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interestin FF pls do continue...

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Originally posted by RTMCFAN

@cute_madhu @hiri @ektay11  @jigs_b Thanks for reading n commenting on my ff
 
my pleasure deary..I love readin fics by buddin writers like u..U write in a classic way...easy goin n I love that....
 
Plzzzzzzz cont asap...
 
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Wow shera in a sacrificing mode. Liked the update. Please make the misunderstanding go away soon.

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Recap : Shera's baba return ghayal

 

Yaha ek din shera ke baba laute toh ghayal hokar hi. Shera unko ghayal dekhkar shocked ho gayi. Ab tak uske baba ko chhune ki kisiki himmat nahi hue thi. shaayd iski jimmedar who khud hai. Kaash woh unke saath jaati toh yeh saab nahi hota. Yeh baat usne baba ko kahi toh unhone kaha ismein tumhari koi galti nahi. Jahan apne saath chhod dete hai wahan auro ka kya. Toh shera ne kaha aisa kyu keh rahe ho baba. Baba ne shera se kaha "Haa beti mere apne giroh ke aadmi ne muze kamjor paakar muzpe hamla kiya hai. Yeh toh hona hi tha. Ab mera anta samay aa gaaya hai tume tumhe ek saach batana chahta hu ke tum meri beti nahi ho' Shera is so shocked she says to baba ke aap yeh kya keh rahe ho? Baba say " yahi sach hai maine maharaj rudrapratap ki beti ko agwa kiya tha aur paise ki baat chal hi rahi thi ke meri patni ko tumpar mamta umad padi hume koi santan nahi hone ke wajah se humne tumhe maharaj rudra ko wapas den ke bajaye apne paas hi rakh liya. Ab tum yaha se jaldi chali jao nahi toh giroh ke aadmi tumhe bhi nahi chhodenge. Aur shera ke haath ek anguthi dekar kaha 'yeh rajmudra leker maharaj rudra ko dikha dena unko tumpe akin ho jaayega.' Shera rone lagi aur kehne lagi ke main apko chhod kar kahi bhi nahi jaungi. Baba ne badi mushik to shera ko kaha ke who jaldi se yaha se nikal jaaye giroh ke admi  aatehi honge. Woh akele unke saath nahi lad payegi. Jaldi nikal jao baghwan tumhari raksh kare" yeh kah kar unhone pran chhod diye. Itne mein giroh ke aadmiyo ka shor use sunayi diya aur who rajmudrika lekar bade dukhi maan se baba ko chhodkar bhag nikali. Lekin woh log Shera ka picha karne lage.

 

Yaha veer daure se laut hi raha tha. Jangal ke raste se gujarte hau use Shera dikhayi di who 7-8 aadmiyo se lad rahi thi. lekin uski takat kuch kaam pad rahi thi.

veer turant uski madad ke liye aagaya aur don ne  bohoto ko maar giraya kuch bhag gaye. Shera aur veer ekdusare ko saamne paakar achambit (shocked surprise) ho gaye. Is beech jo dakoo bhag gaye the unhi se ek ne shera ke pith pe khanjar mar diya shera ghayal hokar veer ke bahon mein gir padi. Veer us dakoo ko pakad nahi paaya. Phir usne shera ke pith se khanjar nikala toh woh muchihrt ho chuki thi. Veer use uthat kar madad dundhne laga. Itne mein use ke kutia dikhayi di woh turant use wahan legaya. Us kutia main ek budha aur budhiya the. Veer ne unse madad mangi. Budhiya ne pyar se veer se kaha ke chinta karne ki koi jaroorat nahi. Tum saahi jagah pohoche ho mere pati vaid hai aur tumhari patni jald hi hosh mein aajayegi. Saab kuch thik ho jayega. Aur unho ne turant Shera ka ilaaj shuru kar diya. Vaidji ne veer ko ek kadha diya aur samay samay ke baad shera ko pilane ke liye kaha. Veer raat taak uske thode thode samay ke baad kadha pilata raha shera ke halat mein thoda sudhar dikhayi dene laga. Veer shera ko dekh ke ro raha tha aur keh raha tha'yeh saab kya hua' bhagwan kare tum jalhi thik ho jao' shera thodi hosh mein aarhi thi aur phir se behosh horahi thi. aakhir main use nind lag gaayi. Veer uke sirhane hi batha tha. Budiya ne uske kuch der aaram karne ke liye kaha lekin usne mana kar diya. Subah veer ko thakan ke wajah se halki si nind aa gaayi woh sapna dekh raha tha ke shera usase door ja rahi hai aur woh koshish kar ke bhi use mil nahi paraha hai. Itne main uski nind tut gayi. Usne dekha ke shera wahan nahi thi. usne use puri kutia mein dhunda leki who use nahi mili. Usne vaidji se bhi pucha lekin unhe kuch maloom nahi tha. Veer vaidji ko shrukiriya kehkar shera ko dhundhne nikal pada. Who use dhundhte dhudhte aage nikal kar ek gaon main pohoch gaya. Raste pe kaam hi log the kyoki subhah ka waqt tha. Ek ladki ghunghat odhe pith karke khadi thi veer ne use pucha toh who mud gayi. Usne ghunghat odha hua tha sirf uski aakhe hi dikh rahi thi. veer ne uski aankho mein ekbar dekha aur uski aakhe niche jhuk gayi ke kisi gaon ke ladki ko aise dekhna thik nahi. Veer ne use pucha ke usne kisi ladki ko yaha se gujarte hue dekha hai kya toh usne jawab diya ke use kuch maloom nahi lekin ek rasta gao mein jata hai aur dusra jangle. Shayad woh gaon ke raste gayi ho. Veer ne ukse shukriya kehkar gaon ke raste nikal pada. Lekin woh raste main soch raha tha ke woh ladki jaisi aankhe bohot jaani pehchani lag rahi hai. Aur uske mind main click hua ke woh toh shera ki aankhe thi aur woh shera hi thi. Veer turant jangle ke raste dauda. Lekin shera ko nahi dhundh paaya aur nirash hokar aryanagar laut gaya.

 

Precap : Shera reached to sumaiya



Edited by RTMCFAN - 02 January 2009 at 12:50am

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wowwwwwwww lovely part dear..........
but veer ko kitna hurt kar rahi hai shera...!!!!!!!!!!!1
pls dont do this to cutu veer,,,,shera plssssssssssss
thanx sweetyyyyy
waiting for the next updateSmile

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very nice part yaar
awesome
plz cont

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