Prithvi - RT-MC FF - Link to Epi 45 on pg 157 (Page 4)

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cute_madhu

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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 6:22am | IP Logged

woho gal..got me hooked..

well i had expected Prithvi to be rude..buh he was a lil too rude..

thanx for the PM buh well I hav a link to favs..I love u'r FF..n keep lukin for updates..loolzz..me vry restless bout the story..

sowie yaar pichli baar ka edit nahi kiya..so so sowie...

buh iss baar so as to compensate..I'd write a long compli..hpe u don't get bored...

Well gal jus went thru the whole FF once again..niche pichli wali quoetes ke bhi replies hai..lolzzzzzz

Well now not borin u mre..cumin bac to tis amzin FF..

yes..the entry of Prithvi as i said earlier in 4rth prt was jus way too gd..well it suits RT as for his alleged rudeness..n well the role suits him,..I cud rilli imagine him..being the hrd core person..jus one tin..RT ke expressions itni swiftly cahnge nahi hote.Buh I tink Prithvi ji is equal to nanhi in givin expressions..

as mugz is an expression queen..

gosh ssee yet again I got distracted from the original matter..

Ohk yes..

"Tall, very fair and broad shouldered…there was something awe-inspiring in the way he was walking…as though every bit of land he covered with his feet was his …and if not, then it became his own the instant he strode over it…"...

wohoo u seem to be real gd in using expressions ranju di..like the way u descibed tis air of command, the royality n the authoritive prt was jus too gd..

n then "uninteresed in the no. of eyes fixed on him..." gosh that was where I got my instincts cumin true..that he is gonna be the hrd core person n all...

well truly opp's..here nanhi is all friendly, so exuberant, evry one loves her, so sweet n caring n beautiful n lovely, lively gal..

wahi Prithvi is the all akdoo, rude, I am the best egoist (well I take that all males..I mean mostly r so egoistic..females too r..like me..em a egoist..buh still males r born egoist n Prithvi in ur FF is an example.."

buh still the most handsum, striking guy..n aweinspiring macho man too...

I loved Risubh....he is choo chweet..n mre so I love the way vrinda, nishi n our dear Nanhi r so friendly to all..n don't like discriminate people for luks n all...like as u said all pimply n appears to be real geek n studious..buh I too love these kinda people coz they to r gd yaar...n the way they the trio is so close to him..I loved that when he said Tri Devis, my mothers hav cum, em doomed..Lolzzzz...g88888..

loved it.. n the nurse prt too..lolzzz..he wants a young n beautiul n they teasin him..lolzzzzzzzzzzz

n then..hmmm..kya likha hai letter mein..has to be sumfin serious..U ain't disclosin it..buh well I'd wait as the wait is worth it...

wow..now hmmm...

seriously I distaste men who r the hrd cre egoist, we r evrytin..gosh..He is so rude..em hundred percent sure he ws shocked coz he recalled seein nanhi..buh changed his expressions sweetly..

he is sooo sooooooo sarcastic n rude..gosh..like who treats their visitors like that..well bad boys, spoilt guys do..n I think he is nanhi's bigada rais..

asal maino mein toh Prithvi in u'r FF is a bigada rais..n well i think he's an heir to a big will n property..so his behaviour's taken...

hmmm..old tree..

aww poor nanhi..so confused..n kinda sad that he didn't remember her...while she takes that incidence as the first romantic tin that happened to her..

Gosh..u know how much I yearn to teach tis bandar, Prithvi a lesson..here my poor gal came in search of anklet in a house rightfully hers, n he sayin why hav u come to OUR house n treatin her as a thief.n then even though she says sowie, he's so rude n like makes my gal so nervousn near to tears..batamiz..n then at last says close the door behind for the quota of UNWANTED visitors is ova,...he calls nandini's family n her as unwanted..such a..urrghhhhh

n here nahi 4gives him..tinkin its her fault n will try to be friend him..

gosh she's so naive n innocent..

I tink he'd get attracted by tis side of her first n then wud want to protect tis higly immature, naive nonchalant beauty..n then when he sees her bold side..he'd fall head ova heels for her..

that's what i tink...

Ummm..is prithvi joinin the college..If yes then suvek has got a rival n competition..tough competion at that..

hmm..two males fightin ova a nanhi innocent buh highly beautifu babes..umm damsel wud be better..

Gosh ranju di..evry time i tink deeply on u'r FF n I get another revealin aspect which leaves me in wanting to read mre...

now u r gettin the reader in the situation called.." circles in circles"

n then u'd take us out..well i wudn't hav figured it out fi I too hadn't read the single prt two times...

so here I end what might seem borin to u..buh tis is a full edit..hpe didn't miss a single scene...sfter readin it two times..the scenes were embebbed in mah mind..so i guess i actually didn't miss nytin oder than sum small prt..like the tree..well abb usse rehne dette hai..tis compli has becum to long..n may luk like naother prt of the FF..lolzzzzzzz

once again..Hats Off to u gal n to tis g88 FF of ur's..

perfectly framed story, which grips the reader till the end..n leaves me wantin to read mre..

superb, brilliant..

well I had typed so many wrds of applause n appreciation.buh deleted em..U see when I'd love the prt the most..I'd give all of my dictionary to u..like all the wrds of praise I know..n if i finish em now..u'd tink they r repeated..so thats why...

buh still..mind boggling........

Well now an end to the sequeal of the prt above (ROFL)...

can't ask for mre..buh do cont asap...

Love ya loads ranju di.......t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu Embarrassed

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cute_madhu

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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 6:33am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kautilya04

Originally posted by cute_madhu

awesum girlie..superb..brilliant..jus the most exciting n enticing FF I ever read...

em totally hooked to tis FF of ur's..seriously..I hav fallen in love wiv tis FF jus now..when i read the three prts all together...

Its one of the best n mosssstttt beautiful stories ever read..truly the kind I had wanted to imagine..n yes it is beautifully written..each n every expression used n potrayed is worth reading..I wish I cud jus go on readin n readin n readin..tis fic is extremly beautiful..

n u dare not say that em exageratin the fact that the fic is overtly special to me coz i never flaunt on my feelings..n right now if u cud read my mind then u wud hav known how deeply i hav becum attached to tis FF...

Well firstly the title i.e the name..: the name of tis fic is sumfin that shows the depth of the feeling of a gal..as per as I understand..the first time i saw the name n I knew it was either a sad story..or the one where the gal is gonna fall head over heals for sumone named prithvi..actually i'd blame my state of mind for these thoughts as right now I was actually thinking abt a fic wiv a lambiii Judai tin..so was in the mode of takin tins deeply in mind...

then cumin to the storyline: Jazab hai yaar...kamal kar ditta hiriye...it was sumtin that left me speechless..like its sooo enticing that i went on readin till the end..the way the story is woven..the way it starts..the way u potray nandini..the way u potray the friends trio n how suvek likes nandini n the relation wiv grewal uncle...n then her first encounter wiv the handsum demi-god (as she thinks)...or the boy who she will not meet again (as she tinks..I know they will meet..surely..afterall that's destined...star-crossed...destined to meet sumday)....

I jus loved it as a whole......

now not boring u anymre....Gosh me ended up writin soooo much..hpe u didn't get boredddddd......

Well now a biiiiiiiiggggg request....Plzzzzz plzzzzzzzz update regularly..or atleast very sn.........em dying to read the nxt prt..seriouslyy

Plz update asap....n pleassssseeeeeee plzzzzzzz PM me wheneva u update nxt..(if possible)..plzzzzz do...

Love ya loadsssss hunni-bunni......t.ccccccccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu Embarrassed

madhu...i cannot really explain to you how much your feelings for my FF have touched me and encouraged me Embarrassed

. Love you soooooo much for this Hug

..you made my day.....i cant thank u enough for all that you've said. Hug

i am really moved beyond words. lolzz..yahi toh humari khubi hai mohtarma..n well u needn't thank me..em obliged..n wrtin mah feelings is a pleasure to me..the pleasure is all mine signora....

please dont call your comments boring darling...every word you've written is like pep-talk for me Embarrassed

...and if what you've written is boring, then i hope and pray you bore me like this everytime i update my FF. Embarrassed

wohoo..now thats so gd..I surely wud brill u each day my dearest ranhu di..surely wud..as I said complimenting g88 writes is all what I love..readin is life to me..so I pray n hope that I keep readin u'r wrks till eternity...

I promise i'l pm u as soon as i update the story...luv u once again sweetheart Hug

yes dear..thanx from my side..R u a brn sweet heart..well I tink so..coz u will surely cause me diabetes one day..buh well I deserve so..lolzz..

no u deserve mre..coz u r above all I expected...sowie for quotin now..buh seriously cudn't resist..

Love ya loads my sweet si friend or behna..jus love ya from cre n depth of mah heart..

I seriously dunno, why em I so attached to tis FF n U..buh well I tink that was destined..

n yes..Love ya too jaanu.....t.cccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu Embarrassed

cute_madhu

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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 6:41am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kautilya04

Thanks for liking it madhu Big smile

..will wait for your detailed comment Embarrassed

u can call me ranju

sowie sowie..so sowie ranju di,..buh em such an..urgghh..I 4got.buh iss baar I gave a biiiggg compli...

read that kkk..

hpe that makes u update asap.....

gotta rush..goin shoppinn...

Love ya loads hunni-bunni.......t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu Embarrassed

maddiie

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Posted: 14 December 2008 at 10:17am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kautilya04

Originally posted by maddiie

1ce again...amazin!... Big smile

prithvi shudnt hav been so rude!...hope he changes his attitude later in da story Wink

jus luv da way u wrote it!...its awsm... Clap

thanks buddy Big smile

so u wantprithvi to change hisattitude huh! Wink

....all i can say is...no...i cant say anything, my lips are sealed Wink

weell..i gues i hav 2 wait n watch...no read!.... LOL

kautilya04

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Posted: 15 December 2008 at 9:27pm | IP Logged

@ madhu - OMG madhu sweetie...kya comment diya hain...just want to hug u meri jaan. Hug

but i am feeling very bad that i cannot give u detailed reply Ouch

...there are so many things i need to tell u about your observations Ouch

. But it will be giving away too much about the story Wink

...i'm having a very bad stomach ache right now because i have to keep it all inside. sigh! LOL

and all those news articles that made allegations about rajat's rudeness are all false yaar...all just rumours spread by some reporters...dont believe any of it sweetheart Big smile

and me too feel there is a kismat konnection here Embarrassed

....luv ya sweets Hug

kautilya04

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Posted: 15 December 2008 at 9:32pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by maddiie

Originally posted by kautilya04

Originally posted by maddiie

1ce again...amazin!... Big smile

prithvi shudnt hav been so rude!...hope he changes his attitude later in da story Wink

jus luv da way u wrote it!...its awsm... Clap

thanks buddy Big smile

so u wantprithvi to change hisattitude huh! Wink

....all i can say is...no...i cant say anything, my lips are sealed Wink

weell..i gues i hav 2 wait n watch...no read!.... LOL

yup! thats my diabolical plan my friend Wink

cute_madhu

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Posted: 16 December 2008 at 3:27am | IP Logged

Originally posted by kautilya04

@ madhu - OMG madhu sweetie...kya comment diya hain...just want to hug u meri jaan. Hug

oyyeeeee hooyeeeeeeee bada pyaar aa raha hai hum par..well I deserve it..lolzz..n as i said b4..the pleasyre is all mine signora..so no thanx..n remember..in friendship..no sowie..no thanx..n yes huggies from mah sides too....

but i am feeling very bad that i cannot give u detailed reply Ouch

...there are so many things i need to tell u about your observations Ouch

.Haan..do temme..r they right..atleast haan ya na...plzzzzzzzz...well Prithvi has suffered a lot in past n isliye he is hrd core person..add tis to my observations..like my thoughts..plzz temme em I right... But it will be giving away too much about the story Wink

...i'm having a very bad stomach ache right now because i have to keep it all inside. sigh! LOL

lolzzz...

well koi baat nahi ji..baad mein batana...

and all those news articles that made allegations about rajat's rudeness are all false yaar...all just rumours spread by some reporters...dont believe any of it sweetheart Big smile

well it shows from some of his interviews too..buh well ohkk..

and me too feel there is a kismat konnection here Embarrassed

....luv ya sweets Hug

Woo..do I take that as a..umm..well I guess em right...

okk..update asap dear......

Love ya loads my sweetheart......t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu Embarrassed

kautilya04

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Posted: 16 December 2008 at 5:04am | IP Logged

Originally posted by cute_madhu

Originally posted by kautilya04

@ madhu - OMG madhu sweetie...kya comment diya hain...just want to hug u meri jaan. Hug

but i am feeling very bad that i cannot give u detailed reply Ouch

...there are so many things i need to tell u about your observations Ouch

...i'm having a very bad stomach ache right now because i have to keep it all inside. sigh! LOL

lolzzz...

well koi baat nahi ji..baad mein batana...

and all those news articles that made allegations about rajat's rudeness are all false yaar...all just rumours spread by some reporters...dont believe any of it sweetheart Big smile

well it shows from some of his interviews too..buh well ohkk..

and me too feel there is a kismat konnection here Embarrassed

....luv ya sweets Hug

Woo..do I take that as a..umm..well I guess em right...

okk..update asap dear......

Love ya loads my sweetheart......t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu Embarrassed

jitne guesses badhenge, utna mera pet dard bhi badhega.... LOL

and there was no clue in the last line darling Tongue

...i havent even watched that movie... LOL

just used it in place of saying that like you me too feel this connection between the fic, u and me was destined Embarrassed

so u'l have to come up with some new guesses... LOL

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