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DVFF:SOME LUV STORIES ATTENTION PLZ!! (Page 4)

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Posted: 14 January 2009 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Very nice Update dear...keep it up..Pls. post the next part soon!
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thanks alot 4 the commentsSmileBig smile 

Edited by sweet_1 - 02 March 2009 at 9:43am
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first meeting was good enjoy reading it update soon
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heyyyyyyy
could u plssssssss post the next part soonnnn.....
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nice story maheen.. update soon
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!Some luv stories live for ever!

!Veer Aditi Thinking About Eachother! 
 
Radhika snubbed Aditi while going;

Radhika:Tum bhi na,kya zarurat thi baat karne ki,apni aadat badal nahi sakti kya,in larkon se tum dur raho.

Veer kept on looking Aditi,till she was out of sight & smiled a bit,he did'nt speak for a couple of seconds.

Dharam:Lost somewhere?

Veer:Yup,in my lady luv's beautiful eyes(and he sighed)now come on lets go back to the hotel,Two of them reached the hotel and entered their room.

It was night time,

Dharam:Me change kar ke aata hun,Tum bhi soh jaao.

After half n hour dharam changed his clothes n saw veer was still awake,putting the switch of the table lamp on n off over n over again and was in a deep thought.

Dharam:Tum abhi tak soye nahi.

Veer:Im not feeling sleepy.

Dharam:Kahin us larki ke baare may to nahi soch rahe?

Veer:Us larki ko dekhne kay baad to neend hee nahi aarahi.I love her.

Dharam:Han kyun nahi ab to neend gayi bhook gayi or dil bhi gaya.

c'mon.Its just a time waste nothing elz.

Veer(sighed)

Veer:tumhe wo kesi lagi?

Dharam:Umm...she was pretty,achi thi....

Veer:PRETTY?

Dharam:Kyun us ki shaan main me kuch zyada keh gaya kya?

Veer:She was DAMN GORGEOUS!!her shining eyes,her long shining hair,her face bilkul wese jesi mene sochi thi shy,cool-headed,beautiful,she is the most amazing girl i have ever seen.

Dharam yawned and said:Ya...ya..ya..

Veer:Dharam kya tumhe kahin se jalne ki smell aarahi hai?

Dharam:Nahin.kyun?

Veer:Mujhe aarahi hai.

Dharam:kahan se?

Veer:Tumse(laughing)

Dharam:Very funny.(made a disgusting face)

Veer:Ab tumhe us dusri akroo larki ne ghaas nahi daali,to iss me meri kya fault hai?

Dharam:Choro.Us ki to tum baat hii naa karo.What does she think of herself??Aese hi paagal kehkar chali gayii.badtameez kahin ki.

Veer:Are yaar...jis tarah se tum shocked expression ke saath usay dekhrahe the usne yahi kehna tha,shukar karo usne sirf tumhe pagal kaha.Main uski jaga hota to main tumhe laatain,muke thapar sab maar kar behosh gira deta or tumhare ram naam sattye ke liye pura crowd aata(laughing)

Dharam:Wo to mujhe larki nahi kuch or hee lagti he badtameez ghamandi kahin ki.

Veer:Han..han har luv story ki shuruaat aese hi hoti hai,pehle larai phir dosti or phir pyar.

Dharam:Ya whatever..mujhe sone do.

Veer:Gud nite;veer thought in his mind(God..ek bar kal phir us larki se mulaqat hojai to maza aajaiga)

In the girls room:

Aditi was sitting beside the window,thinking of veer,the way they collided with eachother,and the way he was showing concern for her that whether she was hurt or not.She started her conversation with her sister,who was lying on the bed;

Aditi:Kya tumne aaj us larke ko dekha tha,jis se meri takkar(collision)hui thi?

Radhika:Han kyun?

Aditi:Kitna cute or handsome tha na?

Radhika:Pata nahi main larko ke featurez par dehaan nahi deti.

Aditi:He was so attractive.

Radhika:Oh hooo.......abhi se hi itna pyar aaraha he us par.

Aditi:main to ye dua kar rahi hun ke kal mujhe wo phir se milay aur me uss say baten karun.

Radhika:Ab ye mat kehna ke hez ur prince charming please

Aditi:Well he is my prince charming...no doubt.

Radhika:Agar uss say pyar karti ho to bata kyun nahi deti?

Aditi:Itni jaldi nahi abhi to milay hain,main ye jaanna chahti hun ke us ke dil me mere liye kya he.

Radhika:Ok dekh lena..ab soh jao gud nite..

Aditi:Gud nite.(smiled)

!Precap!

the four royals meet again at the same place

Next update

Next weekendTongueSmileWink



Edited by sweet_1 - 02 May 2009 at 7:01am

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lovely part...
thanks for updating this FF too.. Smile
waiting for the next update..
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hey lovely dear keep it up!

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