‘Kahani puri filmi hai’VS(lovestory-vivahtak)end - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago

This content was originally posted by: cute_madhu
wohoooooo
gazab update tha yaar..mar java soniye

it was such a sweet update..jus loved it..sanyo lukin so beautifull..umm sowie not sanyo, its shera aka ananya..em sowie buh I like or shud say love shera much mre than ananya...

kkk..bac to the update...wohoo..she went to meet him in disguise..kya ladki hai..n she fightin wiv him..n he doesn't recognize her...buh then he does love her...

well plzzz arequest..thoda drama lana isme..like when veer gets the message that sumaiya se ek sandesh aaya hai uske vivah ke prastav lekar..he can be shown reluctant n like nahi karni mujhe koi ladki pasand ..n then how evryone forces him..buh he still says he loves shera only...n then sumaiya mein he meets shera..buh like he doesn't see her face n wants to tell a straight no..n then she like probes him to tell who is the oder gal..why doesn't he want to marry at all..who is the gal he likes..n all..n then when he confesses his deep love for her..she turns n tells em shera n all...wohoooo..

U a g88888888888888 writer n I know u'd write beautiully..jus like my hpes to see sumfin of tis kind...

kkk..long compli..

Do cont asap.....

Love ya loads......t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Thank u so much for liking this part. thanks for sugessions. N yes me thinking like u. n u will find it more spicy.😉😳😳 but in classic way as u said.

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hiri , ektay11 ,xoxcuddlesxox, kiran99 Thanks u so much for likeing this part but did u like me added pics dhundhne mein bohot mehnat ki hai😃Edited by RTMCFAN - 15 years ago

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This content was originally posted by: sosweetsumi
Hi dear,

sorry don't know ur real name but must say cool fic haaan. puri filmi story hai but still evrone likes it and me love it.

i request can i suggest u sumthing.

its always shera had lied to veer that she is rajkumari ananya but now that she is in real a rajkumari kyun na isse aur mazedaar kar de.

like say veer whan pahuche aur ananya ko dekha shera pretenmd to not ot reconize him . such that ki wo pretend kare ki wo kissi shaer ko nahin janti aur shera uski humshaal uski judwaa behen hai jise dakoo le gaye the . she will be diffrent just like sanyogita prankster and funny.wo veer ke pyaar ka test bhi le sakti hai.

veer confuse ho jaye kabhi lage ki ow shera hai aur kabhi ki ow shera nahin hai.

aur to aur dharam bhi shera ka saath de.

mazaaa agayega.

will love to see u update soon.

sumi

Thank u so much for reading, liking, commenting on my ff and also for suggessions. i will surely add them in my ff😳

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This content was originally posted by: ektay11
😭😭dear ur story is d way i wanted in dv but unfortunately sagrz can never understand
i love ur ff

plz cont

keep it up

Kya kare me also so started this ff. hope u enjoying it n getting what u didn't got in sagar's serial😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

This content was originally posted by: RTMCFAN

Kya kare me also so started this ff. hope u enjoying it n getting what u didn't got in sagar's serial😉

haan dear😃😳

i love it

and i love the pix too😳😳

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haan dear😃😳

i love it

and i love the pix too😳😳

Thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhh😃

Me going to add pics n next part also😳

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This content was originally posted by: RTMCFAN

Thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhh😃

Me going to add pics n next part also😳

thats gr8

thanx a lot😳

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Recap : DV n Sia coming to Sumaiya

Sandesha milne ke dusare din hi dharam ne maharaj aryavardhan aur nivriti bua se yeh baat chhedi ke sumaiya se sandesh mila hai aur maharaj rudrapratap ne hame mitrata ke liye nimantrit kiya hai. Aur unki beti rajkumari ananya aur veer ke vivah ka prastav bhi rakha hai. Suna hai ke wah bohot sundar hai aur use sabhi prakar ki kalaye aati hai. Nritya, gayan yahan tak ke Talvarbaji bhi achhi kar leti hai. Veer ke liye ekdam yogya hai. Hum toh sumaiya jaa rahe hai do rajyo mein dosti badane ke liye aur saath mein veer ko lekar jana chahte hai lekin wah manega nahi bua kya aap use manayegi. Nivriti ko yeh sunkar bohot khushi hui aur usne kaha ha main veer ko tumhare saath jane ke liye jaroor manaongi lekin tumhe bhi meri madad karni padegi. Phir dono veer ke kaksh mein gaye nivriti ne veer se khushi khushi sumaiya ke nimantran ki aur vivah ke prastav ki baat kahi. Yeh bhi kaha ke rajkumari ananya bohot sundar hai aur sabhi guno se sampanna hai. yeh baat sunkar veer ne aane se saaf mana kar diya aur kaha jis rajya ka doot itna badtamiz ho toh na jaane rajkumari kaisi hogi. Aur jaha tak shaadi ki baat hai toh wah sirf shera se pyar karta hai aur karta rahega aur shaadi nahi karna chahta hai. Nivi maa bohot udaas hogaayi aur uske aankho mein aasoo aa gaaye. Yeh dekhkar veer ko bohot bura laga. Yeh dekhkar dharam ne veer se kaha nivriti bua ke liye hi sahi chalo isbahane tumhara maan bhi behel jayega. Aur dharam ne use yeh kehkar mana liya ki yeh rajya se hum mitrata karenge toh hamare Pradesh ki seemaye bhi surakshit rahengi. Aur nivriti bua se vaada bhi kar liya ke isbaar woh veer ko shaadi ke liye jaroor mana lega.

Yaha sumaiya mein Ananya ne maharaj aur raani maa ko Veer se yeh batane se maana kar diya ke woh shera hai. Usne maharaj aur raani maa se kaha ke woh khud use yeh baat batayegi lekin tab tak koi use yeh baat nahi batayega. Dekhte hai ke who muze pehchanta hai ke nahi. Toh maharaj haskar achha aisehi sahi lekin usne agar nahi pehchana toh. Ananya ne kaha phir bhi main khud use yeh baat bataungi.

Dusare hi din aryanagar se saab nikal kar sumaiya rajya mein aa puhche. Unka bohot achhi tarah se swagat hua. Sab khulkar baat kar rahe the hasi mazak chal raha tha. Sirf rajkumari ananya apna chehra ghunghat mein chhipaye hue thi. yeh dekhkar veer maan mein sochne laga khud ko pari samazti hai isliye apne aap ko ghunghat mein chhipa rakha hai. Ghamandi kahi ki. Muze toh yeh pehele se pata tha jis rajya ke doot hi itna badtamiz hoga us rajya ki rajakumari itani ghamandi hi hogi. Dharma maharaj rudrapratap ke saath jaroori baate karne chala gaya. Sia went with rani sumitra baas veer aur ananya hi akele bache the. Veer bhi nikalne wala tha ke ananya ne use kaha ke aap toh mere sath baith kar baat kar sakte hai. Toh veer kuch sankoch se hi waha baith gaya. Phir ananya ne kaha: "suna hai apki koi dakoo dost thi" yeh sunkar veer ko bohot gussa aa raha tha lekin woh chup baitha tha. Ananya Veer ko janbuz ke uksa rahi thi. "woh dakoo dikhane mein kaisi thi" Veer gusse ko kabu mein rakhkar ke bola"bohot sundar thi" Ananya ne pucha "kahi aap usase pyar toh nahi kar baithe" Toh Veer ne thode gusse se kaha "Hai main usase pyar karta hu" Veer ko gussa hote dekh ananya ko maza aa raha tha aur andar se khush bhi ho rahi thi ke veer use kitna pyar karta hai. Veer ka gussa badhta dekh subject change karne ke liye kaha "suna hai woh talwar baji bhi achhi karleti thi aur aap bhi achhi talwarbaji karte hai" Ab veer apne gussa se pe kaabu nahi rakh paa raha tha lekin dharam ne use nikalne se pehele hi samzaya tha ke waha kisi par bhi gussa mat karna hum do rajyo ke bich dosti karne ja rahe hai Wah baat yaad karke usne apne gusse pe kabu rakhte hue kaha "humne suna hai ke talwarbaji aap bhi achhi kar leti hai" toh ananya ne jawab diya "ha kyon nahi kahiye toh ek baaji ho jaye" Veer ko usmein koi dilchapi nahi thi toh usne talne ke liye keh diya "nahi muze koi talwarbaji nahi karni hai ab main yaha se jaana chahunga" Aur wah uthkar jaane laga toh ananya boli "Lagta hai aap harne se darte hai" to veer ne gusse se kaha "veer ne harna kabhi sikhahi nahi" jawab mein ananya ne kaha ke "hume bhi hamesha jithi hasil ki hai. Toh kal aap se milte hai talwarbaaji ke liye" Veer ne kaha "thik hai."

Sham ko Dharam apne kaksh mein taiyar ho raha tha. Veer vaha pahucha to use taiyar hote dekh usese pucha ke voh itna ban than kar kaha jara hai. Kya hame aryanagar lautna hai kya. Toh dharam ne kaha Nahi rajkumari ananya bohot achha gaati hai aur sham ko hume geet sunanewali hai. Hum wahi jaane ke liye taiyar ho rahe hai. Kyat um nahi aa rahe ho jald tumbhi taiyar ho jao. Aur tumhe aryanagar lautne ki bohot jaldi hai. Kya tumhe in sab se milkar khushi nahi hui. Hame toh sabhi bohot ache lage maharaj rudrapratap, maharani sumitra aur khas kar ke rajkumari ananya bohot sunder aur sushil hai. Bohot milansar(friendly) aur mrudubhashi(softspoken) bhi hai. Dharam khush hokar bola toh veer ananya ke taarif sunkar gusse se bola "maharaj aur maharani toh bade ache hai lekin unka ek bhi gun usmein nahi hai. Lagta beti kuch sikhaya nahi ulta laad se bigad ke rakha hai. Apne aap ko kya samajti hai. Ghamandi kahi ki. Aur yeh bhi sunlo ke main kuch uska gaana sunane aanewala nahi hu. Tumne muze yaha aane ke liye jid karke mana liya aur main tumhare liye maan bhi gaaya lekin abhi main tumhare saath us ghamandi rajkumari ananya ka geet sunane nahi aaonga. Toh dharam ne kaha thik hai jaisi tumhari marji. Aur use jaate dekh maan mein hi muskuraya.

Yaha nritya-gayan kaksh mein sabhi aa gaye the. Veer ko Dharam ke saath nahi dekhkar maharaj ne dharam se pucha rajkumar veer nahi aaye. Toh dharam ne bahana bana diya ke use gaayan mein koi dilchapi nahi. Yeh sunkar shayad unko talwarbaji mein hi dilchapi hai. Kuch hi der mein ananya ne gana gaane shuru kar diya. Veer apne kaksh mein jaag hi rakha tha. Use neend nahi aa rahi thi. Wah bahar corridor mein aa gaaya aur tehlne laga. Hawa ka ek halka sa zonka aaya aur uske saath use ananye ke gaane ki awaz sunayi di. Gaane mein bohot dard mehsoos ho raha tha

Sunn sunn sheetal jhonke pawan ke
Jaa tu mera prem doot ban ke
Preetam se kahiyo dukhe mere mann ke
Naa hasna, na bolna
Naa koi saaj singaar
Ke un bin kacho na suhaave ho
Pardesi pi ki yaad sataave ho

(sune re megha from PRC)

Jaise ke pawan ka zonka veer ko ananya ka sandesh hi pohocha raha ho. Use ananya ki baate yaad aayi aur shera ki yaade taza ho gayi. Yaha ananya bhi veer ke saath bitaye hue lamhe yaad kar rahi thi. veer maan mein soch raha tha gaati toh achha hai. Kal pata chalega talwarbaji bhi aati hai ke nahi. Itane mein gaana khatam hone ki aur saab ke wah wah ki awaje sunayi di. Veer apne kaksh mein jaakar yeh sochte sochte so gaya ke ananya aur shera mein kitani baate milti hai.

Dusare din subah veer ne aakhe kholi toh dekha uske saamne shera khadi thi aur muskura rahi thi lekin usne kapde ananya jaise pehen rakhe the.

veer sochne laga ke mein yeh kaisa sapna dekh raha hu yeh saab kal ke sochne ka asar hai jo muze aise saab dikh raha hai. Aur usne ankhe bandh karli aur phir se sone ki koshish karne itane mein use dharam ki awaj sunayi di. Dharam veer ke kaksh mein aa puhucha tha aur use utha raha tha. Veer utho yeh hamre aryanagar ka mehel nahi hai sumaiya hai aur ham yaha mehman hai. Yeh sunkar veer badi naaraji se utha aur apne shera ke sapne ke baare mein kaha. Wah sunkar Dharam bahar ki taraf dekhkar hasne laga(bahar ananya bhi chupke se has rahi thi kyo ki wahi veer ko dekhne liye uske kaksh mein gaayi thi aur veer ko jagte hue dekhkar waha se bhag nikli thi) aur kal ke ananya ke gaane ki taarif karne laga. Usase veer ko yaad aaya ke use rajkumari ananya ke saath talwarbaji ke liye ha ki hai. Veer ne dharam se kaha ke use ananya ke saath talwarbaaji ke liye jana hai. Yeh baat sunkar dharam ne veer se kaha veer hum yaha mitrata ke liye aaye hai aur tum talwarbaji kar rahe ho. To veer ne gusse se kaha ke yeh tumhari rajkumari ananya ki echha hai use apne aap pe bohot ghamand hai aur aaj mein uska ghamand tod kar hi rahunga. Aur wah talwarbaji ke liye taiyar hone ke liye chal pada aur dharam apne kaksh mein chala gaya.

Precap : Veer goes for talwarbaji with ananya.

Edited by RTMCFAN - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

lovly update as usual cant wait for long update soon

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 15 years ago

Good one

shera don't leave a single chance to tease veer.gr8888888888888 going .

do continue.

here are the suggestion u wanted for the shaadi part don't know how much correct i am but here u go:

OKKK i am also not much in the shaadi scene but yes there few rasams like firstly the jaimala part where the couple exchange garalands then gathbandan part where usually brides sister or sister in law ties the bond. then the pheras where they take oaths taking fire god as the witness .these are 7 pheras for prosperity , love respect family harmony children etc. int the first 6 pheras boy takes the lead while in last one girl takes lead as in this vacahan girl takes the oath to protect his husband from death if ever a moment comes then she shud be the first one to die that also beeing a suhagan.int he whole wedding boy promises to protect girks honour , reapect her cherish her , shera all his wealth , sorrows and happiness with her. whiel promises ot maintain family harmony tearting his in laws as her parents his siblings as her her own. providing him healthy children and taking care of his family. also shring his all sorrwos and happiness. last but not the least the sindoorr dhan and magal sutra part.and finally kanyadhaan by brides father. u can also describe mandap her jeweelry and wedding .

this is as far as my knowlege for the wedding goes. aslo there are some after marraige rasam like bidaayi , grah pravesh ,aaarti by the groom's mother ,kul devi pooja by the newly weds .mooh deikhyai of the new dulhan then dwaaar chaikyai usually doen by bidergroon sister in law here by sia only when veer is going to enter in ananya room.

hope u lkie my suggestions okkkk byeeeeeeeee

sumi

Edited by sosweetsumi - 15 years ago

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