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hey,
i just luv this ff.
its gr8.Thumbs Up
i can really imagine all of this happening.
guess here's another writer in the making.Thumbs Up
pls update soon and try 2 pm me if possible.
 
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Part 5

 

In the library

 

Gunjan – Mmm Book kaha rakha hai. Ha yaha hai, Par yeh toh bahut uper hai main kaise reach karu.

 

Suddenly a hand pulls down the book

 

Gunjan – Thank….Samrat tum

 

Samrat – Yeh lo chashmish

 

Gunjan – Yeh mujhe fir se chashmish bulane laga hai. Par main fir iske behkave main nahi aaongi.

Mujhe yeh book nahi chahiye tum rakhlo.

 

Samrat – Par chashmish….

 

Gunjan walks away without listening to him

 

Samrat – Mujhe pata tha ki yeh meri baat nahi sunegi. Benji…tujhe pata hai na kya karna hai.

 

Benji was hiding behind the book rack

 

Benji – haan dude main janta hoon mujhe kya karna hai. Par main na kehta tha ki ek din tu pachtayega.

 

Samrat – Tu sahi kehta tha Benji maine pehle yeh realize kyun nahi kiya. Ab baate baad main karte hain ja plan pura kar.

 

Benji – Right!!

 

He goes around the college and sees Gunjan going out of the gate.

 

Benji – Hey Gunjan ghar ja rahi ho.

 

Gunjan – Are Benji haan main ghar ja rahi hoon.

 

Benji – Aao main tumhe chod doon.

 

Gunjan – Nahi nahi main chali jaongi

 

Benji – Oh! Come on Gunjan chalo na chod aata hoon. By the way tumne Samrat se baat kiya aaj kal pata nahi kyun bahut down lag raha hai.

 

Gunjan – Us ka naam bhi mat lo mere samne, usne apne fayde ke liye mujhe use kiya.

 

Benji – Oh my God! Ha! Ha! Ha! Mujhe vishvaas nahi hota… Ha...He….He!

 

Gunjan – Tum thik toh ho Benji yeh tumhe kya ho gaya.

 

Benji – Kuch nahi Gunjan main bet jeet gaya.

 

Gunjan – What??? Kaun si bet tum log sirf bet lagate rehte ho kya.

 

Benji – Haan Gunjan bet, Yaad hai us din maine tumhe Samrat aur Dia ki bet ke bare main bataya tab Samrat ka mood thoda kharab tha.

 

Gunjan – Haan tha toh

 

Benji – Woh isliye tha ki Samrat yeh sonch raha tha ki woh tumhe bataye is bet ke baare main ya nahin aur tum isse sun kar kaise react karogi.

 

Gunjan – Kya???

 

Benji – Haan tabhi main vahan pahunch gaya aur usne apni problem mujhe bata di. Toh maine use bola ki woh tujhe kuch na bataye kyunki tum usse fir Kabhi baat nahi karogi. Par use tum par pura vishvaas tha aur usne kaha ki tumhe bura nahi lagega aur tum samajh jaogi ki Samrat ne talent parade main sache dil se madad ki thi tumhari. Bus is baat pe maine use bet laga di. Aur dekho main bet jeet gaya, tumne us din se aaj tak Samrat se baat nahi ki. Sach batao Gunjan tumhare aane ke baad Samrat Samrat nahi raha Bilkul badal gaya aur mujhe bhi laga tha ki tum use maaf kar dogi par shayad main galat tha aur Samrat bhi. Anyways main kal hi Samrat se paise le leta hoon abhi toh who college ke garden ke bench pe beth kar apne dosti par afsos jata rah hoga. Chalo main tumhe chod aata hoon.

 

Looking at Gunjan who now had tears in her eyes.

 

Gunjan – Nahi Benji tum chalo mujhe apni ek galti sudharni hai. Tum sahi the maine use samjhane ka mauka hi nahi diya par ab main jaan gayi hoon ki galti mujh main hai ki main kissi pe bharosa nahi karti hoon.

 

Saying this she goes inside the premises and into the garden

 

That time Benji calls Samrat

 

Benji – Aap ki Morena aa rahi hai Plan1 successful baki sab aapke haathon main

 

That time Gunjan comes from behind

 

Gunjan – Samrat…

 

Samrat keeps the phone on the bench and turns towards her.

 

Samrat – Acha hua Benji ke paas nakli aansoo lane ka bhi tareeka hai no wonder yeh tv vale itna perfect karte hai.

 

Are Gunjan tum…tum yahan kaise?

 

Gunjan – Gunjan nahi chashmish…tumhari chashmish…

 

Trying to wipe his tears

 

Samrat – Nahi gunjan main tumhe us naam se bulane ka adhikaar kho chukka hoon, ab mujhe jaana chahiye.

 

Gunjan now can't stop her tears she runs and hugs Samrat from the back.

 

Samrat is shocked he slowly turns himself and hugs her properly.

 

Samrat – Gunjan…Gunjan……chashmish.

 

Gunjan- (still not leaving him) Mujhe maaf kardo Samrat maine jaan boojh ke tumpe shaq nahi kiya. Yeh sab meri galti main tumhare dost kehlane ke layaq nahi hoon.

 

Samrat – Nahi chashmish tumhari jagah aur koi bhi hota na toh voh ye hi samajh leta. Main tumse zyaada naaraz nahi hoon bus thoda sa kyunki muje lagta hai ki humari dosti itni mazboot nahi thi aur isme main tumhe blame nahi kar raha hoon balki yeh effort hum dono ko dalna padega. Jaise kehte hain na ek haath se clap nahi kar sakte.

 

Gunjan – Taali….

 

Samrat – Huh!!!

 

Gunjan – Taali…Ek haath se taali nahi baj sakti.

 

Samrat – Whatever…main baat hai ki tum samajh gayi ho right chashmish.

 

Gunjan – Right.

 

Samrat – Toh can I get another hug

 

Gunjan – Kya???

 

Samrat- Please,please please

 

Gunjan – Samrat tum bhi na

 

Saying that she hugged him

 

Person – Yeh kya ho raha hai yahan pe

 

 

That's all guys for now next time next chapter.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tumhe kya laga I'm leaving u guyz on another cliffhanger nope. I'll continue specially for u.

 

Gunjan – KARAN!!!!

 

Samrat – Yeh har ache moment main kyun tapak jaata hai

            Karan, tum yahan kaise

 

Karan –Main toh apni book lene aaya tha par acha hi hua ki main aagaya varna….

 

Gunjan – Oh ho Karan tum bhi na kuch bhi bolte rehte ho. Samrat, Karan tum dono ek doosre ko jaante hi hoge. Par Karan tum yeh nahi jaante ki Mumbai main aane ke baad, Excel main aane ke baad mujhe sabse zyaada madad Samrat ne hi ki.

 

Samrat – Are nahi chashmish dost kis liye hote hai.

 

Karan – Chashmish…

 

Gunjan – Haan Samrat mujhe Pyaar se chashmish bulata hai.

 

Karan – (In a low voice) Hmm Pyaar se…whatever.

 

Samrat(also in a low voice hearing his dialogue) kyun meri chashmish ko main Pyaar se nahi bula sakta kya.

 

Gunjan – Tum dono ne kuch kaha kya.

 

Samrat/Karan – Nahi…

 

Gunjan – Mere hi kaan baj rahe hain.

 

Karan – Acha Gunji main tujhe call karne hi vala tha humare project pe kaam toh karna hai na.

 

Gunjan – Oh! Haan main toh bhul hi gayi thi

 

Karan – koi baat nahi Gunji

 

Samrat – Gunji???

 

Karan – Main Gunjan ko Pyaar se Gunji bulata hoon (stressing on the word Pyaar)

 

Samrat – Do I get jail or fansi if I give him excess sleeping pills. Pata nahi Benji se poochna padega. Kya hogaya hai tujhe aaj kal tujhe sab Benji se puchna pad raha hai. Par ek baat toh paki hai itne marne ki tareeke hone ka fayda kya, agar hum jaise aashiq uska istmaal na kar paye toh

 

Karan – Vaise Samrat ko toh acha hi topic mila hai Night club usi ke standard ka hai. Chalo Gunji chalte hai, lets go.

 

Gunjan – Haan main aa rahi hoon. Kal milte hai Samrat Bye!!!!

 

Samrat – Bye chashmish.

 

After they leave

 

Ek time aisa aayega Karan ki jab tum mere jagah pe hoge aur Gunjan tumhe bye kar rahi hogi. Aisa time jald hi aayega.

 

To Nupur at Diya's house gate

 

Nupur – Bye god! Main thik toh dikh rahi hoon na Mayank ki mom se us incident ke baad milne jaa rahi hoon pata nahi kya hoga.

 

Suddenly she hears a bike and turns to see a bike stopping in front of her. The biker removes his helmet and

 

Nupur - Are Raj tum??? Mujhe laga tum car main aa rahe ho par yeh bike.

 

Raj – Haan par bike ka maza hi kuch alag hai. Aur jab ek khubsoorat ladki saath main ho toh humara standard bhi badh jaata hai. Hai na!!

Vaise bhi Mayank ka reaction bhi toh dekhna hai

 

Nupur – bye god Raj tum jaante ho ki mujhe kya suna pasand hai. Acha abhi jaldi chalo Mayank naraaz ho jaayega agar hum late pahunche toh.

 

 

She gets on the bike and they drive away to Mayank's house. They reach his house five minutes prior to the expected time and while climbing the steps Nupur is giving Raj tips…

 

Nupur – Dekho Raj tension mat lo Mayank ki mom bahut achi hai voh Mayank ki Bilkul opposite hai.

 

Raj – Par Nupur…

 

Nupur – Aur agar javab nahi aaye toh mujhe bolne dena.

 

Raj – Par Nupur….

 

Nupur – Aur bus jaise tum ho vaise hi behave karna aunty ko vaise hi log pasand aate hai aur tumhe bhi voh pasand karegi.

 

Raj – Chup Nupur…. Mujhe bhi toh bolne do mujh se zyaada toh tum tension main ho just calm down. Aisa lag raha hai main humari shaadi ki baat karne jaa raha hoon tumhare family se.

 

Nupur – Raj tum bhi na….

 

(Vaise Raj dear you r going to meet your best friends future mother-in-law)

 

Yeh hai Mayank ka ghar.

 

She rings the bell and Mayank's mom open's it.

 

MM- Are Nupur beta kaisi ho tum, bade dino baad aayi ho.

 

Nupur – Main thik hoon aunty. Aur project ke liye Sorry.

 

She touches MM's feet

 

MM – Are Nupur isme mafi maangna ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Tumhe pata hai na Mayank kitna overreact karta hai. Are!!! Yeh kaun hai….

 

Nupur – Yeh Rajveer Singh hai, Raj mera best friend aur Mayank aur mera project partner.

 

Raj touches her feet

 

MM – Mayu……..

 

Raj to Nupur – Mayu???

 

Nupur – Are aunty Mayank ko Pyaar se Mayu bulati hai

 

Raj tries to hide a smirk but Nupur sees it and glares at him

 

Mayank - Kya hai maa.

 

MM – Nupur aur Raj aaye hai

 

Mayank comes out

 

Mayank – Hi Nupur then looking at Raj Hi Raj!!

 

Nupur – Hi  Mayank.

 

MM goes inside to get something to eat.

 

Raj – Hi Mayu.

 

Mayank glares at him

 

Raj – mayu is a good name tum isse college main kyun nahi use karte.

 

Now Mayank couldn't control his anger luckily Nupur interfered

 

Nupur – Raj yeh Mayank ka personal matter hai tum beech main kyu aa rahe ho.

 

Raj – Fine Nupur isme bhadakne ki kya zaroorat

 

MM comes back with chai and biscuits for everyone. Nupur eats like last time and instead of saying anything Mayank is smiling while watching her. He suddenly notices Raj smiling at her. He gets angry and is removing his anger on the cup trying to break it.

MM notices this and smiles she knows that finally her Mayu has come out from his books. Suddenly due to Mayank's pressure the cup breaks and the hot tea falls on his hand.

 

(Obviously yaar he does have muscles ab itna jor se pakdega toh toot nahi jayega kya)

 

Nupur gets up before anyone does takes his hand and drags him into the kitchen opens the tap and keeps his hand under it

 

Nupur – Tum kya kar rahe the. Kya cup ne bhi tumhare saath dushmani li thi kya ki tum uske saath bhi ladai shuru kardiye.

 

Mayank – Nu…

 

Nupur – Tum chup hi raho bus bolte rahte ho. Oh! Thank you aunty toothpaste lane ke liye isse lagane ke baad thodi jalan hogi par baki fir thik ho jayega.

 

MM looks at all this and smiles thinking of what a loving partner her Mayu has got. She leaves them and goes out to clean the table. There Raj stands at the door watching this.

 

Nupur – Tumhe lagta hai kissi ki bhi..

 

Mayank suddenly keeps his finger on her lips

 

Mayank – Shh Nupur bahut bolti ho!

 

They share an eye lock when…

 

Raj clears his throat they both look at him

 

Nupur – Lo ab yeh toothpaste ko asar karne do

 

Mayank just looks at Nupur and then at Raj with a smirk. He enjoyed the grim expression on Raj's face. He again looked at Nupur but failed to realize as soon as he turned away from Raj his expression changed from grim to a smile.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Abhi ke liye itna hi guyz and I'm not joking this time. Next update Hopefully  very very

soon      

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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!TongueWink


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THANKS GUYS

Let the reviews coming the next chapter will be on the forum in a few days

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