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Thnx for the FF it's awsome continue soon.

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@ debby - Thnx for your comment. I thought that maybe this tele convo may click and it did.Cool

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Amazingly fantabulous..!!!>......ur story is just rocking...!!!!!....keep it up

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Originally posted by bubblygurl

Amazingly fantabulous..!!!>......ur story is just rocking...!!!!!....keep it up


THANK U SO... MUCH!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 31 December 2008 at 10:54am | IP Logged

Part 8

 

One day before the party Dia in her room with Uday

 

Dia – Dodo mujhe batao yeh kaisa hai

Uday – Di yeh acha toh hai

Dia – No, yeh maine last party pe pehna tha.

Uday – Toh woh kaisa hai Di

Dia – Nahi who bhi nahi. Mere paas ek bhi acha kapda nahi hai party main pehne ke liye.

Uday – Yeh kya baat kar rahi ho. Ek pura cupboard tumne khaali kar diya. Agar tumhe us main se kuch pasand nahi aaya toh dusra cupboard hai na us se kuch nikaal lo

Dia – Dodo is cupboard main latest kapde hai not that one

Uday – But Di dono main faraq nahi hai this cupboard ke kapde tumne do mahine pehle laye aur voh chaar mahine pehle so it's not that old.

Dia – But Dodo four months is older than two aur log kya kahenge Dia four months old kapde pehnegi. Never, main kuch naya khareedna jaa rahi hoon. Chalo Dodo Annie aur Chako ko phone karo main Gunjan aur Nupur ko bulati hoon

Uday – Voh Morena's kyun Di

Dia – Dodo voh humari behen hai our sisters hamara bhi toh farz banta hai unke liye kuch karna chahiye. Aur issi bahaane Gunjan ki madad se Karan ko jo pasand aayega vohi dress pehnoongi.

 

They go to Nupur's room and see her reading Dia's style magazine.

Dia – Hey Nupur

Nupur – Hi Dia kuch kaam tha

Uday – Actually Di ko tumse kapde lene the

Nupur – Oh acha kaunsa

Dia – DODO!!! Shayad tumhe yaad nahi maine kaha hum khareedne jayenge. Actually Nupur dear hum shopping karne ja rahe the kal ke party ke liye tum aur Gunjan bhi aate toh acha hota.

Nupur – Are vaah yeh toh bahut acha hai mujhe bhi kuch khareedna hai main bhi chalti hoon.

Dia – Are Gunjan dear kaha hai.

Nupur – By god Dia main toh bhool hi gayi bolna Gunjan Karan ke saath Juhu beach par hai

Dia – Oh! Yeh Gunjan ka main kya karu. Hmmm maybe inhe bhi….yea right. Nupur tum Karan ko bhi invite karogi and even Raj.

Nupur – Ok main phone kar loongi.

Dia – Thik hai tum ek ghante main tayaar rehna aur unko kehna THE HUB main aa jaaye

Nupur – Ok

 

At Juhu Beach

Samrat – Are Benji tune mujhe yahan kyun bulaaya

Benji – Are teri madad kar raha hoon.

Samrat – Matlab

Benji – Voh dekh

He points to something or someone

Samrat – voh toh chashmish hai

Benji – Haan aur Karan bhi

Samrat – Yeh dono yahan kya….Par tu yahan kaise

Benji – Jaise tujhe yaad hai humara topic hai beach par Annie gayi shopping karne so I'm writing.

Samrat – Chal thik hai follow karte hai

With Gunjan and Karan, Samrat and Benji following them

Karan – Oh please tum aaj tak nahi kar paayi ho

Gunjan – Tumse yeh kisne keh diya

Karan – Toh thik hai Morena jaakar Nishit ko bata sakti ho ki uski pyaari glass ka set tune toda

Samrat – Yeh chashmish ne zindagi main kuch toda bhi kya

Gunjan – Voh toh galti se tumne jo insist kiya tha cricket khelne ke liye

Samrat – Kya chashmish ne cricket bhi khela

Karan – Hey voh dekho bacho ko

Gunjan – Huh kya….Oh kitne pyaare hai

Looking at the kids she did not realize that Karan removed a camera and started clicking her photo. When she felt a flash she turned.

Gunjan – KARAN!!! Tum fir shuru ho gaye

Karan – are kisne kaha main tumhari photo kheech raha tha voh toh main sunset ki photo khich raha tha

Gunjan – Sunset ka!!! Right!! Subeh ke gyaara baje tum sunset ka photo khich rahe ho how interesting. Lao voh camera do mujhe

Karan – Himmat hai toh le lo

He starts running around with Gunjan following him. It looked as if they were kids playing.

Benji – Hmm beach par dil ka haal, pehla pyaar nazar aata hai. Bachpan ki yaadein taaza hoti hai. Bonus feature it is a good photography joint.

Samrat – BENJI!!! Maine Gunjan ko itna haste hue kabhi nahi dekha.

A couple next to them

Coup – Look Look lagta hai yeh ya toh newly married hai ya deeply in love. Dekho kaise apne aap main khush rehte hai

Samrat turns around and says in anger

Samrat – Listen people nahi voh married hai nahi are they in LOVE!!!DO U GET IT!!
Coup – Ok chilao mat hum jaa rahe hai

Benji – Hey Samrat voh log baith rahe hai

Samrat – Chal chupke se sunte hai inki baate

They hide behind a thele vala selling coconut juice

T.V – Bhaiyaji aap kya kar rahe hai, bomb vomb toh nahi chupa rahe

Samrat – Nahi hum us ladki par nazar rakh rahe hai

T.V – Oh! Voh aapki biwi hai

Samrat – Nahi!

T.V – Behen hai

Samrat – Nahi!

T.V – Bhabhi hai!

Samrat – Nahi!

T.V – Beti hai!

Samrat – ABE TERI TOH!!

Benji – Shhh Sam chup reh

Samrat – Meri beti mere hi age ki kaise ho sakti hai IDIOT

T.V – Aaj kal bharosa nahi kar sakte

Benji – Are yeh usse pyaar karta hai lekin voh ladka usse isse cheena chahta hai

T.V – Oh Ishq vishq ka maamla hai.

Samrat – Jee ab kya hum sun sakte hai

 

With Gunjan and Karan

Gunjan – Tumhaare saath main main ban sakti hoon

Karan – Par bakiyo ke samne kyun nahi

Gunjan – Kyunki voh mujhe samajh te nahi hai. Yahan par sirf Samrat mujhe samajh sakta hai

Karan – Fir Samrat tumhe uske siva kuch sujda hi nahi

 

Samrat – Haan main usse mere siva kuch sonch ne bhi na doon

 

Gunjan – Tum Samrat ke peeche kyun pade ho

Karan – Voh…

His phone rings

Ek minute. Are Nupur bolo haan ok thik hai main aata hoon bhai ko bhi bol doonga

Gunjan – Kya hua

Karan – Chal baad main batata hoon

They leave

Benji – Chal peecha karte hai

Samrat – Nahi yaar mujhe Mayank se milne jaana hai tips lene hai. Tu apna project khatam kar

He leaves

T.V – Yeh Mayank kaun hai

Benji – Ladki ka hone vaala Jeeja

T.V – Huh!!!

 

At HUB

 All of them meet at the entrance. Unknown to them Samrat and Mayank have entered through the back entrance

(Here Mayank and Samrat scenes will be shown side by side with the Dia and her sidekicks, Morena sisters and Singh brothers).

Dia – Chalo lets enter that area ache kapde milte hai. Guys go separate so that you people don't see what wus before the party.

Nupur – Haan bhai chal Gunjan hum udhar jaate hai. Aur Karan Raj tum dono ko kal hi pata chalega ki humne kya khareedna.

Raj – Ok thik hai chalo guys lets enter this shop

Nupur and Gunjan enter a traditional shop whereas Dia and Annie enter a western boutique. Raj Karan Uday and Chako enter the men's wear. All select their dresses unknown to the people even with them like Nupur doesn't know what Gunjan has got or Raj doesn't know what Karan has got

Mayank and Samrat have also entered the mall and are roaming around

Samrat – Mujhe kal ke party ke liye tayari karni hai us ke liye mujhe khareedna hai

Mayank – Haan mujhe bhi. Acha kuch acha simple pehna not to stylish vaise cheeze Gunjan ko pasand hai

Samrat – Right aur tum thoda stylish bano Nupur ko vaise hi pasand hai. Keep in mind Sharukh or Ranveer.

They both separate to find clothes of the correct type so that the can impress Gunjan and Nupur. They plan to meet half an hour later.

Samrat – Chalo upar chalte hai. Khana bhi kha lenge aur discuss bhi kar lenge.

They go to the food court.

Mayank – C.J bolti hai ki main Nupur se romantic bate karo par…

Samrat – Tumhe romantic baaten karni nahi aati.

Mayank – Right.

Samrat – Simple hai. Romantic in girly way is usko bhav do. Uski tareef karo. Dress ki, baal ki, kissi cheez ki bhi tareef karo.

Mayank – Bus that's easy tumhara problem easy nahi hai

Samrat – Gunjan ko intelligent log pasand hai aur main duffer hoon.

Mayank – Tum duffer nahi ho. Bus tum books ko pasand nahi karte

Samrat – Haan aur saare books padhne ka time bhi toh nahi hai.

Mayank – Toh do one thing roz ka main newspaper padho and talk about it with her. Dheere dheere she will think you are aware of your surroundings.

Samrat – Haan yeh thik hai it's easy also

Dia – Chalo sabki shopping ho gayi toh lets go and eat

They head up to the food court

Chako – Hey who dekho Samrat aur…aur…Mayank. Kya meri aankhein kharab ho gayi hain.

Uday – Dekha Di maine kaha tha Sam aur Mayank ke beech main kuch chal raha hai par tum suni nahi

Dia – DODO!!!

Annie – Hey Samrat. Hi Mayank tum dono ek saath

Samrat – haan voh main kal ke party ke liye kapde khareedne aaya tha aur Mayank bhi vohi karne aaya tha. So we thought we'll have food come join us.

Mayank – tum log yahan kya kar rahe the.

Raj – Hum bhi vohi karne aaye the.

Dia – Karan kya khareeda tumne

Karan – Surprise hai babes. Tune kya khareedna Gunji

Gunjan – Kal pata chal jayega

Mayank – Tum achi lag rahi ho Nupur

Nupur – Achi toh By God main roz lagti hoon. Kyun nahi lagti

Mayank – Nahi tum toh kissi ko bhi dara sakte ho

Raj – Nonsense Nupur hamesha achi dikhti hai

Samrat in Mayanks ears – Abe yaar tareef karne ko kaha na ki gussa

Mayank – Par voh aisa savaal

Samrat – Ladkiyaan aisa hi baat karti hai

Uday – Dekha Di in dono ke beech zaroor kuch chal raha hai

Dia – Dodo!!!

They all discuss about tomorrow and finish their food.

Everyone leaves to their home to prepare for the next day's party.

 

Sorry guys short update but we have a long one lined up for the party. So hope u guys don't get angry.

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Posted: 31 December 2008 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
hey, it was a gr8 update, though missed the usually long parts.
m waitin 4 the next part.
 
sakshi.
 
pls pm.
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 31 December 2008 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Thnx Sweete great ff do continue.

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Posted: 31 December 2008 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
coolll partt i loved it

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