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Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 (Page 162)

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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Hey Sam, you adding next part now???
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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 2:37pm | IP Logged

Thanks for the PM! :)

 

That was really good! I like how you incorporated Armaan's name, and the whole Greek god part. I enjoying reading this ff the most because of all the literally elements and references you make. I think that's one of the things that set's this fanfic apart from so many others. Your writing style is very unique. We're you ever a thinking of being an english major or an author? I appericate the extra research you do for the small things like Arzoo and Amraan, the orgin of Armaan's name. Overall you're doing a marvelous, stunning and masterful job.

 

You're doing an excellent job, I can't wait for Atul and Anjali's little confrontation, i was a little sad cause i didn't see too much of Raul or Muskaan. I didn't mind, Armaan and Ridimaa's building relationship was nice to observe.

 

Well, continue soon. I'll be waiting for the next part and PM. :)

 

By the way, I know I have asked this before, but can I get a link to see the painting in Ridimaa's Study? I have been wanting to see the painting. Thanks.

 
Once again, continue soon, cause I am on the edge of my seat waiting! ;)
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Edited by ishu124 - 04 February 2009 at 2:41pm
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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 6:50pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Hopes

Wow ..Great Job ..ITs wonderfull... So professional

U are a great writer.. I not very proud to say that  i am a quiet reader most of the time, but couldnt resist commenting on this one...

Its Just wonderfull _ i read the whole story in 1 go with no breaks - Gosh my eyes..


I was wondering if this is the only FF u are writting? any other ones that you have written??? 

I would love to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you

 

Hi there! Welcome to the thread! I am so glad that you have enjoyed the FF and thank you for the wonderful words. I am so glad that you decided to break your silence?there is nothing more delightful than reading the comments on the FF

 

Fortunately, this is the only one that I have written. I don't think I would have managed to write another one! This one is taking its toll on me! Lol!

But its really very sweet of you to ask...HugI hope to see you around more often on the thread!

Edited by bernard shaw - 04 February 2009 at 6:50pm
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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prernawaghray

hey sam
yey finally u updated yar
um so glad that finally 95% of anjali's misconceptions are cleared ufff!!!
but that ankit ********** hes still there
i liked the way anjie apologized yaar
it was seriously courageous of her to do that
n then RM part was chhhooo chweet
oh maannnn esp that classroom conv n when she winks at him awww
finally we will get to read about AR the next part
plz one full part dedicated to AR
it will be a treat to read yaar
update soon
 
 

Hi Prerna, yes, Armaan had done his best to try and tell her that they are just friends short of telling her "I am not in love with you" which you admit is difficult to do unless Anjali herself says something to this effect.

 

Yup it was courageous of Anjali to apologise in public, takes courage.

 

Shall update soon though unfortunately shall not be a full AR part…..but shall try and rectify that later….

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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 6:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by meow23

dat was a brilliant prt.. 22 gud.. i jus luvd d chemistry btwn d two.. brilliantly potrayed... 22 gudd..
thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon
 
You are welcome for the PM and I am glad that you liked the part.....they are just begining to verbalise what they have been feeling for a little while...and once you verbalise realisation and acceptance comes that much faster....
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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by monadarling2628

wow, sam! this has to be the best part that you've wrote upto date. :)
i loved the way ridz teased armaan at the pani puri stall and they way they talked and opened up to each other. i can't wait until part 2 of their date. hopefully, shashank is fine.
thanks for the pm. continue soon and do pm me.
 
mohini :]
 
You are welcome Mohini for the PM! And thanks for the lovely words...I am thrilled that you think thsi si the best part, so I appear to have done a decent job! Shall update soon, sometime durig the day today!
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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by forevercharmed

omg i loved it!! theyre learning so much about each other!! i hope they continue getting close like this!!!! and it was so sweet for armaan to offer to take ridz's dad! pleaseee continue soon!

Avanti
 
Hi Avanti! Am so glad that you liked it! Lik I said earlier, you need the floodgates to be opened once, everything rushes past thereafter! Shall update soon!
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Posted: 04 February 2009 at 6:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SuhanaSafar

Sorry I haven't been able to post a review.  Exam after exam... Unhappy
 
I am keeping up though!  Will post a long comment whenever I get the chance.  Still loving your style!
 
Dont worry! Hope your exams are going well?  Thanks so much!

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