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Reine

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Posted: 24 December 2008 at 3:38am | IP Logged
hey,
i realllllllllllllllllllllly luved this update.
it was the best.
i just luved the bonding btwn nupur and MM. its so sweet 2 see them as friends.
i really adore Raj and Karan. Gosh, it was gr8 2 see about the excerpts from DMG that u have put in btwn, and the kyunki jail part lol, that was really funny.
u have really made it very interesting. Really, Uday is so funny, wat abt the tomato chutney. i can imagine his expressions as well.
 
even the samrat and mayank bonding was gr8. CJ and Benji r tru frnds, really.
 
sorry 4 the long comment, but ur update was so gud that i could'nt stop myself.
 
tanx 4 the p.m.
pls. write the other parts soon and do pm me if possible.
 
 
 
p.s.  can u pls. write a ff on DMG??????????????
i really luv  ur ff and i know that if u wirte 1 on DMG, it will be as good.
just a request, no pressure.
 
sakshi
 
 
 

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Thnx Guys for all the lovely comments and here's the new update specially for u guyz

Part 7

 

Shukla class with Mayur

 

Nupur and Raj sit together leaving Mayank to sit with C.J

Shukla enters

 

Everyone – Namaste Sir!

Shukla – Namaste. Are vah aaj ek naya balak hamare shivir main prastut hai tumhara naam kya hai balak

Raj – Sir humara naam rajveer Singh hai humne abhi abhi yahan pravesh kiya hai

Shukla – Aah ha ha itna pavitr svar. Ab hume pata chal ki tumne sao ank kaise kama liye

Everyone – HUNDRED!!!!

Nupur – By God sao marks tum really great ho

Mayank and C.J were not happy about this Mayank was unhappy for two reasons

1 Nupur uski tareef kar rahi thi

2 Voh class main second aaya

Aur C.J isi liye upset thi ki voh class main third aayi thi

Shukla – Oh Ho cheekiye mat yeh Hindi main hi nahi anya visheyon main bhi pratham aaye hai.

Everyone – WHAT!!!!

Slowly the heads turned to Mayank but Mayank knew about this so he kept his head high after all he couldn't do any thing.

Nupur – Tumne Mayank ko haraya….

The bell rings.

Shukla leaves

Nupur – By God tumne kahin cheating toh nahi ki Mayank toh genius hai usse harana na mumkin hai.

Hearing this Mayank felt nice and went to congratulate Raj

Mayank – Congrats Raj

Nupur – Haan haan le lo par next time main ya C.J first aayenge OK!!!

C.J – Yah yeh toh definite hai

Mayank – Dekhte hain.

 

They all leave except C.J and Mayank

 

C.J – Tum agar aise hi Nupur se baat karoge toh tumhare dil ki baat us tak kabhi nahi pahonchegi

Mayank – Toh kya karu

C.J – thoda romantic bano

C.J leaves

Mayank – romantic par kaise hmm Samrat se poochna padega

 

With Sajan after class

Samrat – Chashmish yeh Deodar ne last main kya kaha samajh main nahi aaya

Karan – Voh toh expected hai

Gunjan – Karan ab chup bhi raho. Dekho Samrat jab media shuru hua tha India main, toh kaafi log isse nahi pehchante the…

Karan – Ok teacher Gunjan baad main isse samjhaana ab chalo

Gunjan – Par…Thik hai….

She leaves Karan is leaving but turns around

Karan – Hey Dude Gunji ko impress karne ke liye thodi aur padhai zaroori hai.

Samrat – Yeh Karan apne aap ko samajhta kya hai mujhe iski koi zaroorat nahi hai par mujhe Mayank ki zaroorat hai

 

With Karan and Gunjan outside the college in Caf treat

Karan – Waiter ek espresso coffee aur ek orange juice

Gunjan – Acha ab hum kaam ki baat kare hume mila hai Hospital us pe emotions likhne hai pata nahi kya likhe tumne bhi haan kaise keh diya is topic par

Karan – Oh ho Gunjan yaad hai jab Tiwari uncle ki beti hui thi tab humme bahut khushi hui thi

Gunjan - Ya par

Karan – Meri pyaari scholar baby cafeteria main nahi hospital main hota hai aur usse khushi milti hai jo ek emotion hai.

Gunjan – Are haan hospital main logon ko khushi milti hai, koi rota hai jab koi mar jaata hai, kissi ko takleef hoti hai jab koi beemar ho jaata hai

Karan – Intezaar dikhta hai Operation theater ke samne. Gussa dikhta hai doctor ke khilaaf.

Ab mujhe bata isse acha emotion ka pitara tumhe kahin milega aur isse acha project ka topic bhi

Gunjan – Nahi

Waiter – Sir aapka coffee aur mam aapka juice

Karan – Thanks

After the waiter leaves

Vaise Gunjan tumhara aur Samrat ka kya scene chal raha hai

Gunjan – Scene kya scene kuch bhi toh nahi voh sirf mera bahut acha dost hai.

Karan – acha lekin pehle din toh aisa nahi laga mujhe

Gunjan – Haan voh bhi meri hi bevakoofi ke kaaran. Tumhe main batati hoon kya hua tha

She tells him the whole story that time Dia comes

Dia – Are Gunjan Karan tum dono yahan

Karan – Hey Dia baitho na kaho kya logi

Dia – Jo tum doge

Karan – Waiter ek bottle sleeping pills

Dia – WHAT!!!

Gunjan – Karan yeh kya bol rahe ho

Karan – Are mazak kar raha tha. Ek aur orange juice laana with low cal sugar. After all Dia ko hamesha Diva hi lagna chahiye

Dia – Oh Karan tum mera kitna dhyaan rakhte ho

Gunjan – Acha ab mujhe chalna chahiye

Karan – Main tumhe chod…

Dia – Are nahin…

Gunjan – Nahi mujhe kuch aur kaam hai fir main ghar jaongi tum yahan Dia se baat karo aur kal college main project ka rough copy laake discuss karte hain Ok

Karan – Ok bye

Gunjan – Bye!!!

Dia – Par kal college nahi hai

Karan – Are haan main use bata ke aata hoon

Dia - Are voh mere saath hi rehti hai main use bata doongi

 

Gunjan leaves the caf and dashes into Samrat on the way causing her books and papers to fall down. They both start picking up the books unaware of the others presence

Samrat – Sorry babes yeh lo tumhare boo….Are chashmish tum yahan

What luck

Gunjan – Haan voh Main aur Karan project discuss kar rahe the

Samrat – Fir karan

Gunjan – Aur fir Dia aagayi

Samrat – Chalo kuch toh acha kiya Dia ne

Gunjan – Toh mujhe laga mujhe unhe disturb nahi karna chahiye isiliye main vahan se nikal gayi

Samrat – Very good decision tum jitna use door rahogi utna acha

Gunjan – Tum toh Dia ke bahut ache dost ho na

Samrat – Haan Unfortunately tum nahi mili na pehle

Gunjan – Tumhe kya lagta hai voh ek doosre se pyaar karte hai kya Dia ka haan hai. Mujhe to uske taraf se haan lagta hai par paka nahi aur Karan ka shayad

Samrat – Yeh shayad confirmed kyun nahi ho sakta. Aur yeh hum dono ke liye acha hoga Karan aur Dia ek saath. Tumhare gale se Karan aur mere gale se Dia. So our coast is clear

Gunjan – Main tumse kabse kuch keh rahi hoon sun rahe ho kya

Samrat – Haan sun raha hoon mujhe tumhari baat correct lag rahi hai. Chalo main tumhe ghar drop kar doon

Yeh mauka kaise jaane doon 

Gunjan – Par…

Samrat – Par Var kuch nahi samjhi ab chalo

Gunjan – Ok!

She sits on the bike and keeps her hand on his shoulder

Samrat – Chalo promotion ho gaya

Gunjan – Promotion???

Samrat – Haan haath na rakhne se shoulder pe rakhne tak humara rishta pahunch gaya

Then In a low voice

Bus kamar pe rakhne ka intezaar hai

Gunjan – Tumne kuch kaha

Samrat – Nahi

Gunjan – Kher tum sahi keh rahe ho tab main tumpe vishvaas nahi karti thi par ab karti hoon

Samrat – Bus us time ka intezaar hai jab apne se zyaada bharosa karogi mujhpe

Gunjan – Ab chale

They start the bike and Gunjan feels something weird everytime Samrat touches her or when she touches Samrat and Samrat looks at her through the rearview mirror seeing her hair fly over her face he wants to remove it but knows that he has to stay in his limits.

They reach Bhushan house

Gunjan – Thanks Samrat

Samrat – Itni formal mat raho chashmish

Gunjan – Tum parson aa rahe ho hai na

Samrat – Kahan

Gunjan – Karan aur Raj ke party main

Samrat – Pata nahi

Gunjan – Oh come on Samrat party tumhare bina achi nahi lagti

Samrat – Pata nahi chashmish….

Gunjan – Please Samrat aa jao na mere liye. Main tumhare bina kya karu

Samrat – Kyun tumhara Karan toh hai na (But inside he was dancing)

Gunjan – Par Karan Samrat nahi hai na

Suddenly she realizes what she says

Gunjan – Ok Samrat kal milte

Samrat – Hello chashmish kahan

Gunjan – College main aur kahan
Samrat – Oh mujhe pata nahi tha ki tumhare liye specially college khula rahega after all kal Christmas hai aur college band hai. Main toh nahi aa raha, Haan agar kahin aur milna hai toh I'm ok with it

Gunjan – Samrat…Mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki kal college band hai. Acha toh Merry Christmas advance main

She moves her hand forward

Samrat – Merry Christmas

And shakes her hand.

Samrat – Kaash tumhe mera haath kabhi naa chodhna pade

Gunjan turns to go when suddenly she stops her bracelet is stuck in Samrat's watch

Gunjan – Woops Sorry Samrat

Samrat – Lagta hai bhagvan bhi nahi chahta ki hum alag ho jaye

Gunjan blushes at this statement

Gunjan – Tum bhi na

She frees her hand and runs away

 

Inside Bhushan house

Gunjan meets Uday on the way

Uday – Are gunjan tum Nupur ke saath racing competition main hissa lene vaali ho kya

Gunjan – Kyun??

Uday – Are kal Nupur bhaage bhaage aayi aur aaj tum

Gunjan – Woh Woh Uday bhaiya main toh bus aise hi bhag rahi thi aaj weather bahut acha hai isi liye.

Nupur – Are Uday bhaiya aaj maine aap ke liye khaas tareeke ka juice banaya hai. Aur Dia ke style magazine main likha hai ki isse ladkiyaan patti hain. Toh pehle main yeh Samrat ko dene vaali thi par maine soncha is ka lab mere bhai ko ho.
Uday – Lab

Nupur – Profit Uday bhaiya….profit….leejiye.

Uday – Haan haan do

He takes the glass

Uday – Isse main apne room main ja kar peeta hoon

Nupur – Ok

He goes

Gunjan – Yeh kya hai Di

Nupur – Are Dia ki magazine ka recipe tha chehre par Mumbai ke dhul ka asar agar nahi chahiye toh yeh juice peena

Suddenly they hear a voice

AAAHHHAAHH!!! NUPUR YEH KYA PILA DIA

Nupur – UDAY BHAIYA PEHLE AISE HI FEEL HOTA HAI FIR SAB THIK HO JAYEGA
Uday – OK HAAN AB thik mehsoos ho raha hai. NUPUR AB PET MAIN DARD HO RAHA HAI

Gunjan – Di issme kya kya dala tumne

Nupur – By god Gunjan sun aadha glass karela ka juice aur thoda neem ka. Fir baadam, ilaichi aur anjeer ka paste banake juice main mix karke paani dalne ka

Gunjan – CHIiiii… Di yeh toh sune main hi itna bura lagta hai toh peeoge toh kaisa lagega. Recipe padke tumne yeh banaya kaise.

Nupur – Sach kahun Gunjan zeher hai pata nahi mere dimaag ko kya ho gaya hai.

Suddenly Uday comes out. His face has turned red

Uday – Dekho Nupur, Gunjan mera chehra chamak raha hai hai na

Suddenly phone rings

Uday –Nup….

Nupur – Main phone dekhti hoon

She leaves

Uday – Gunj…

Gunjan – Are baap re maine homework khatam nahi kiya.

She also leaves

Uday – Are koi toh batao

He sees Dia entering smiling

Uday – Dids main kamaal ka lag raha hoon hai na

Dia – AAHH!! DODO darao mat main bahut ache mood main hoon mood kharab mat karo

She also leaves

Uday – Lagta hai ki main itna acha lag raha hoon ki koi meri tareef nahi karna chahta agar nazar lag gayi toh.

 

With Nupur going to pick the telephone

Nupur – Acha hua maine voh nahi piya varna kya ho jaata

She picks the phone

Hello! Kaun bol raha hai

Mayank – (in a very romantic way) Main bol raha hoon

Nupur – Acha toh mainji aap kaunse vale main ho. Kyunki jahan tak mujhe pata hai main bhi main hoon Gunjan bhi apne aap ko main bulati hogi aur baaki sab bhi

Mayank – Main tumhara dost hoon

Nupur – Acha toh mainji aap mere dost ho. Vaise is sheher main koi bacha nahi hoga jo Nupur ka dost nahi hoga

Mayank – Nupur main Mayank bol raha hoon (in an angry tone)

Nupur – Oh toh aise kaho na. Toh paheli kyun bujha rahe the direct bolte ki Monkey bol raha hoon main samajh jaati aakhir mera ek hi monkey friend hai na isiliye.

Mayank – Ha! Ha! Ha bahut hassi aayi. (Then in a soft tone)

Tumne toh saara romance chaupat kar dia

Nupur – (starts coughing) Kya….Kya kaha tumne

Mayank – Yehi ki bahut hassi aayi

Nupur – Nahi uske baad

Mayank – Oh voh ki tumne saara romance kharab kar dia.

Nupur – Tum thik toh ho kahin pi vi toh nahi liya

Mayank – Nahi Nupur kyun tumhe kya lagta hai hum dost hi hai usse zyaada kuch nahi

Nupur – Uhmm...

Mayank – Sonch lo puri raat hai anyways Merry Christmas

He keeps the phone down

Nupur – Yeh isse kya ho gaya hai. Lagta isne pi li hai.

Suddenly she remembers the day he dropped her home.

Kya hum dono ke beech kuch hai. Pata nahi par kuch ajeeb toh lagta hai uske saath. Par….are usne phone kyun kiya tha. Pata nahi use kya hogaya hai.

Then after a pause

Pata nahi mujhe kya hogaya hai. Kya main use pyaar karne lagi hoon. Hmmm

 

At Samrat's house

He is thinking of all the incidents happened to him and starts cursing himself how he couldn't make himself love before this Karan named wall didn't come in between.

His phone starts ringing

Samrat – Hello

Voice – Gunjan se door raho varna….

Samrat – Karan….

Karan – Are vah dude tumne kaise pehchaan liya

Samrat – Tumhare alava kaun ho sakta hai

Karan – Voh bhi hai

Samrat – Kher yeh parson dekhte hai kaun kisse harayega

Karan – Toh tum aa rahe ho

Samrat –Haan jab koi itne pyaar se bulata hai toh main kyun na aao

Karan – Kaun??

Samrat – Meri Gunji, meri chashmish aur meri gunjan ne jab itne pyaar se bulaaya hai toh naa kaise kar sakta hoon (stressing on the underlined words)

Karan – Hmm toh parson milte hai

Samrat – Milte hai

Samrat keeps the phone down

Karan – Mujhe is pe pura bharosa hai bhai aap itne overreact mat karo

Raj – gunjan bhi toh bahut bholi hain

Karan – Par main bhi toh hoon uske saath kuch nahi hoga don't worry

Raj – Worry kaise nahi karu Samrat is known flirt

Karan – Par even then he has a passion for what he likes. Like basketball aur ab Gunjan

Raj – But passion can create problems

 

Karan – But his passion is commitment to a thing he loves. And that die for it spirit. Trust me bhai aur itna overprotective mat raho Gunjan bachi nahi hai abhi

Raj – Par mere liye tum dono hamesha kids hi rahogi

Karan – Now look who is talking like a Dad in the making

Voice – Kissi ne mera naam liya

Karan and Raj – Dad!!

Dad – Haan bhai is main itna cheekhne ki kya zaroorat vaise tum meri hone vaali bahu se baat kar rahe the kya

Karan – Dad main Samrat se baat kar raha tha

Dad – KYA!!! NAHI HEY BHAGVAN kya hogaya hai aaj kal ke peedi ko main bahu maang raha tha aur aata hai daamaad. Maine kaha tha Dostana ek baar se zyaada mat dekho bus asar ho gaya uska.

Karan and Raj – DAD!!!!

Karan – Vaise ek baat toh sach hai voh aapka daamaad hai

Dad – Dekha NAHI!!!

Karan – Dad!! Par voh Gunjan se pyaar karta hai

Dad – Toh aisa bolo na mujhe dara diya. KYA!!!NAHI!!!

Karan – Ab kya

Dad – Mujhe is ladke se milna hai. Tum kissi ko bhi Gunjan ke kaabil kaise bana sakte ho

Raj – Dekha Dad ko bhi aisa lagta hai

Karan – Voh isiliye kyunki Dad usse mile nahi hai aur vaise bhi voh party main aa raha hai

Dad – Thik hai tab tak Gunjan ko usse dur rakhna

Karan – Dad aap khaali mujhe kyun suna rahe hain. Bhai ko bhi batao ki Nupur ko Mayank se door rakhe

Dad – Mayank…. ab yeh Mayank kaun hai

Karan – Nupur ka Prince charming

Dad – Kya tum bhi Raj mujhe is ladke se bhi milna hai

Raj – Haan dad woh bhi party main aa raha hai

Dad – Tab tak dono yaad rakhna Nupur aur Gunjan ko in dono se door samjhe

Raj and Karan – Haan thik hai Dad par voh ach…

Dad – Ache hai ki nahi yeh main decide karoonga tum nahi. Ab so jao ache bacche so jaate hain aur abhi tak tum nahi soye

Karan – Hum bacche nahi hai

Dad – Ha voh bhi main hi decide karoonga. Ab mujhe chalna chahiye muje Thursday ke saath date hai

Karan and Raj – Thursday!!!!

Karan – Yeh kaun hai

Raj – Pata nahi chal sote hain bahut kaam baaki hai aur kal mujhe Nupur ke project ko edit bhi toh karna hai. Good Night

Karan – Good night bhai, Good night

At Samrat's house

He picks the phone and dials Mayanks no

MM – Hello

Samrat – Hello aunty Mayank hai main Samrat

MM – Mayank, vaise Samrat aaj kal kaafi alag alag log phone kar rahe hai jaise Nupur aur ab tum. Vaise tum hi ho na jo Gunjan se pyaar…

Mayank – Maa phone do. Hello Samrat acha hua phone kiya mujhe teri madad chahiye. Samrat – Haan yaar mujhe bhi chal aisa karte hai The Hub mall main milte hai 2 baje fir discuss karte hai. Chal good night

Mayank – Good night.


That's all for now hope to update soon Tongue

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Posted: 27 December 2008 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Awesome update. I loved Mayur's phone conversation. It was so much like them. I adored Mayank's attempts at romance.. so cute!
All the Sajan scenes were nice too.
Uday is hilarious. LOL

waiting for d next update.. :)

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Posted: 27 December 2008 at 8:15am | IP Logged
nice part...... and long one.... continue a new part soon....

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Posted: 27 December 2008 at 10:15am | IP Logged

WOW WHAT A UPDATE!

LOVE IT!
 
CONTINUE SOON WHEN U HAVE TIME!
 
I WILL WAIT!
 
PS:IT WAS VERY HILARIOUS
 
BYE SEE YAAA

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Posted: 27 December 2008 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
wowow i love it  sooooooooo muchhhhh tht part

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Posted: 28 December 2008 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
hey,
the part was gr8, as always.
thanx for the p.m.
sry, m in a hurry so cant post a long comment.
 
pls. try 2 p.m me if possible.
 
sakshi

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one word...brilliant...!Clap

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