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woow....wkd update...fnx for the heads up! update soon xxx
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!SOME LUV STORIES LIVE FOREVER!
 
!PART:2! JOURNEY BEGINS!
 
!RECAP!
Intro of Kingdom of arya,Veer gets late for the puja,& gets scolded by Dharam n Aryawardhan but due to his tricks he becomes successful in defending himself infront of his dad & makes a promise to his dad that he will not be late for the morning puja from onwards.At the dining table while having breakfast,The king announces that both his sons will visit hill station for their mind refreshment for 1 month.And orders them to leave within three days.Ab aage;
 
It was a sunny morning outside the Kingdom of Dehli,the King Karan Singh Rathore & his wife Queen Nivriti were waiting in the main hall for the morning puja,Princess Radhika was ready but as usual her sis was taking a lot of time to get ready;she shouted at Princess Aditi;
Radhika:Aditiiiii!! jaldi karo kitni dair lagao gi papa aur maa wait kar rahe hain.
Aditi:Tumhe hamesha se pata he ke tayar hone me itni hi der lagati hun chahe---
Radhika:(interrupts her)chahe zalzala bhi aa jaye maloom he,lekin puja ke liye to kuch sharam karlo upar jaakar bhagwan ko kya jawaab do gi bolo??
Aditi gave no answer she was so much absorbed in herself that she didnt even pay attention to Radhika's words
Radhika:Aditiiii!.....theek he jitni dair lagani he lagao hum ja rahe hain.Maa aur papa ko khud hi jawab dena.
After half an hour Aditi came out of her room wearing pink-purple shade dress,she looked at the mirror finally to assure that she was looking pretty,and then she went to the main hall
Radhika:Aaye Rajkumari Aditi,bohot jaldi uth kar aagayin aap(sarcastically)
Q:Ohfho Radhika subha hi subha kya tumne use tang karna shuru kar diya he.
Radhika:Lekin maa,Additi humse choti he use samjhana hum apna kartavve(duty)samajhte hain,or haan maa hum kisi bhi wajah se iss se peeche nahin hatenge,aap ye baat jaan lijiye.
Q:Lekin har waqt baat baat par tokna sahi nahi,Additi ab itni choti bhi nahi rahi k tum uss par apna rob(dominate)jita sako,tum dono larkiyan ho,larkiyon ko tayaar hone me waqt to lagta he,is mein buraai kya he, batao?
Radhika:Lekin maa------
Q:(interrupts her)Or han jahan tak baat he dair se uthne ki to jab jaldi uthegi to jaldi tayaar ho kar puja k liye sahi waqt par aaigi.
K:Haan,Nivriti bilkul theek keh rahi hain,beta agar tum ghor karo to raat ko agar wo dair se soti he to mehel ke kaam kar k hi soti he or kabhi kabhi to jab tum thak jaati ho to tumhara kaam bhi issi ko hi karna parta he.
Radhika:Pitaji wo sab me maanti hun k ye bhi kaam karti he lekin me bhi raat ko der se soti hun or subha jaldhi bhi uth jati hun to phir ye kyun nahi?
K:Beta!(with a smile)tum ne shyd suna nahin k Nivriti ne kya kaha,yeh aphi choti he,iss par ab tak jo bhi zimedaari sonpi he yeh unhe nibhaarahi he,ab aik dam se to is par saara bojh to nahi daal sakte.Hum abhi zinda he or hum jaante he k isse kese sambhaalna he ye sab kuch tum hum dono par chordo.
Additi:Shukriya pitaji aap dono ko mera itna khayal he.
Radhika:Kya me khayal nahi rakhti.
Aditi:Tum khyaal kam aur rob zyada jamaati ho.
 
Radhika gave a furious look at her.
Radhika:Tum kabhi nahi sudhro gi.
Aditi:(With a naughty smile on her face)Bilkul!!aur jo sudhar gayi wo Aditi nahi.
K:BAS!!!!tum dono ko humari maujoodgi ka ehsaas he bhi k nahi???jab dekho to hum dono ki parwah kiye baghair hi larhna shuru hojaate ho.Chalo ab tum log idhar aao,aur khaamoshi se puja karo.Mujhe tum dono ki aik bhi awaaz nahi aani chahiye,samajh gayeen??
 
Both nodded and sat down,without saying another word.
After puja,both the princessess went to their room & the King & Queen sat down in the lounge.
Radhika entered the room,seeing Aditi sitting idol on her bed,she started snubbing her with her usual way.
Radhika:Kyun?ab khush hogayi maa or pitaji se hume daanth parhwa kar,hum agar thori si sakhti karte hain to sirf tumhari hi bhalaai k liye,aur tum ho k samajhti nahi ho...........aur.....................
Aditi was'nt paying any attention to her sister's words,she was lost in her own world & Radhika observed that;
Radhika:(In full anger)Aditi!!!!tumhe kuch samajh bhi aaraha he k hum kya keh rahe hain??
Aditi:Nahin,hum to kuch or soch rahe the.
Radhika:Kya?
Aditi:Aaj hume sapna aaya k hum apne rajkumaar se milay,kaash hume wo sach me mil jaaye.
Radhika:Uff..tum or tumhare bekaar sapne,tum iss tarha kii baaten mujse na kya karo,mujhe ye achi nahi lagteen.
Aditi:Tum to pedaaishi buzurg ho humare ghar me.
 
A maid comes and interrupts them;
Maid:Maharaj ne aap dono ko apne paas bulaaya hai.
Radhika:Kyun?
Maid:Keh rahe hain k zaruri baat karni he.
Radhika:Theek he,theek he,hum dono aate hain.
The maid leaves.
Both of them go to lounge.
Aditi:Aap ne hume bulaaya pitaji?
K:Haan.Darasal,hum soch rahe the k bohot arsa ho chuka he k tum dono mehel se baahir nahi gaye,to kyun na ab tum log kahin ghoomne chale jaao,is tarha tumhara dil behel jaayega.Kyun?theek kaha na humne?
Radhika:Woh sab to theek he,lekin hum jaaye ge kaha?hume to kisi khaas jaga ka bhi nahi pata.
K:Humne jaga soch rakhi he..........Manali!tum dono teen din baad jaoge,aik maheenay k liye.Taiyaar rehna.Humari gaari me.Mujhse paise le lena dikkat nahi hogi.
Both nodded their heads showing their approval.
 
Two days passed.The girls packed their stuff n were ready to leave.
Radhika to Aditi:Chalo jaldi dair ho rahi he.
Aditi:Aa rahe hain hum..
Both went to their parents to say bye,and took their blessings.
K&Q:Apna Khayal rakhna.
Both nodded and left.
 
IN THE KINGDOM OF ARYA
It was 9 am and everyone in the kingdom was in a hurry,as both the boys were leaving for their journey to MANALI.Dharam,as usual woke up as early as 8 am,and got ready.Now he was wondering where his brother Veer was;Dharam was surprized to c that Veer was already waiting for him downstairs.
 
Veer:Tum 5 min late ho aur ye mujhe pasand nahin.Chalein.
 
Both boys made arrangements and were ready to leave.They took blessing from their parents and left.
 
!PRECAP!
Veer talking to Dharam about his romantic dream,Four of them(Princes and Princesses)meet
 
!NEXT UPDATE!:
Next weekend
 
enjoySmile
 
   


Edited by sweet_1 - 27 February 2009 at 11:24am

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Posted: 05 January 2009 at 8:42am | IP Logged
lovly update enjoy reading them so next week they will meet can wait
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that was beautiful maheen can't wai for nex updat
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very nice update dear pls. continue!!!!
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thank u so much for ur comments im glad u ppl enjoyed reading my fan-fic,well i'l update it next weekend don forget to read n comment thanx once again
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 !SOME LUV STORIES LIVE FOREVER!

!FIRST MEETING OF THE FOUR ROYALS!
 
!RECAP!
Intro of Kingdom of Dehli,Nok'jhok b/w the two princesses,the king decides to send his daughterz to manali for their mind refreshment.The next morning,the princesses leave for their journey.On the other hand,raj n ranbir also get ready n leave.ab aage:
 
Dharam n Veer after taking blessings from their parents,went outside and sat in their car,and began their journey;
Dharam:Me to bilkul heraan hun ke aaj tum mujh se bhi pehle uth kar taiyaar kese hogaye,mujhe to lagta he suraj dusri taraf se nikla he.
Veer gave a devilish smile and replied;
Veer:Ooohhh....mere bhole bhai...tum aage jaakar karoge kya..
Dharam:Kyun kya hua,aur tumhe itni hasii kyun aarahi hai?
Veer:Tumhein kya lagta hai ke me raat ko dair main so kar kabhi itni jaldi matlab 7 baje utha hun??
Dharam:Kya,me kuch samjha nahin.
Veer:Ruk,me samjhaata hun.Kal raat ko,dinner karne ke baad me soya hee nahin tha,balke me to poori raat jaagta raha tha,taake dad aur khaas kar ke tumhe mujhe kuch bhi kehne ka ya sharminda karne ka mauka naa mil jaaye.
Dharam:(Surprisingly)Achaaaa....! tabhi me soch raha tha ke tum kese itni jaldi kisi ki baat ka asar le sakte ho.
Veer:Ya.aur meri neend me jo kami reh gayi thi usay me car me pura karunga.
Dharam:Tumhara,matlab he,k tum ab pure raaste me sohte hue aaoge?
Veer:EXACTLY BUDDY!!!!!aur rahi baat tumhaari toh obviously,u will drive the vehicle my dear.
Dharam:Toh mujhe company kon dega?
Veer:Tension mat lay yaar! aik maheenaa tujhe company hee to dunga,so relaxxxxx.ok!! ab me so raha hun.and plz mujhe disturb kisi bhi cheez k liye mat karna,woh kya hai naa mujhe apnii larkiyon k sapno waali neend bohot pyarii he.Are u understanding my point?
Dharam:(With a slight smile on his face)Samajh gaya,nahin disturb karunga soh jaao.
Veer:Jab manali,pohonch jayn to bataa denaa.
 
In the deep sleep,Veer dreamt about a girl,she was dressed in a princess get-up,her face was not clear,it was blur he saw that he is proposing her.He suddenly opened his eyes,Dharam noticed it;
Dharam:Kya hua Veer?kya tumhe neend nahiin aarahi?
Veer:Nahin yaar aesii koi baat nahin he.Mene to bas aik sapna dekha.
Dharam:Kesa sapna?kya dekha tumne?
Veer:Kya bataaoun yaar,mene aik larki ko dekha,jisse me propose kar raha hun,lekin us ka chehra theek say dikhaaii nahin dia,mujhe lagta he k yahi wo larki hai jise me apni rajkumaari kehsakta hun.
Dharam:Acha.
Veer: Aur meri 6 sense kehrahi hai k iss trip me wo larki mujhe zaroor milaygii.Bilkul mere type kii,khubsoorat,naazug,ghussa naa karne waali,aur thori si ziddi.Kyun?
Dharam: Han.lekin mujhe iss larkiyon ki baaton me koi interest nahi.
Veer: Meri toh 6 sense yeh bhi kehti hai k tumhaari rajkumari merii waali kii bohot close relative hogi ya phir behen bhi ho sakti hai,us ki nature merii waali ki opposite hogi,rude,proud,baywajah larkon par rob jamaane wali,or ghusse waali.Aur tumhara mu usko dekh kar khula rehjaaye ga.
Dharam: Choro! ye tum kese kehsakte ho.
Veer: Merii 6 sense aaj tak ghalat nahin hui,dekhlena.
Dharam: Haan dekhloonga.
 
Meanwhile in the Girlz Car:
Radhika:Shukar he k aaj tumne dair nahi ki warna,hum log nahin jaa sakte the.
Aditi was surprised that her sis was talking to her in such a soft and polite tone unlike her usual behaviour.
Radhika:Kya hua itni heraangii se kya dekhrahi ho hume?
Aditi:Dekh rahe hain k tum humse itne aaraam se baat kar rahi ho warna to hume bas daanthtii hi rehti thi.
Radhika:Woh iss liye ke hum pitaaji kii baat samajh gaye hain,tum humse choti ho humme tumhe margin dena chahiye,aur hume lagta hai k tum ghusse se nahin balke sirf pyar se baat samajti ho,is liye humne tumse baat karne ka andaaz badal liya hai.Theek kiya naa?
Aditi:Bilkul,warna hume aesa lagne laga tha k humare saamne barii behen nahin.HITLER hai.
Both laugh.
Aditi:Ab jab tumne humse baat karne ka andaaz badal hi liya hai to hum tumhe apne us rajkumar waalay sapne k baare me bata sakte hain?
Radhika:(With a smile)lekin tumne bataya toh tha or kya kehna hai?
Aditi;Humein lagta he k iss trip me wo hume miljaaygaa.Humaare sapnon ka rajkumar.
Radhika:Chalo dekhlenge.Lekin agar tumhe yeh lagta hai k humaari opinion larkon k baare main badal jaaygii to bhul jaao.
Aditi:Oho!Saare larke aik jese thoray hi hote hain.Kya pata tumhen bhi apna rajkumar miljaaye.
Radhika:Saamne aaye toh sahi,ultay haath kii chapair(slap) khaiga.
Both laugh.both of them spend their time in talking on different topics.Like this they spend 4 to 5 hrs of their journey.And so they reach their destination.(SORRY FOR SUCH A QUICK JOURNEY LOL)
Aditi:Arre,manali pohonch gaye,waqt ka pata hi nai chala.
 
Back to the Boyz' Car:
Both boys also reach their destination.Ranbir was realy tired as he continuously drived the car for 4 to 5 hrs.
Dharam:Veeeeeeeeerrr,utho manali pohonch gaye.
Veer:(Streched his arms)Han acha,mujhe itni achi neend aai,time kese guzra pata hi nahi chala.
Dharam:Mujhe bohot pata chala,itni back ache ho rahi hai k kya bataoun yaar.
Veer:(Putting hand on Ranbir's shoulder n shaking him)koi nahi BE ROUGH N TOUGH!!
Dharam:Haan theek he,theek he,ab humaare rehne ke liye papa ne hotel me booking karaadii hai,hotel tak tum car chalaoge,im tired.
Veer:Theek hai.
They reach the hotel.
Veer:Hey nice hotel yar!Dad ki choice ka jawaab nahi,too gud.
They go to the reception.
Dharam:Excuse me.Aap ke paas aryawardhan ke naam ki booking hogi.Kya aap batasakte k room no.kya hai.
Receptionist:Yes sir.Iss naam kii booking he,room no is 9.
Dharam:Can u guide us k ye kaha hai?
REC:Sure sir,yahan se straight n then to ur left.
Veer:Thanx.
 
Back to the girls:
Radhika:Chalo pohonch gaye,hotel me chalte hain,papa ne booking karai hai.
They reach the hotel.(COINCIDENT WAS,THAT FOUR OF THE ROYALS WERE STAYING IN THE SAME HOTEL UNAWARE OF ONE ANOTHER'S PRESENCE)
Both of them go 2 the reception.
Aditi:Excuse me,humari Karan singh ratore ke naam se booking he room no batainge plz.
Rec:Its room no 10.
Aditi:Thankx.
 
Back to the Boys
Veer:KOOL ROOM.
Dharam:Rite.
Veer:Me to soch raha tha kuch ghante rest karne k baad hum to manali
kii sair karlenge,suna he yahan aik jaga hai jahan par har tarha k stalls hote hain wahan chalenge.
Dharam:Theek hai chale jaayn ge filhaal aram karne do.
 
It was evening,the boys got ready to go:
They reached the place.There was a great rush.At the same place the girls were also roaming abt and looking at different stalls.
Veer:Mujhe bohot bhuk lagi he kuch kha lete hain.
Dharam:Tum theek kehrahe ho,saamne gol gappay ka stall aao khaalete hen.
Dharam observed that his bro was looking here n there.
Dharam:Idhar udhar kya dekh rahe ho?
Veer:Shayd yahan mujhe wo larki mil jaye or meri bhabhi b.
Dharam:Tum bhi na.me to kabhi larkiyon se itna baat nahi karta or na hi sochta ho or tum ho k...
Veer:Baat karte nahi ya tumhe mauka nahin mila.
Dharam:Chup raho.
As both of them were walking n talking they got a takkar with both the princessess.
Veer:Im so sorryy me ne aap ko dekha.........he cudnt speak ny further when he saw aditi infront of her in the background,the song played,
ankhon me teri ajab sii ajab si adain hain,dil ko banade jo patang saanse teri wo hawaain hain.......
Veer:Sorry aapko dekha nahi,aap ko chot to nahin lagi.
Aditi:Nahin,its ok.
Radhika:Helloooo kya dekh rahe ho pagal ho kya.
Veer:Chalein Dharam?,(he was lost in his own world,after he saw radhika)
Dharam:Huh..han chalo.
 
!PRECAP!
FOUR OF THE ROYALZ THINKING ABT EACH OTHER,(Veer & Aditi)praying for their next meeting.
 
!NEXT UPDATE!
next weekend. enjoyyy
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by sweet_1 - 27 February 2009 at 11:44am

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the meeting was very gud loved the update and the precap seems very romantic...btw is it set in 21 or 13 century maheen plzzzzzzz answer....
 
 
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