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At the canteen

 

Nupur and Raj have just settled down and ordered one of Chinu's special for the day

 

Chinu – are yeh kaun hai.

 

Nupur – Yeh Raj hai Chinu, Rajveer Singh hamare college main naya aaya hai, aur deodar sir ke project main mera partner bhi hai aur mera bachpan ka dost bhi.

 

Chinu – Hmm Deodar sir ke class main matlab iska intro nahi hua hoga. Chalo abhi karva leta hoon. Suno, Suno girlz aur boyz aaj Excel main ek naya student aaya hai Rajveer Singh aka Raj. Toh ladkiyon jaldi book karlo offer seemit hain. Last day till stocks last. Aur doston hamari very own Morena ki Salsa expert ke best friend bhi hain. Kisi ko puchna hai to haath uper.

 

Mmm tum… tumhara savaal

 

G1 – Tumhe kya karna pasand hai as past time.

 

Raj – Mujhe…

 

Nupur – Raj ko toh By God itne saare cheese pasand hai ki kya bataon. Sab se zyaada use padhai karna pasand hai after all apne Papa ki company bhi toh wohi handle karega. Ab tak har debate, elocution, quiz, race etc main first aaya hai.

 

G1 – So just like Mayank he is also an all-rounder.

 

Mayank and C.J were walking past the comment and hearing Nupur and the girl's comment they stopped.

 

C.J- Wow lagta hai Tumhe ek competitor mil gaya.

 

Mayank – Hmm matlab yeh mera dushman hai, Mayank apne dushmano ko itne aasani se jeetne nahi deta.   

 

Karan - Bhai ko dance karna, khana banana bhi aata hai.

 

Chinu – Aye yeh kaun hai.

 

Nupur – Karan tu bhi Yahan hai bahut ache ab bahut maza aayega. Are Chinu yeh hai Karan Raj ka chotha bhai.

 

Karan – Haan Nupur vaise aaj hamesha ki tarah tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Mayank – Yeh dono bhai Nupur ke peeche kyun hai. Aur yeh Nupur ko khoobsurat kis haq se bol raha hai yeh haq sirf mera hai.

 

Samrat, Dia and their gang also entered the canteen and stood next to Mayank and C.J.

 

Seeing Mayank glaring at Raj Samrat stood next to him.

 

Samrat – Yeh Nupur ke paas kaun khada hai.

 

Mayank – Woh Raj hai, Rajveer Singh, Excel main naya hai aur Nupur ka best friend hai.

Aur tumhare class ke Karan ka bada bhai hai.

 

Samrat - Best friend lagta toh nahi hai friends se kuch zyaada hi lag raha hai.

 

Mayank – Hmm vaise tumhari gunjan bhi toh us Karan se kuch zyaada hi close hai.

 

Gunjan – Are Raj tum kaise ho.

 

Raj - Main thik hoon par meri Gunjan kaisi hai.

 

Samrat – In dono bhaiyon ka kya problem hai gunjan ke peeche haath dhoke pade hain. Ab yeh kya keh raha hai. Gunjan iski kab se ho gayi.

 

Gunjan – Main thik hoon Raj tum dono Yahan pe ho isse zyaada khushi kya ho sakti hai.

 

Chinu – Agar tum sab ka chit-chat pura hogaya toh Excel Karan ke baare main bhi jaana chahta hai.

 

Karan – Sure

 

He spoke and answered questions. Many of them were what were said earlier.

 

C.J – Hey Karan main C.J hoon Nupur ki dost. Mere paas bhi tumhare liye ek question hai. Tum Gunjan ke itne ache dost ho. Gunjan bahut acha gaana gaati hai, kya tum bhi gaate ho.

 

Nupur – Gaana, by god C.J Karan aur Gunjan toh ek saath singing sensation ban jaate hain. Voh guitar bhi itna acha bajaata hai ki pooch mat.

 

C.J – Are Samrat Tumhe bhi ek opponent mil gaya hai. Aaj Excel main humare do superstars ke competitors aa gaye hai. Bahut maza aayega.

 

Nupur – By God C.J chalo humare saath baith jao, Mayank tum bhi aao na.

 

Dia – Kya hum bhi baith sakte hain tumhare saath doll.

 

Nupur – (looking at Samrat) Sure.

 

Everyone settles down and orders food. There aren't any more lectures for the day so they chat about Karan and Raj.

 

Nupur – Tumhe pata hai Dia Karan By God kamal ka photographer hai.

 

Dia – Really main bhi bahut photogenic hoon. Kabhi meri bhi photo kheechna.

 

Raj – Karan kissi bhi insaan ka photo nahi kheechta. He is more of the natural kind. But

there is only one person who he likes to take snaps of.

 

Annie – Who???

 

Nupur & Raj – GUNJAN

 

Dia – WHAT???

 

Samrat – That's it main is Karan ko chodoonga nahi. Pehele haath pakadna phir gaana gaana aur ab meri chashmish ke photos that's the limitAngry

 

Raj – Yea strange right par gunjan is the only girl whose photos Karan clicks

 

Gunjan – Raj, aisa nahi hai.

 

Raj – Well agar aisa nahi hai toh Karan almost has a cupboard full of your photos only.

 

Karan – Woh toh aise hi hai

 

Samrat – Cupboard full. Gunjan ki itni tasveeron ka voh achaar banata hai.

 

Karan – Meri baat chodo Tumhe pata hai guyz jab maine Nupur ka salsa dance ka suna tab mujhe bhai aur Nupur ka dance yaad aa gaya. Yaad hai bhai tum aur Nupur ek saath salsa seekte the.  

 

Mayank – Tumne Salsa seekha hai par tumne toh kaha ki Tumhe aata nahi.

 

Nupur – Haan woh main usme Kabhi achi nahi thi

 

Karan – Achi nahi thi stop kidding me, Hai na Gunjan tum aur bhai ne jab perform kiya tha tab log mujhse aake kehne lage ki tum Nupur ko bhabhi kab bulane vale ho. Ask Gunjan

 

Gunjan – Haan Di aap ke performance ke baad Pushkar ne Karan aur mujhe dono ko kaha ki jijaji aur bhabhi bulane ki practice shuru kardo.

 

(Pushkar is just an imaginary character and will have no reference in the future.)

 

Mayank – Hnn Bhabhi. Nupur us, us Raj ke saath Kabhi nahi. Main hone nahi doonga. AngryBilkul nahi. Us raj ko agar maine Nupur se alag nahi kia toh mera naam bhi Mayank nahi

 

Just then Miss aha enters

 

Aha – Samrat, Mayank ek minute Yahan aao.

 

She takes them to a deserted class room

 

Aha – Ab jo main tum dono ko bol rahi hoon who tumhe hurt ya affect kar sakta hai.

 

Samrat – Kya baat hai miss Aha

 

Aha – Samrat tumhare basketball team main se Raghu ko nikaala ja raha hai.

 

Samrat – Why mam woh toh acha khelta hai.

 

Aha – I know tumhare team main sabhi acha khelte hain. Par woh sabse poor perform karta hai. And iska yeh kaaran hai ki they are taking Karan in the team after all a national champion ka kuch toh fayda ho excel ki basketball team ko.

 

Samrat – What?? Us karan ke vajeh se aap Raghu ko nikaala rahe hain

 

Aha – Maine tumhe Raghu ke favour main ladne ke liye yaahan nahi bulaaya hai.

 

Samrat – Then???

 

Aha – Board yeh bhi sonch raha hai ki tumhari captaincy Karan ko de den. But mere bahut samjhane par unhone tumhe chance dena thik samjha.

 

Samrat felt that there was no ground under his feet. Mayank understood his feelings and kept a supportive hand on him. Samrat turned to him and smiled. He had only one thought in his mind.

 

Samrat – Pehle Gunjan aur ab basketball yeh Karan mujhse aur kya, kya lega.

 

Samrat – Par mam

 

Aha – No Samrat tumhe next match main Karan se zyaada shots karne hai do u understand.

 

Samrat – Yes mam….

 

Aha – Aur Mayank tumhare liye bhi ek bad news hai.

 

Now Mayank understood the extremity of the bad news but what he heard he could not believe his ears.

 

Aha – Mayank tum har saal college main first aate rahe ho par is baar results lagne se pehle yeh bata doon ki tum is baar second aaye ho.

 

Mayank – WHAT??? Par first kaun aaya.

 

Aha – Raj.

 

Now Samrat had to handle Mayank

 

Mayank – Par kaise exam time pe toh who Yahan nahi tha.

 

Aha – But he gave the exams before coming to Excel and topped the list. The board is planning to keep him as a backup for all the competitions so that if you falter you will be replaced by Raj.

 

Mayank – Thank you mam hum aapki baat sunenge.

 

Aha – Ok then I should go.

 

Aha goes and near the door she turns around and says.

 

Aha – Mujhe tum dono par pura bharosa hai. Apne position aur apne Pyaar ko bachao.

 

Mayank and Samrat – What???

 

Aha – Apni Morena sisters ko vaapis apne paas lao. Main ek psychology ki teacher hoon aur tum (to Samrat) Gunjan se aur tum (to Mayank) Nupur ko apne paas vaapis lao. Tum un dono se bahut Pyaar karte ho bas unhe bhi us Pyaar ka ehsaas dilana hai. Promise karo mujhe.

 

Mayank – We promise mam.

 

Samrat – What??

 

Aha – Then Mayank tum dono fir se is college ke stars banjaoge.

 

She leaves the classroom.

 

Samrat – Mayank tum kya keh rahe ho.

 

Mayank – Main thik keh raha hoon. Mujhe Ma ne bhi bataya aur main khud bhi Nupur ke liye feel karne lag raha hoon. Tum soncho jab Gunjan hasti hai tab tum khush hote ho, jab voh sad feel karti hai toh tum use manane ki koshish karte ho. Jab koi aur use touch karta hai toh tum us insaan ko maarna chahte ho, jab koi aur us ke saath zyaada time spend karta hai toh tum hurt feel karte ho. Karte ho ki nahi.

 

Samrat – Haan karta hoon. Karta hoon main Gunjan se PYAAR.

 

Mayank – Toh bus ab hume unhe is Pyaar ka ehsaas dilaana hai.

 

Samrat – Aur un dono bhaiyon ko dikhana hai ki Excel main hamesha Samrat aur Mayank hi best rahe chahe koi bhi aaye tab bhi hum hi best rahenge. Deal Dude.

 

Mayank – Deal. Toh chalo chalte hai varna sab hamare bare mein poochenge.

 

They go to the canteen where everyone is laughing on something and deciding.

 

Uday – Are Sam aao na abhi, abhi Karan and Raj ne announce kia ki is Friday inke yahan ek party hai. Aur Friday is only four days later.

 

Samrat – Really occasion kya hai.

 

Karan and Raj(with a smirk) Evil Smile – Gunjan aur Nupur ke liye.

Samrat and Mayank – Yeh nahi sudhrenge

 

 Dia – Are tum dono bhi na, Woh pure Excel ko behtar jaan paye is liye party rakhi hai.

 

Mayank – Oh! Acha Nupur abhi 1:30 hue hain. Thik 5:00 ghar aa jaana.

 

Raj – Main tumhe 4:30 pick up karta hoon.

 

Nupur – Acha thik hai chalo ghar chalte hai. Gunjan tujhe kuch kaam ke liye library main rukna hai na.

 

Gunjan – Haan Di

 

Nupur – Thik hai baad main aa jaana.

 

Mayank winks at Samrat and Samrat winks back at Samrat both understanding what the other is supposed to do.

 

(For our information Mayank was supposed to do what is planned when she comes home. And Samrat was supposed to become friends with Gunjan again.)

 

Uday – Yeh kya ho raha hai. Oh! No Sam mujhe teri neeyat pe shaq tha ab pura yakeen aa gaya hai. Par tujhe Mayank ke alava aur koi nahi mila.

 

Others hadn't seen this so they thought Uday was mad

 

Dia – DODO

 

Samrat – Chal Benji chalte hain Bye guys.

 

Dia – Ao doll main tumhe ghar chod deti hoon bye

 

Nupur – Yeh thik hoga bye

 

Karan – Main rooko library main tumhare saath.

 

Samrat – Tujhe main library main gusne bhi naa doon. Hamesha Gunjan ke peeche pada rahta hai

.

 Sab ek doosre ko alvida kehkar ghar ya library chale jaate hain.

 

What is Samrat's plan. Will Gunjan forgive him. Kya Karan in dono ke beech fir aayega.

Mayank ke ghar pe kya hoga. Nupur Mayank ke liye feel karegi ya Raj apni taang adayega.

 

 

Karan and Raj aren' negative so don't feel bad they both are doing great work for Sajan and Mayur

 


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Only 24 reviews and 594 views not fair at all
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Awesum..!!!!!..

ur ff is relli amazing...pliz update sooon...!!!

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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!Clap

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fabstasti
aweosome
fabulous
too goood
lovly
exacly what i wanted to make samrat joulis but not mayank : (
becuz mayank didn't hurt nupur
but samrat did hurt gunjan
but it's oke
i mean it's awesome
 
hey can you plz tell me when the first  new episode started after
the strike

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cooll part  i love it plzz contuied soon

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I just started reading ur ff and it is awsomeWink

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wow i just read the whole ff and its awesome youre doing an awesome job and making the boys jealous is just fun to watch/readLOL
 
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