo..armaan mujhe...mujhe tujh se kuch baat karni hai.....
armaan: haan...bol.....
yahan nahi...kahin bahar chal kar baat karte hai..waise bhi abhi koi patient nahi hai....
ok...armaan said and then they both went to a coffee shop...
armaan: WHAT????????????????Mom Dad nai tum se yeh sab kaha ....mujhe kal hee laga tha ke wo mujh se kuch chupa rahe hain....
yaar.. armaan tu kab taq bacche gaa shaadi to tujhe ek na ek din karni he pare gii...kya tujhe apne parents par bharoosa nahi hai????
yaar...baat bharose kii nahi hai...mein buss...
mein jaanta hoon ke tu shaadi nahi karna chahta...lekin un logon ko tujhe buhat umeedein hain...dekh unhe sirf teri shaadi ki fikr hai..uss ke baad to woh laondon wapas chale jaaen gay...to..tum uss ladki se keh dena ke tumhare liye tumhare patients aur profession se zyaada kuchbhi zaroori nahi hai..aur..aur tu..ek pusukoon zindagii jeena chahta hai....
pursukooon zindagii shaadi ke baad kis ki hoti hai yaar....abb tu apni zindagii he dekh le........
uffo armaan..meri zindagii buhat pursukoon hai...yeh pyaar,masti takraar yahi to zindagii ka asal maza deti hain...tu bas haan kar de aur waise bhi tere issi shaadi naa karne kai faisle ki wajah se uncle unty nai tujh se direct baat karne ke bajae mujh se baat ki...kya tujhe yeh baat achhi lagi....mere bhai apne agay ki zindagii bhagwaan ke bharose chor de aur haan keh de pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese
mujhe sochne ka tima chahiye...... jaanta hoon...har bar tu yahi kehta hai aur hota kuch nahi hai...mein promise karta hoon...ke teri zindagii mein koi farq nahi aaye gaa..jab tak tu chahe gaa....
hmmmmmmmmmm armaan took a deep breath and the said okk..
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some where else in mumbai..a girl wokeup and found her self in her room...arre mein yahan kaise aai main tooo.....ohh..raat ko drink kuch zyaada he ho gai thi....anyways she got up freshes up and then leaves for the breakfast.....
hello mom ..hi dad.....hi ridhima beta kaise ho...???
perfectly fine dad .....then her mon serves her breakfast and thenn...
ridhima beta hamay tum se kuch baat karni hai...
yess dad...said ridhima busy in eating breakfast
ridhima tumhare liye ek rishta aaya hai..ladka buhat accha hai..doctor hai..aur hum nai wo rishta manzoor kar liya hai....
what.....aap nai mujh se pooche bagair kaise....πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
beta ridhima..hum nai aaj tak tumhe kisi cheez se nahi roka but now not more hum note kar rahe hain ke aap apne friends ke beech reh kar bigarti jaa rahi hain...
but...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
no but...wo log aaj aa rahe hai... and you be ready in a salwar kameez thats it.....
......ridhima on phone....
but vicky u know i hate marriages ..i just cant take this...
oh dont worry darling...shaadi he to karni hai karlo..who cares ke uss ke baad kya...you enjoy your life and just avoid yaar wo doctor hai to definitly ek bore person he ho gaa...usse patients aur medicines ke illawa aur kuch nahi dikahai deta ho gaa..just use him..otherwise agar tumhare parents aur ghussa ho gai..to u know problem ho sakti hai...
kaisi problem...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•????
jaise kisi aise se shaadi jise tum nacha na sako aur u know fainancinal problems aur iss tarah tumhare colourful life kahin black and white naa ho jaye darling....
ummmm ...yess u r right...to done shaadi hogi...but just to rid out of this matter and then i'll mind my own bussiness and tell the person not to interfere in my life...right????
right...ok bye vicky i'll talk to u later mujhe tayyar hona hai..wo stupid salwaarkameez pehenna hai😑
bye
bye..then she cuts off the phone and went inside to get ready....
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armaan: fine mom dad mein nai aap kibaat maan li lekin mein uss ladki ko dekhne nahi jaaon gaa....that is my condition
fine beta lekin tum usse kyun nahi dekhna chahte...???
rahul interupts...unty itni mushkil se mana hai uss app par bharosa hai..agar mr..ka sar fir se phir gaya to problem ho jaye gii...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
fine beta ..hum ja rahe hai... and they leaves...
kahan phass gaya..sighed armaan and rahul smiles 😊
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so guys, this was part 1 i know a short one but i hope that you'll enjoy reading it....plzz do comment after reading this as your comments mean alot to me.sorry if i had made any mistakes and plz give me suggestions also if you have.....
love,
sameera😊
Edited by sameera_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY ITS AN AWSME FIC πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰PLZ CNTINUE SUN ND DO PM ME..........LUV ANU😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey wow ... part 1 is good. Sounds like an interesting plot. And it will be great to see love evolving here. Please do add me to your PM list.
 
Cheers,
Suvarna
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey cool update.. part1 was fab.. i luved it.. very interesting.. Plzz continue n dont forget to put me onto ur PM list............
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part=plzzzz cont soon !!!
 
nd do PM me if  can=)