~|Royal Love-Numbed wid Pain|*VeEraFF*|~Note_49~ - Page 5

Too good yaar👏eager to read further plz update soon

lovely part Madhu..

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

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well, the 1st part seemed long, but after reading it, it became like a short text 😛 Oh...rilli...God..I knw I knw posting Quotes so many days afta the actual post buh still today em free n like I want u all to knw tht em not a t all ignoring u..not at all..IT's just tht em vry busy buh now em commenting from the vry start to last...

well.. so veer is painfully suffering for his wife.. 😛 that thing is amazingly expressed, i mean, the whole, saying that he deserves it, and hurting himself, and illusions and anger and all.. lol... he is really in a pityful state.  Hmmm..U knw wht archu..U too described it wonderfully..Like writin long texts is easy..summarizing it in few wrds is hrd n u did tht..seriously awesum..

 

nice interactions between him and sia, so cute! well... its cute their relationship, Yup..now, the dias werent cute, they were sour.. vry vry..U knw they r mre like filmy dia's n all..buh thnx to mah hindi I cud frame em all properly..coz they are talking about a sad thing na?..yes..sumfin which is vry vry heart-wrenching.. anyways, keeping back my non sense, Uff...aur kitni baar samjhao apko..It's not non-sense..It's just u'r feelings love...the dias between him, sia, and dharam were nice, i liked the way that bhabhi was caring for her devarji. 👏 😊 😳yup me too..

in next parts, u can add something more of dharam and veer, u know, they are brothers na?.. so some fraternal talk between two boys wud look suitable in this situation too. 😛 Hmmm yes..well It'd be..like em trying to finsih the first five prts sn..coz they the numbed wiv pain prts...afta tht It's Royal Love.. 

aaand... well, the nivritti part was.. omg.. dramatic, but i liked it, i mean, its true na?,wohooohhhhhhh...em so happy u liked it..I too thought way too dramatic.. after marriage, the mother cares more for her bahu that for her son, and after all, he has done something bad, so nivis situation is understable. yes..sumfin rilli bad..😕

 

and wwoooow! the song was just too appropriate for the whole scene! 😃 👏😳😳 haina,..I too thought the same when I listened to it n watched the video..

 

and the video! wow, according perfectly wid the 1st part. ⭐️😃 good choice Madhu. thnxie..Thnx to neel bro the video maker..I jus loved it..Like the first time I heard the sng along wiv the vid..N I thought of takin it..cudn't resist..😳

 

i liked a lot the 1st part, but.. i had a question in my mind whil every second reading the update, wat has veer done? gosh.. 😆 wat happened sooo serious that she has dissapeared for 6 months! 😕 U'd knw..well u knw by now..

 

anyways, thanks for updating dear, great part. 😃 👏

Pleasures all mine signora.....😳 

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Love ya loads archu baby.....t.ccccc

 

 

                                            -Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: asrasrasr

Hi madhu hello dear...sowie neva got time to interact wiv ya properly..

 story started in a complete different fashion than other DV ffs. Awww...yes I guess it is..afta all it's dealing wiv way too diff tins..Like realistic n also afta marriage relationship..Liked it very much. Hope veer and shera are united soon. Hmm they will be united in jus two mre prts..

 

Love ya loads cutie pie.....t.ccccccc

 

 

 

                             -Ur's Ever Madhu😳