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Posted: 16 December 2008 at 11:48pm | IP Logged

Recap : Shera reached to sumaiya

 Yahan jangal ke raste gujar rahi shera maan me keh rahi thi 'veer ab bhi muze tum utnahi pyar karte ho. Muze maaf kar dena. Lekin jab tak main mera kuch wajud(identity) nahi bana lu tab tak main tumse nahi mulungi. Aur who sumaiya ke raste ke aur badhne lagi.

 Yaha sumaiya ke mehel mein maharaj rudra pratap ko sevak sandesh laya ke Aswai dakoo Sardar(Shera's baba) ke yaha se koi unhe milne aaya hai. Maharaj rudrapratap ko 15years pehele ki baat yaad aa gayi rajkumari ananya ko dakoo utha ke lekar gaye. Woh dhan sampatti den eke liye taiyar hokar bhi unko unki beti wapas nahi mili thi. itne mein rani sumitra bhi maharaj ke kaksh mein aa gayi . Sevak shera ko lekar Maharaj ke kaksh mein chod gaaye. Shera ne maharaj ko apni pehchan batayi. Rani sumitra ke aakho se aasu behne lage. Shera ki bhi aankhe unhe dekhkar bhar aayi. Rani shera ke aur badhne hi wali thi ke maharaj garaj pade ke rani toh mamta ke bahav mein beh rahi hai lekin tum koho tumhare paas koi sabut hai kya. Shera ne unhe baba ne use di hue rajmudrika di aur saari baat batayi.Toh raani sumitra khush ho gayi aur shera ko gale lagaya. Lekin maharaj phir garaj pad ke yeh rajmudra toh koi chori bhi kar sakta hai. Toh raani sumitra tilmilakar boli lekin koi kaise hamari ananya ki bachpan ki nishani apne kandhe pe la sakta hai. Yeh hamari beti ananya hi hai yeh dekhiye uske kandhe pe yeh janm se hi  jo nishan (birthmark) tha. Yeh sunkar maharaj rudra pratap ko vishwas ho gaya ke yehi rajkumari ananya hai. Unke bhi aakho se khushi ke aasu jhalak pade ke itane saalo ke baad hi sahi unki beti unhe wapas mil gay. Unhone shera ko pyar se gale lagaya  rani sumitra bhi bohot khush thi. ab shera, shera nahi rahi sundar rajkumari ananya ho gayi thi uska rahen-sehen, pehnawa, taur-tarike sab kuch ek rajkumari ke tarah ho gaya tha. Aur ab use jald se jald veer se milne ki chah lagi thi.

 

Rajkumari ananya (ab hum use shera nahi kahenge) soch mein pad gaayi ke veer ke bare mein maa pitaji ko kaise kahe. Lekin kehna toh hoga hi so who diraj karke maharaj rudrapratap ke kaksh ke aur chal padi. Mahraj  or raani dono apne kaksh mein uske bare mein hi baat kar rahe the. Rani Sumitra maharaj rudrapratap se keh rahi thi "Ananya ab vivah yogya ho gayi hai aur hume ananya ke liye ek accha sa rajkumar dundh ke uski shaadi karni chahiye" toh maharaj ne kaha "lekin ananya toh abhi chhoti hai aur abhi toh humne use paaya hai itani jaldi hum use door nahi bhejna chahte hai.  Rani sumitra ne unhe samjate hua kaha "maharaj her pita ko uski beti chhoti hi lagti hai lekin ek na ek din hume use vida karna padta hai." Mahraja ne kaha "yeh baat toh aap thik keh rahi ho" itane mein ananya waha dakhal hui (aise toh usne kaksh ke bahar se yeh saari baaten sun li  thi aur maan hi maan mein khush hui thi ke use veer ke baare mein batane ka mauka mil gaya hai) rani ma ne use dekhkar kaha "aao beti hum tumhare baare mein hi baat kar rahe the.  Hum tumhare liye yogya var dhundh rahe hai. Kya tumhare maan mein koi hai" Yehi mauka paakar ananya ne unse veer ke baare mein bata diya. Yeh sunkar maharaj bole "Hamne bhi uske baare mein suna hai. Who bohot shur hai. Usne ache achho ko haraya hai. Hame khushi hai ke tumne yogya jeevansaathi chuna hai. Hum aaj hi aryanagar sandesa bhej dete hai.

 

Jab doot sandesh lekar nikla toh ananya ne use bulaya aur sandesh lekar padh liya aur use jaane ke liye kaha.

 

Yaha aryanagar ke mehel mein sumaiya se ek dut sandesh lekar aaya tha. Aur maharaj dharam se milne ki pratisha kar raha tha. Lekin veer aa gaya toh vahi use milne chala gaya. Veer ne doot se kaha ke main dharam ka bhai hu aur tum muze sandesha de sakte ho. Pehele toh doot use ek tak dekhne laga aur phir usne veer se kaha ke woh sandesha sirf maharaj dharam ko dega. Yeh baat sunkar veer ko bohot gussa aaya usne kaha 'bohot badtamiz ho' toh doot ne jawab diya ke woh sirf apna kaam kar raha hai. Veer use aur kuch kahe itne main dharam ne unhe dekh liya aur man mein sochne laga ke shera aur veer ke aise hi zagde hua karte the aur woh unhe mitane ka kaam karta tha. Phir dharam ne veer ko kaha ke tum jao main dekhta hu kya sandesha hai. Veer vaha se chala gaya. Dharam ne doot ko aadar se baithne ke liye kaha aur uski puri baat suni aur sandesh bhi pada aur uttar mein sumaiya ke mahraaj rudra pratap ka nimantran swikar kiya.

 

Rajkumari ananya raat mein apne mehel mein bichone pe lete lete (lying on bed) maan mein soch rahi thi ke kaab dharam aur veer sumaiya aayenge. Lekin doot ban ke hi sahi veer ko dekhne ki ichha toh puri karli humne. Bhalehi veer ne hum ko pehchana nahi ho aur yahi accha hai. Toh hum veer ko kuch tang toh kar sakte hai. Aur who apne hi maan mein khush ho gayi.

 

Precap : DV n Sia coming to Sumaiya



Edited by RTMCFAN - 16 December 2008 at 11:49pm

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Posted: 17 December 2008 at 1:30am | IP Logged
wohoooooo
gazab update tha yaar..mar java soniye
it was such a sweet update..jus loved it..sanyo lukin so beautifull..umm sowie not sanyo, its shera aka ananya..em sowie buh I like or shud say love shera much mre than ananya...
 
kkk..bac to the update...wohoo..she went to meet him in disguise..kya ladki hai..n she fightin wiv him..n he doesn't recognize her...buh then he does love her...
well plzzz arequest..thoda drama lana isme..like when veer gets the message that sumaiya se ek sandesh aaya hai uske vivah ke prastav lekar..he can be shown reluctant n like nahi karni mujhe koi ladki pasand ..n then how evryone forces him..buh he still says he loves shera only...n then sumaiya mein he meets shera..buh like he doesn't see her face n wants to tell a straight no..n then she like probes him to tell who is the oder gal..why doesn't he want to marry at all..who is the gal he likes..n all..n then when he confesses his deep love for her..she turns n tells em shera n all...wohoooo..
U a g88888888888888 writer n I know u'd write beautiully..jus like my hpes to see sumfin of tis kind...
 
kkk..long compli..
Do cont asap.....
Love ya loads......t.cccccccc
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 17 December 2008 at 6:33am | IP Logged
that was fantabulous update
jus loved it...
so ananya (shera) went to meet veer in disguise... sooo sweet..
mind blowing update yaar...
 
do cont  asap...
 
 
                          esha

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Posted: 17 December 2008 at 8:57am | IP Logged
its amazing dear
awesome
plz cont

xoxcuddlesxox

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Posted: 17 December 2008 at 9:00am | IP Logged
amazing update crnt wait 4 next update

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Posted: 17 December 2008 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
lovly update cant wait for next part update soon

sosweetsumi

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Posted: 17 December 2008 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Hi dear,
 
sorry don't know ur real name but must say cool fic haaan. puri filmi story hai but still evrone likes it and me love it.
 
i request can i suggest u sumthing.
 
its always shera had lied to veer that she is rajkumari ananya but now that she is in real a rajkumari kyun na isse aur mazedaar kar de.
 
like say veer whan pahuche aur ananya ko dekha shera pretenmd to not ot reconize him . such that ki wo pretend kare ki wo kissi shaer ko nahin janti aur shera uski humshaal uski judwaa behen hai jise dakoo le gaye the . she will be diffrent just like sanyogita prankster and funny.wo veer ke pyaar ka test bhi le sakti hai.
 
veer confuse ho jaye kabhi lage ki ow shera hai aur kabhi ki ow shera nahin hai.
 
aur to aur dharam bhi shera ka saath de.
 
mazaaa agayega.
 
will love to see u update soon.
 
sumi

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