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Part 6

 

Everything settles down at Mayank's house and everyone sits down with notepads to discuss about their project and jot down points MM also was there to assist them.

 

Mayank – Humara proj 30 minutes ka hai. Toh we have to think of a solid script. Humara written work to bahut acha tha hi anyways koi idea hai.

Nupur – Kyun na hum saare serial ko ek saath jod dein.

Mayank – Matlab...

Nupur – Matlab, hum serials se kuch chote chote hisse utha kar yeh documentary bana sakte hain.

Raj – Like a collage

Nupur – Haan

Mayank – Par hum serial nahi proj bana rahe hai Nupur….

MM – Nahi mayu, Nupur sahi keh rahi hai Kabhi Kabhi documentary ek chees ko enact karke bata sakte ho like the polio campaign on tv par documentary banana ka easy or sure measure hota hai clippings lekar use edit karkar ek movie main badal dete hain jis ke baad aap apni aavaz background main dal sakte ho for explaining. Isme tumhe zyaada kaam karne ki bhi zaroorat nahi hai.

Mayank – Tabhi main soncho yeh idea Nupur ko kaise aaya. Kyunki Nupur ke alava yeh idea aur kissi ko nahi aa sakta after all isme kaam jo kum karna hai.

Nupur – Kya kaha tumne

MM – Tum dono fir shuru mat ho jao ab tum sab ko is project ko hisso main bantna chahiye.

Raj – Right aunty hum isske teen hisse karte hai 

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MM – Bilkul sahi kaha tumne toh first vala kaun karega.

Nupur – Main karoongi aunty

Mayank – Dekha ma sabse aasaan kaam firse

Nupur – Oh hello! Yeh sabse mushkil hai aur mujhe pata hai ki tum logon ko (boys) ghar pe baith kar kyunki saas bhi Kabhi bahu thi nahi dekhna pasand nahi karoge.

Raj – She does have a point

Mayank – Toh thik hai 1st Nupur le rahi hai aur 2nd tum lelo Raj fir 3rd mera hogaya

Raj – Yea that would be good main bhi vohi sonch raha tha

Nupur – Wow tumhari sonch bhi matching hai. Aunty chalo na hum dono serials se kya pick karna hai uspe baat karte hain. Aur yeh do apne ideologies match karte hai.

They leave the guys to talk

Raj – Toh maine suna hai ki tum Excel main top karte the

Mayank – Sahi kaha main Excel mein top karta tha. Abhi break par hoon is liye tumhe top karne dia par next exam back on track.

Raj – Dekhte hain.

Mayank – Tum Nupur ko kabse jaante ho

Raj – Bachpan se.

Mayank – Toh tum Nupur ke baare main bahut kuch jaante hoge.

Raj – Bachpan main saath rahte the in fact hum school bhi ek saath jaate the. Dad yahan business sambhaal te the aur hum Morena main padhai karte the. In short everything is right.

Mayank – Morena main kaafi ladke Nupur ke peeche paagal the na

Raj – Haan Nupur Morena ki jaan thi she was the diva of Morena. Tum jaante ho Gunjan roz chaalis pachaas phool manidr chadati thi kyunki ghar main Nupur ke liye aaye phoolon ki jagah hi nahi thi.

Mayank – Toh Nupur bahut popular thi vahan pe

Raj – Right but koi bhi ladka phool dene se zyaada kuch nahi karsakta tha main jo tha vahan. Vaise tum bhi Nupur ke bahut kareeb ho na

Mayank – Haan hoon toh?

Raj – nahi bus bata raha tha Nupur aur main bahut kareeb hai aur koi usse hurt kare mujhe pasand nahi hai.

Mayank – Oh really toh listen carefully Nupur se door mujhe nahi tumhe rehna chahiye samjhe tum

Raj – Chalo tum un samajdaro main se nahi ho chalo abhi jaake Nupur se puchte hai ki voh uske kareeb kissko pasand karegi mujhe ya tumhe

Mayank – Are Nupur toh yehi kahegi ke Raj mujhse acha hai mujhe apne Pyaar ka vishvaas dilane ke liye thoda time lagega. Par agar nahi kaha toh use lagega ki main haar gaya

Raj – Bichaara isse yeh nahi pata ki Nupur iska naam legi kyunki use lagega ki hum khel rahe hain and mujhe trouble karne ke liye mera naam nahi legi. But isse kya pata.

Kya hua dar gaye kya.

Mayank – Dar!!! Kaun main, main toh bus yehi sonch raha tha kyun na ek game khela jaye ek debate ki tarah jahan dono sides ko apni baat manvaane ka mauka mil jaaye. Agar end main Nupur tumhe chunti hai toh main tum dono ki zindagi se chala jaonga par agar main jeeta….

Aur yaad rahe main hi jeetonga kyunki Nupur se pyaar main hi karta hoon tum sirf aur sirf uske dost ho.

Saying this he goes away towards MM and Nupur

Raj – Maine Pyaar ka naam kab liya, kher ab toh bahut maza aayega. Is khel ka end toh mujhe pata hai kya hoga par isme mirch masala dalne ka kaam karo. Tum Nupur ko pane ki planning karo main karta hoon planning tumhe aur Nupur ko kareeb lane ki. Kar toh raha hoon tumhari madad par tumhe lagega ki main Nupur ko patane ke chakkar main hoon. Maza aayega kafi dino baad itna acha competition milega.

 

With Nupur and MM at the same time

 

Nupur – By God aunty acha kiya ki hum un ladkon ko chod yahan aa gaye.

MM – Haan main bhi yehi keh rahi thi. Acha batao yeh Raj kaun hai tumhara boyfriend.

Nupur – Nahi aunty Raj mera bachpan ka dost hai. Voh aur Karan…

MM – Karan…

Nupur – Uska chota bhai aur Gunjan ka best friend yahan Excel main padhne vale hain. Raj na By god Gunjan ko apni choti behen manta hai. Is liye jab kabhi main Gunjan ke paas nahi hoti hoon aur voh Raj ke saath hoti hai toh mujhe koi problem nahi hota.

MM - Acha project ki tumhare ideas batao varna Mayank aake humpe chilaayega.

Nupur – haan aunty hum yeh dikha sakte. Jaise ki Kyunki main aurat ko ya toh kitchen main dikhaya jaata hai ya fir jail main. By god lagta hai mujrim se zyaada inki bahue rehti hai. Aur fir yeh bhi dikha sakte hai ki Dill mill gaye main ek aurat ko Doctor ke roop main bhi dikhaya gaya hai. Chahe voh doctory kum kare aur exit staircase main romance zyaada kare. Aur ek aur serial aata hai astitva dekh hai na aapne.

MM – Baat toh tune sahi kahi. Yeh do alag alag ways hai ek aurat ko dekhne ke hum hamesha kitchen main kyun band rahe. Tu voh purane zamane ka serial hai na shanti us se bhi clippings le sakti hai. Vaise dill mill gaye was a good idea. Tune voh vala episode dekha jisme voh naya Abhimanyu Modi aata hai.

Nupur – By god aunty who itna bura dikhta toh nahi hai par villain ki acting kar raha hai. Are us din toh us par hi chutkula hua tha jab Armaan press conference bulata hai.

MM – Haan aur yeh Ridhima aur Abhimanyu ke beech kuch definetly hone vala hai

Nupur – Hai! Kya bol rahi ho aap Armaan aur Ridhima hi ek saath ache lagte hai beech main yeh Bandar nahi.

Aap ko pata hai Raj ka jo bhai hai na Bilkul Armaan jaisa hai.

MM – Acha Kabhi use laana yahan main bhi toh dekhoon ki Armaan aur Karan main kya kya similarity hai. Vaise aaj ka episode jaroor dekhna

Nupur – Kyun???

MM – Are doctors Save Sanjeevani concert karne vale hain aur….

Mayank – Mujhe pata tha aap dono kuch kaam nahi karte bus apne in serials ki duniya main kho jaate

MM – Are tu kyun jal raha hai tu bhi toh apne kitabon main kho jaata hai hum Kabhi kuch kehte hai kya.

Raj – Acha aunty ab humme chalna chahiye kaafi late ho gaya hai.

Mayank – Chalo tum dono ko neeche tak chod aata hoon

MM – Main bhi aati hoon mujhe kuch khareedna hai.

 

They go down

Raj - Aao Nupur chalte hai

Mayank – Bike par!!!

Raj – Haan toh paas rehne main hi bhalai hai. Hai na Mayank

Mayank – Main tumhe ghar chod deta hoon Nupur

Raj – Are tum kyun main chod deta hoon na.

MM – Tum jo karna chahte ho karo par pehle mujhe ek auto pakdao taki main bazaar ja sakoo

Nupur – Raj tum aunty ko chod do main Mayank ke saath chali jaongi

Mayank – (with a wide smile) Haan Haan Bilkul sahi Nupur chalo. Auto!!

They left in the auto

MM – Mayank ko itna khush kaafi dino baad dekha hai.

Raj – Yeh sab aap mujhe kyun bata rahi hai. Mujhe toh Mayank par gussa aa raha hai ki woh Nupur ko ghar chodne chala gaya hai.

MM – Tum kissko ullu bana rahe ho mujhe pata hai tum Nupur se Pyaar nahi karte ho balki tum Mayank aur Nupur ko unke Pyaar ka ehsaas dila rahe ho

Raj – Aap ko kaise …

MM – Are main jaanti hoon tum ladko ke dimaag main kya chalta hai aur jis tarah se Nupur tumhare baare main tareef kar rahi thi us hisaab se toh tum meri madad kar sakte ho in dono ko kareeb laane main.

Raj – Jee aunty chalta hoon yeh mera mobile no hai zaroorat pade toh phone karna

MM – Oye kahan chalta hoon mujhe bazaar toh chodo mujhe saamaan sachme khareedna hai

Raj – Haan Haan chaliye

 

Outside Bhushan house

 

Mayank pays the auto guy and goes to say bye to Nupur.

Mayank – Bye Nupur kal college main milte hai

Nupur – Haan Mayank kal milte hai

Mayank didn't know what to do to stop her

Mayank – Uhm… Nupur!!

Nupur – Haan Mayank

Mayank – Nupur tum aaj bahut achi lag rahi ho….. Matlab tumhe apne baal khule rakhne chahiye ache lagte hai

Nupur – Aaj yeh Mayank ko kya ho gaya hai par main itna sharma kyun rahi hoon. Hai!! Mera chehra lal kyun ho raha hai? Hey bhagvan ab kya bolu. Vaise Mayank tum bhi haste hue bade ache lagte ho

 

Saying this she runs away leaving Mayank with a big smile

Mayank – Chalo aaj maine Nupur ke chehre pe sharm to dekha jab maine uski tareef ki. Shayad voh bhi mujhse Pyaar karti ho aur use pata na ho. Ab toh main use us Raj ke paas Kabhi na jaane doonga.

 

He goes back home

 

Inside the house Nupur runs and crashes into Dia

Dia – Babes tum speedboat ki tarah kyun bhaag rahi ho aur tum itni lal kyun ho

Uday – Very simple Di aaj lunch pe isne idli with tomato chutney aur tomato ketchup khaya fir tea ke liye strawberry khaya. You see it is a side effect.

Dia – Shut up Dodo and yeh tomato chutney kya hai.

Uday – Who Di aaj jab main idli ki coconut chutney kha raha tha toh usme tomato ketchup gir gaya toh tomato chutney.

Dia – Shut up...

Nupur – Nahi Dia who main bhaag rahi thi na isi vajah se, Good Night

She goes into the room and sees Gunjan getting into the bed

Gunjan – Are Di aap aagayi kaisa raha aaj ka din. Aur Mayank

Hearing Mayanks name she starts blushing

Gunjan – Are Di aap lal hogayi kyun kya hua Mayank ke saath.

Nupur - kuch nahi Gunjan kal jaana nahi hai college after all aaj kaafi dino baad itni khushi mili hai

They both go to sleep thinking of tomorrow and happenings of today

 

Mayanks house

 

MM – Are tu aagaya kaisa raha auto date

Mayank – acha…Kya mom tum bhi sab us angle se kyun leti ho. Good Night

MM – Acha ji. Sun Mayu yeh Raj… bahut acha ladka hai na

Mayank – Acha… huh Bilkul useless hai.

MM - Tu kuch bhi kehle par uski aur Nupur ki jodi bahut kamaal ki hai.

Mayank – Nupur us ke saath nahi hai. MAIN USKO USKE SAATH NAHI REHNE DOONGA. Good night

He goes to sleep

MM – Are maine Kabhi nahi soncha ki Kabhi mera Mayu kissi se Pyaar kar payega mujhe laga ki voh hamesha apne kitabon main kho jayega par main galat thi. Thank You Nupur mere bete ko vaapis khushaal banana ke liye.

 

 

Next Day at Excel

 

Nupur and Gunjan reach excel with Dia and Uday. Dia like always dressed to be a diva. Uday thinking why was the sky blue. Suddenly there was a horn behind them which made Uday jump.

 

Karan - Hey girls and DODO!!

Gunjan – Karan kaise ho tum aaj gaadi main

Karan – haan Gunji woh aaj gaadi ka mood tha aur vaise bhi bike leke aa hi rahe hain.

Nupur – Haan Raj

She suddenly spots him parking his bike and goes to talk to him

Dia – Hi Karan

Karan – Hi Dia, Vaise Gunjan aaj kaunsi class hai

Gunjan – Pehli Shukla sir ki hai, fir Deodar sir ki fir break hai…

Dia – Oh Dear hum yeh under chalke bhi toh discuss kar sakte hai na

Karan – Yea sure hey Nupur mujhse thik se baat bhi nahi kiya seedha bhai ke paas chakkar kya hai.

Raj and Nupur join them

Raj – Apne dimaag ko itna mat chala agar overtime ho gaya toh tera proj akele Gunjan ko karna padega.

They enter inside the college and are walking towards there classrooms talking amongst each other when…..

KARAN!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oooh KARAN!!!!!

They turn around to see a crowd of girls all standing giggling at the sight of Karan and wearing…..

Gunjan – Di mere chashme ka number kahin bad toh nahi gaya.

Nupur – By God Gunjan tera toh pata nahi par mujhe chashma zaroor lag gaya hai

Uday – Di kahin main koi bura sapna toh nahi dekh raha hoon

Dia – Shut Up! Yeh Excel main chal kya raha hai

Raj – Wow Karan yeh tere words ko kuch zyaada hi seriously nahi le li

Karan – Ya bhai lagta hai aaj yeh mera peecha nahi chodengi

 

At the canteen Mayank was sitting with Samrat at that time C.J came

C.J – Aaj East aur West ek saath kya baat hai.

Mayank – Kuch nahi

C.J – Oh Morena sister's mujhe pata tha ki tum dono ek zaroor hoge un dono ko patane ke liye.

Samrat – Ur right C.J….

 

At that time Benji enters the canteen running

Benji – BHAGO!!!! BHAGO!!!! EXCEL KE LADKE BHAGO!!!

Samrat – Benji kyun chilla raha hai

Benji – Ab sab ladke chilane ke siva kuch nahi kar sakte kyunki aaj ke baad unke paas koi ladki nahi hai unke paas date pe jaane ke liye

C.J – Kyun yeh ek boyz college ban gaya kya

Benji – Nahi usse bhi worse babe's behenji ban gaye.

Samrat – What kya keh raha hai

He takes them to where the others are standing

Benji – Khud hi dekh le aaj excel main saari ladkiya salvar kameez main hai sivai Dia, Annie aur C.J if u consider C.J as a girl.

C.J – Shut Up! Par poore Excel ki ladkiyon ko hua kya hai.

Benji – Karan ki pasand hai simple Indian ladkiyon yaad hai bas usi ka side effect.

C.J – Lagta hai tum dono ka charm gaya

Samrat – What nonsense main try karta hoon. Hey girls

No response

Samrat – Hey GIRLS

No response

Samrat – HEY GIRLS

The last girl turns to Samrat and smiles

Girl – Hi Samrat

Then turns back and shouts KARAN

Samrat is annoyed

Mayank – Mujhe try karne de. Hey girls

No response

Mayank – HEY girls

No response

Mayank – He…

C.J – Kyun apna time waste kar rahe ho tum is college ke dude the ab nahi ho.

Unknown to them Raj noticed them and their efforts. He wanted Mayank to get angrier

Raj – Hiya Girls

The girls turned to him and started shouting

OOOOoooo Raj!!!!!!!!!! Raj!!!!!!!!!!1

Raj just smirked at Mayank's angry look and Karan seeing Raj's smile saw Samrat glaring at him

Karan – 2day you girls are really looking stunning.

Half the girls started screaming and half of them fainted

Raj – Haan isi kaaran

Arz kiya hai aap sab ki muskurahat par

Karan – Irshaad sahi vakt pe shayari sunane vale hain aap bhai. Itni khoobsurat ladkiyon ke liye come on bhai. Right girls

Girls – Yea kaho na Raj!!
Raj – Mat muskurao itna ke phoolon ko khabar lag jaaye,

            Mat muskurao itna ke phoolon ko khabar lag jaaye

         Ke kare who tumhari tareef,

            Ke kare who tumhari tareef aur tumhe nazar lag jaye.

Karan – Vah Vah!!! Kya sher farmaya hai

The somewhat girls left standing also fainted thinking that Raj said this to them but only Mayank observed that when Raj saw Nupur smiling he said the sher and throughout the sher he was looking at Nupur.

Uday – Wow dude mujhe nahi pata tha shayari ladki patane ke liye in fashion hai varna main kab ka use kar leta.

Dia – Dodo

Uday – Vaise agar time ho toh mujhe bhi thoda sikha do

Dia – DODO

Raj – Sure dude anytime par aaj nahi

 

Suddenly the bell rang

Raj – We have to go to class bye girls

BYE KARAN!!!! BYE RAJ!!!!

Mayank & Samrat – In dono ka kuch karna padega

C.J – Include me main tumhari madad karoongi after all kaafi dino se kuch exciting nahi kiya

Benji – Me too dude main hamesha tumhare saath hoon

Samrat – Thanks lets begin O.T.R.A.K.A.G.N.A.G

C.J – What???

Mayank - Operation throw Raj and Karan and get Nupur and Gunjan

Benji – Kitna chota naam hai na dude

C.J - haan guy's bolte bolte hi aadha time chala jaata hai keep it SOMI. Singh's out Morena's in

Benji – Ya stylish bhi lagta hai.

Mayank – Ok SOMI it is ab class chale varna hum sab kuch harne ke saath saath fail bhi ho jayenge attendance na hone ke kaaran.

Samrat – yea right aur isse chashmish par bhi effect padega

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Thnx sweetie it was fantastic  do continue.

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lmaoROFL bechaare mayank and samrat
who kehtehain na galti ki to bughat na to parega
 
sammy bro bohot late apne feelings ko samja
mayank tera kuch nahi ho sakta hai :P 

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It waas  COOOOL!
 
THanx babes!
 
Continue soon when u have time!
 
byeee seee yaa!

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wowowow cooll part i love it

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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!Clap

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Thnx guys thank u soooooo much i'll try tht the next chap is even better

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