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~~Tangled Love~~...pt3/pg1...22/04 (Page 14)

..kashish.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 October 2007
Posts: 7140

Posted: 21 April 2009 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
hey sonu thanks for the; armaan heard her..wonder what will happen...aww...poor him..go muski..even here she is the sherni...cnt wait for the next part..ppls pls pls continue soon! will be waiting for ur next PM

aravi Goldie

Joined: 04 April 2008
Posts: 1177

Posted: 21 April 2009 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
MD !!!!!!!!! dost dost naa raha am so mad wat a wonderful beggining i say!!!!! u updated :((((((((((((( wil get back to ya
no love today :D !!!!!
ps- nij u uthaying fayda of my majboori hmmm actually me sulking in my room with my broken arm within that damn cast n these gurlz in here updated n i had no clueeeeeee so will catch up next time!!!!!
sonia_92 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 October 2007
Posts: 6343

Posted: 21 April 2009 at 10:46pm | IP Logged

indeed very well-written AS ALWAYS!!!
aap ko toh pata hias mein aapki taareef alfaaz mein nahi kar sakti...u make it so hard for me...haha abt itna acha likhogi toh comment karne mein mushkil toh hogi na
chalo as always ek shair:
"tu ne jo cheri yeh dhun,
 dill hua bekhabar duniya se,
 ab tu apni taareef sun,
 meri is tarapti zabaan se"
hope u lyk it
lamba comment baad mein
abhi k liyay hug n kisses...
it ws jus awesummm...u never let it get boring.
infact jab tak pure na parhun sukoon nahi aata...n den i jsu want more n more n more!!!
lots of luv
Robin_M IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 August 2006
Posts: 5709

Posted: 22 April 2009 at 2:21am | IP Logged
sonu finally!!! awwwwwww poor cute champu :(
he was so happy, believing that riddhima was genuine and they were friends...but he heard her laughing about him at the end! im sure hes going to be really hurt now!
but knowing queen ridz she will pacify him somehow, flash a sweet smile and bat her eye lashes! haha
i loved the little eye lock during lab! she finally noticed those gorgeous blue eyes behind the specs! hopefully she will see his pure heart soon as well!
awesome part sonu, please update sooner now :D
spln IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
Posts: 10942

Posted: 22 April 2009 at 2:35am | IP Logged
great part the role reversal of chars here...and ridhima's slow inevitable signs of change and yet not much...very real!!! champu!!!ClapClap
patem031 Senior Member

Joined: 13 October 2007
Posts: 792

Posted: 22 April 2009 at 10:36am | IP Logged
hey, it ws really gd nd luved it whn ridz ws also gettin affected by his eyes
i ws thinkin like ridz tht shud i jst say gud things in the comment bt i decided nt to since yu wnt to improve yur fanfic, bt seriously thrs nofin much to improve cos dis prt ws really superb
continue soon cos i jst luv dis fanfic nd dnt take too lng to update, cos yur precious readers r waitingSmile
prernawaghray IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 March 2007
Posts: 3942

Posted: 24 April 2009 at 6:01am | IP Logged
hey sonu
i thought armaan n ridz r growing close
well thats what the beginning meant
but slowly at the end i realized that it was all a fascade of ridz only to win the bet
i actually thought that she was starting to like armaan atleast as a frnd but alas high hopes i guess
i liked this one
especially the way u showed their growing frndship
it was really good
update soon
Sona_25 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 July 2007
Posts: 4157

Posted: 24 May 2009 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
hey i just read ur ff..its very nyc..
cont soon

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