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Gunjan – Di chalo utho college nahi jaana kya.
Nupur – paanch minute aur.
Gunjan – Nahin Di tum agar nahi uthi na toh Mayank aur naaraz ho jaayega
Nupur – Are baap re Mayank aaj use shukriya kehna hai acha hua tune utha diya
Gunjan – Ab chalo bhi Dia kab se cheekh rahi hai bahut khush lag rahi hai aaj.
Nupur – Pata hai Gunjan aaj mujhe baal kholne ka man kar raha hai.
Gunjan - Kyun Di tum bahut kum baal kholti ho aaj aisa kya khaas hai.
Nupur - Pata nahi Gunjan mujhe kyun lag raha hai ki aaj kuch special hone wala hai.
Gunjan - Haan Di mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki kuch khaas hoga aaj par aisa kya hoga
Nupur - Kya pata chal college chalet hai
Nupur - Chal Gunjan ab main chalti hoon
Gunjan - Thikh hai Di
Suddenly she sees Samrat
Gunjan - Samrat, Samrat
Samrat - Are yeh toh chashmish hai
Benji - Toh kya ho gaya
Samrat - Are Dia mujhe kha jayegi agar phir iske saath dikha. Acha sun mere paas idea hai sun.
He tells him his plan
Gunjan - Samrat, main tumhe kabse bula rai thi
Samrat - Maine suna nahi Gunjan
Gunjan - Gunjan…..chashmish nahi ….. Uhm main yeh kehna chahti hoon ki thank you
Samrat - You are welcome kuch aur kaam nahi hai toh bye main ja raha hoon. Samrat ke paas behenji logon ke saath time spend karne ke liye time nahi hain.
Gunjan - Par, par Samrat….
Samrat walked away leaving Benji to complete his rest of the plan.
Benji – Itni sad mat dikho Samrat ke liye u r like any other girl. He used u to win the bet against Dia and now has left u
Gunjan - Bet, kaunsa bet….
Benji tells her all abt the bet
Benji – Meri salah maano stay away from him.
Saying this he walked away from her and met Samrat in a classroom.
Benji – Us ke aankhon main aansoon the
Samrat – Main kya karoon do din ki dosti ke liye saalon bhar ka rishta kaise tod doon.
Benji – But…
Samrat – Chod na voh thik ho jayegi.
Samrat leaves the room.
Benji – Shayad…… but shayad kismat tujhe bhulne na de. Hopefully aisa din na aye ki tu is do dinki dosti ke liye sab kuch chodne ko tayaar ho jaye.
Nupur – Mayank, acha hua tum yahan mil gaye main to tumhe thanks kehna chahti thi.
Mayank - Hmm…. Hey C.J yaahan
C.J – Hi Mayank, Nupur kaise ho dance acha tha
Nupur – Hi C.J
Mayank – Thanks C.J mujhe Nupur ko maaf karne ki salah dene ki
Nupur – Oh toh tum ne salaa dia mujhe lagaa… kher tumhe thanks kehna chahiye.
C.J – Its ok guys itna mat karo. Oh by the way abhi sadoo ka class hai jaana nahi hai kya.
Mayank & Nupur – Deodar Sir… mar gaye…
They hurry out of the canteen where they crash into Gunjan.
Nupur – Oh! Gunjan sorry mujh… are tu ro kyun rahi hai kissi ne kuch kaha, bata mujhe
Gunjan – Nahi Di woh…
Looks at Mayank
Nupur – Mayank tum aage jao main aati hoon.
Mayank – Ok
Nupur – Bata Gunjan
Gunjan – Di woh Samrat………
Tells her the whole Samrat incident
Nupur – Woh Samrat main use chodoongi nahi, use agar nani na yaad dilaya to mera naam Nup…
Gunjan – Nahi Di in bade shehar ke ladkon ko lagta hai ki hum in ke bina nahi reh sakte hain hum inhe dikhate hai. Ab tum class main jao aur main Ms Aha ke class main jaati hoon.
Thik hai Gunjan ja…
While entering class Gunjan meets Dia her ABC(Annie, Benji, Chako) Samrat and Uday.
Dia – Oh! Doll aaj itni sad kyun lag rahi ho
Gunjan- Aise hi Dia pata nahi kyun mujhe aisa lag raha ki aaj mujhe pata chala ki Bombay Morena se acha kyun hai. Bye
Uday – What did she mean?
Dia – pata nahi dodo pata nahi
Entrance of Excel
Two bikes enter the gates of excel the people can't be seen as they r wearing helmets
(Even in fanfics we need to follow the safety rules. Anyways it does add to the suspense.)
The guys turn around to see the bikes and the girls to know what the guys are seeing. The bikes stop in front of the main building. The people get down look around and see a sweeper. They go to him and ask him about the whereabouts of two teacher's classes at the present time. All the students hear this. They remove their helmets and put it on the bike and enter the building. All the students who were bunking the lecture suddenly were seen running to the classes (sp- girls).
Ms Aha's class
Gunjan is sitting in a seat and has no partner. Dia and Samrat sit behind her. Uday and Benji sit beside her and Annie and Chako sit beside Dia and Samrat.
Dia- Yeh class kuch zyaada hi full nahi lag rahi aaj, but look koi Gunjan dear ke paas nahi baith raha.
Gunjan hears this but ignores. Suddenly Ms Aha enters
Aha – Wow lagta hai aaj sab padhne ke mood main hai. Or maybe something else…
Dia – Something else, what mam…
Aha – Kuch happening ho raha hai aur tumhe pata nahi strange…
Dia – kya hua mam.
Aha - Well Aaj excel main humare class main ek naya student aaya hai. Please enter.
We see a shoe and someone walking. Gunjan gasps, a silent one which is only audible to her neighbors. All the girls go Ooo and Aaaa. Samrat is bothered with Gunjan's gasp.
In the meanwhile
Nupur enters a bit late and finds C.J sitting with Mayank thus making her sit in front of them all alone.
C.J – Sorry Nupur he caught me outside and dragged me to class
Nupur – Koi baat nahi C.J
Deodar – Ok cla….
Someone- Excuse me sir….
No one can see the face only the voice is audible and Nupur gasps.
(Dono behno ka reaction kafi matching hain)
C.J – Kya hua Nupur
Nupur – Nahi kuch bhi nahi main jaanti hoon…nahi woh yahan kaise.
Deodar – Tum itne late kaise
Suddenly the principle walks in.
Kids I'm really proud to announce that humare excel main ek naya student aaya hai. Andar aao. Bachon yeh hai……..
Short update guyz par suspense ka maza toh dheere dheere aata hai. Next will be a full fledged update on the newcomers
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