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Hi GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't how to write FF or convo I had just narrated. Hope u like it.

 Here I am posting my Fanfick rather Funfick

'Kahani puri filmi hai'Veer Shera(lovestory-vivahtak)

 

We will jump upto DV had return to aryanagar n save AV n nivi n kill jv. dharam told to veer to be king of aryanagar, but veer said no to it n told dharam to be king of aryanagar n he will help him in affairs of rajya. Now shera want to take leave of them as she thinks ke who aur kitni der yaha reh sakti hai bina kaaran ke. So she is going to say bye to all. But dharam said rukh jao shera but shera said I have to go now nivi also tell ke atleast dharam ke rajyabhishek tak toh ruk jao. Kalhi toh hai. The veer listening to this all but can't say any tell shera to stop as maa keh rahi hai to ruk jao Shera thinks in her mind that ek bhi baa aise nehi bol raha hai ke mere liye ruk jao. Then she says ok I will stop till rajyabhishek of dharam.

 

On the day of d's rajyabhishek all were dressed well shera ko toh nivi bohot achhi tarah se ek rajkumari ke tarah sajaya. She looks to pretty as fairy. All gathered in mahal when veer saw shera he couldn't take out his eyes from her. She also seeing veer as he also looking very cute with shaahi poshakh (dress) . Dharam's rajyabhishek had started all r so happy veer danced in celebration n shera also accompanied him.

At night veer told shera I want to talk with u. then shera said-toh kaho veer-yaha nahi akle mein. Then they both come in balkani where no one is there. Veer uska vaha pe intejaar kar rahi thi. Then shera came veer this time also could not take out his eyes on her then she came near to her n said ab kaho kya kehna hai. Veer uske najdik gaya aur use niharte hue kaha ke tum aaj bohot khubsurat lag rahi ho. Listening to this shera blushed. But she got angry with next line as he said ekdum sunhari bandaria and veer started laughing. With this she get very angry said him ke muze tumhare comment ki koi jaroot nahi pehele khud ko dekho bander kahi ke' itane main dharam waha aa gaya n shera leave from there with anger. Dharam said to veer kyo tum hamesha usase ladte rehte ho bechari gussa ho ke chali gayi. Veer told dharam ke use satane mein maza aata hai. Dharam said veer tum bhi na. And they both went. Yaha shera corridor mein chalte hue soch rahi thi ke tum kuch bhi kaho veer lekin tumhe jo kehna tha woh main tumhari aankho mein padh liya hai. Lekin jaise hi woh aage badhi toh use dassiyon ki awaz sunayi di dono usi ke baare main baat kar rahi thi. Toh shera wahi tham gayi aur sunane lagi (Here d is means daasi)

D1 : suna hai shera dakoo hai

D2 : lekin usne saab dakoo ke kaam chod diye hai na

D1 : lekin usase kya farak padta hai rahegi toh aakhir dakoo na

 

Hearing this shera is so hurted n went to her room n saari raat yahi soch rahi thi ke she is not fit for veer.

 

Lekin yaha veer ke kamre mein veer toh kuch aur hi soch raha tha-kyu main shera se kuch keh nahi paya shaayad dharam aa gaya tha is liye. Lekin ab mein der nahi karoonga kal subah hi jaakar shera ko baata dunga ke main use bohot chahta hu. Aur isse itejaar mein so gaya ke kaab subah ho.

 

Precap :

Veer goes to shera's room but didn't find her in room.



Edited by RTMCFAN - 24 January 2009 at 5:31am

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it is realllly interesting... pls pls psl continue...
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very interesting. Nice .ClapClap
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Thank u for liking me updateing next part
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Recap :

Veer goes to shera's room but didn't find her in room.

 

Veer ki aankh subah jara deri se hi khuli aur use yeh pata chala toh woh turant tayaar ho kar shera ke room mein gaya lekin he didn't find Shera in her room. But he find her message lying on her bed. So he take that n read "Hum bina bataye hi jaa rahe hai hume maaf karna Baba ke liye hum jaldi mein jana paad raha hai. Hum sandesh bhejege aur phir milne aayenge. The Veer thinks in his mind ke aaj maine phir se der kar di. Tumhare sandesh ka muze besabri se intejaar rahega shera.

 

Yaha chalte chalte shera sochne lagi ke ab kaise main Veer ke maan se apne aap ko mitane ke liye kya karu. Itne mein uska rasta kisi ne rok liya. Woh Tasha tha usne shera se kaha ke us din toh tum veer ke wajah se baach gayi lekin aaj nahi bachogi tumhe tah kiya hua mera khajane ka hissa muze dena hoga. Toh shera ne use kaha ke main tumhe tumhra hissa den ke liye taiyar hu lekin tumhe mera ek chhota sa kaam karna padega. Tasha agrees ke lekin ab muze phasana nahi.

 

Ek din veer ko shera ka sandesh mil jaata hai ke woh use mata ke mandir mein milne aa rahi hai. Veer ke toh khushi ka thikana nahi raha woh ab main use maan ke saab baat bata dunga yeh sochkar kuch jaldi hi pohoch gaya. Thodi der main shera waha aayi done ne ek dusaare ki khushhali puchhi veer ko laga ke ab muze jaldi se apne pyar ka ekrar kar lena chahiye aur woh kuch kahe itne main Tasha wahan pohoch gaya aur shera se kehne laga tumhari baat hui ke nahi veer se. toh shera ne khushi khushi veer se kaha 'hum tumhe yahi batane aaye ke tash aur meri shaadi ho rahi hai aur mein bohot khush hu' Yeh sunkar veer ka muh ekdam utar gaya lekin badi mushkil se apne chehre pe khushi dikhate hue usne dono ko badhaiya di. Tab Tasha ne shera se kaha ' shera jaldi chalo hume shaadi ka joda bhi toh lena hai' Shera ne muskurate hae veer ko alvida kaha. Aur dono chale gaye. Veer bikhar gaya aur uske aakho se aasoo chhalak pade use shera ke saath bitai hua din yaad aa rahe the. Yaha shera bhi apne aansuo ko rok nahi paa rahi thi yeh dekhkar tasha ne use kaha ke tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho. Toh shera says him "tumhe tumhara khajane ka hissa mil gaya hai. Ab tumhe aur kuch puchne ki jaroorat nahi ab tum jaa sakte ho. Yeh sunkar Tasha chupchap chala gaya aur woh apne baba ke paas laut gayi. Lekin woh bohot khoyi khoyi se rehne lagi. Uske baba ne use dakaiti  mein sirf saath chalne ke liye kaha ke tumhra maan behel jayega. Yahan akeli hoti ho toh aur dukhi hoti ho aur muze tumhari chinta lagi rehti hai. Lekin shera ne baba se kaha ke ye saab woh chhod chuki hai. Aur in saab mein uska ab maan nahi lagta. Uske baba dukhi ho jate par kuch kar nahi paate kyonki woh usase bohot pyar karte the aur apni beti ko hurt nahi karna chahte the.

 

Yaha veer bhi chupchup rehne laga. Dharam ne use kai baar samzaya ke use shera ko bhulna hoga. Toh woh jawab deta ke who bohot koshish toh kar raha hai. Lekin kya kare use bhula nahi paa raha hai. Is beech sia aur dharam ki shaadi baat chali. Sia ke mata pita ke ab unke shaadi deri nahi chahte the. Dharam toh shaadi ke liye taiyar hi nahi tha lekin veer ne use yeh kehkar mana liye ke use jab koi pasand aayegi toh woh jaroor shadi kar lega. Dharam aur sia ki shaadi ho gayi. Uske baad veer aur hi buza buza sa rehne laga. Woh jab dharam aur sia ko saath dekhta toh use shera ki yaad aati ke kaise usne uska khayal rakha tha aur shera ke saath bitaye hue pal.  Yeh baat dharam se chupi nahi. Toh ek din usne veer se kaha ke tum apne seema ke Pradesh ka daura kar ke aur wahan saab thik hai ke nahi yeh bhi dekhkar aao. Is bahane tumhara maan bhi behel jaayegi. Veer ko bhi yeh baat jachi aur woh bhi nikal pada.

 

Precap : Shera's baba return ghayal



Edited by RTMCFAN - 05 December 2008 at 1:22am

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Posted: 05 December 2008 at 8:17am | IP Logged
wohooo...awesum girlie...
rilli too gd..
u r a n amzin writer n u dare not say that u r not gd...U r jus rockin yaar...
kitne ache prts the..jus loved em to bits...
read prt 1 n 2 jus now n rushed to type in a compli..
Keep up the g88888888888888888 wrk gal...
i jus love tis whole idea...oflike continuing from where DV ended..em heart-broken that DV ended buh well..it was rilli a vry beautiful epi..n mugz luked jus such a beau..a riveting bold delicacy..loved the last epi to bits.......
 
n plzzzzzzz do PM me wheneva u update nxt (if possible)....
 
 
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 n U a RT-MC jodi fannn
yippppppppeeeeeeeee
 Me too..em a die hrd fan of tis jodi..love em till eternity
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loved it plz cont soon it was out standing.
 
 
 
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