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heyy.....very nice parts!! great intro of characters!! very cute meeting of AR!!! thanx fr the pm and plz cont soon!! <3333

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Onca again fabulous, just loved it, so ammi is gonna help her.
Continue soon
Thnx for the PM

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HIYA DA!!(I DUNNO UR NAME)!!
mann!!dis ws reli so gud...!!
n wat a intro dear..awsum all in all
luvd de f totally...
n AR meeting mann!!superb...luvd it like hella
do cont soon da
n sry 4 de late rly....
cudnt log in ystdy...
THX A TON 4 DE PM
LUV U LTS
CRAZY ASHU

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hey guys tnx sooo much fr ur gr8 cments... well u can call me zanny... m writing the third part cuz i dint go anywhere today so m gonna start writing nw... bubye...
luv ya awl...
zanny...

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Recap: Introduction of other characters' meeting of armaan and ridhima'

 

3rd part'

University:

Armaan had left the woman at her house and was now in the university' he was still thinking abt the girl he had met' kitni khubsurat thi who' ek pari se kam na thi' he was so lost that he did not notice the other gang come and sit with him'

Ra: array armaan kahan gaya tha?? (Noticing him lost, he tapped him but armaan dint respond') to others: guys wats wid him??

Mu: abhi yeh gaya kahan tha??

An: array atul tum kuch keh rahay thay na k yeh kahin gaya hai'

At: han who raima was saying' (but he was interrupted by every one else "RAIMA KON???") array wohi jo is k liye diwani hai' she went after him aur who bata rai thi k principle sir ne isko apni biwi ko lene railway station bheja hai'

Mu: han to wahan isko koi larki mil gayyi hogi' waise bhi humara armaan hero hai hero' shayad isko apni heroin mil gayyi hogi!!! ( saying this she pats him reli hard on the back by which he came out of his trance' but every one was talking abt him and dint notice him active)

At: han meri anjali jaisi koi beautiful'

An: shut up atul!!!

Ra: array han yaar' ho sakta hai isko apni heroin mil gayyi ho aur yeh'

Armaan interrupts: sorry to interrupt ur cozy conversation lekin aisa kuch nai huwa' mein to papers k baray mein soch raha tha'

(muskaan starts teasing him by asking the truth and they all start teasing him')

Railway station:

Ridhima was walking out of the station when she heard

O soniye us larke k bahoun mein to kho gayyi thi ab humari bahoun mein bhi ajao'

When she turns she sees the same man who had whistled on her and armaan earlier' she starts walking fastly and got out of the station, hired a taxi and went away'

Night time:

Ridhima did not know where to go' the taxi driver was asking her agn and agn where to go' at last he got tired and said "Madam agar aap ko kahin nai jana to utar jayie mujhe apna kaam karna hai subha se aap mujhe tang kar rai hain" ridhima pays him and gets out' the driver had left her on a very lonely and dark place and she got scared and thought to ask the driver to leave her in a more crowded place but he was gone' suddenly it started raining and a bright flash of yellow light collided wid her face' she was startled with it and closed her eyes but felt pair of hands holding  her frm both the sides' frightened she opened her eye and saw two men frm the same gang who were shouting at her on the railway station' she kicked then hard and ran away but b4 she cud go more far she was caught again by them' she shouted reli loud fr help but as the street was totally empty no one came' sum gundas were holding ridhima and forcing her into a jeep when a strong muscular hand gripped one of them frm the back' when the gundas turned he punched them one by one until they all ran away and drove out of the street' ridhima was crying hard and sitting on the earth when the man kneeled down by her and wrapped his jacket around her' she raised her head "aap''..?" and became unconscious.

Same Time Armaan's House'

Armaan was still thinking abt the gurl' her face flashed in front of his eyes and he smiled widely and agn got lost in his thoughts' his thoughts flashed and he thought abt him and ridhima married <flash> ridhima pregnant <flash> their children <flash> present agn' he smiled at his stupid thought magar mujhe to us ka naam bhi nai pata' shaking his head he turned to sleep as he had an important practical early the next day'

Ridhima's side:

Ridhima was lying in a well furnished bedroom and by the look of it the house belonged to a splendidly rich man' a dim light was on and a slow sound of discussion was coming frm outside' she slowly opened her eyes and looked around' firstly she could not remember anything but then later she started to get flashbacks frm the earlier events' a tear escaped her eyes and the she thought abt her luggage and looked around' it was there at the corner of the room' then she looked at the wall clock and saw that it was 3 am' at the same time last night she had ran away frm home and what happened to her in 24 hrs' she started crying and thought abt the man who had helped her' yeh zarur usi ka ghar hoga' she turned her head to see where this man was but found no one' then she heard sme sound outside the room' she started to climb out of bed but fell down' hearing the noise the two men frm outside ran in' one was a doctor by the look of his coat and other one was the man who had helped her' "doctor aap jayie mein sambhal loun ga'" as the doctor went he picked her up and placed on the bed' hour later when she agn opened her eyes she saw him standing by the window' she started to sit up but the man said "aap leti rahiye mein ata houn" when he turned she was taken aback by surprise' her eyes opened wide and her mouth took an oval shape'

Ri (stuttering): s..s's..ir aap?? Aap to the famous company PANACHE ke owner hain na???

(Well yes hez mister Modi' urgh I so hate him!!!!)

 Md: han mein houn magar aap araam kijiye aap ko bohot tez bukhar hai'

Ridhima thought abt her opportunity to enter the fashion world but then she thought abt the last day and started crying' seeing this modi went to her and comforted her'

Md: aap ro q rai hain?? Mujhe aap yahan ki nai lagtein with that luggage and all'

Ri: ji' mein chandigurh ki houn aur''. (She started telling her story that hw she ran away and all of it. when she ended')

Md: aap tension na lein' aap aj raat yahin aram karein hum kal subha baat karein ge' ok?

Ri: ji sir'thankyou sir'

With this she lied down and modi closed the lights and went out of the room'

                     ********* End of this part **********

 

Ok' a suuuuuuuuuuuper long part and nw m taking a break frm it' thank you agn fr cments and plz cment agn'. Bubye'

Edited by ~*evil zanny*~ - 10 December 2008 at 6:46am

kashishk

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Posted: 10 December 2008 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Fabulous part just loved it, great going.
The think i don't like that girl make lie to go to film line or even they went against to their parents, anyways it's rocking.
Continue soon
Thnx for the PM


Kashish

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Posted: 10 December 2008 at 7:15am | IP Logged
no its like ridhima is reli stubborn and she can go to any extent to let her dreemz be fulfilled.... and its like the frst tym m writing sumthing other than compositions in papers so it happens... but tnx ya... i can include sum ridhima and her father part in the next one... tnx...

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