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Posted: 11 December 2008 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
 
!SOME LUV STORIES LIVE FOREVER!
 
!An Unforgettable Voyage!
 
It was a cloudy morning outside the kingdom of Arya,inside the kingdom there were many rooms.There was room of a prince who was sleeping in his bed,it was the room of Ranbir.He woke up at 7 a.m.Everything was well-organized,neat & clean.He took a shower & changed his clothes.At sharp 7:30 a.m he went down to the main hall,the King & Queen were already there for the morning puja.He goes to them & touches their feet in respect.
Ranbir:Namaste papa,namaste maa.
K:Khush raho
Q:Jeete raho
K:Beta tum puja k liye taiyaar hogaye.
Ranbir:Jee papa.
K:Achi baat he.Chalo puja k liye chalte hain.
Ranbir:Jee chalain,aaiye maa.
Q:Are rukiye! aap dono puja k liye aese kese ja sakte hain?
K:Kyun kya hua?
Q:Aap shayd bhul rahe hain k humara ek dusra beta bhi he Raj,us ka to intezaar kar leejiye.
K:Tumhara matlab he k wo abhi tak so kar nahi utha?
Ranbir:Uh..sorry papa jaldi me aaj mein usko uthana bhul gaya tha.Mein abhi usko uthadeta hun.
K:Haan please jaldi utho use.Pata nahi ye aage jaakar kya karega.
Ranbir:Dekhiye aap pareshaan kyun horahe hain me jaakar use uthata hoon bas 5 min.
Q:Maharaj,aap pareshan kyun hote hain,wo samajhdar he.
K:Uski samajhdari ka saboot to mene dekh hi liya hai.
Q:Aap ko us par bharosa hona chahiye.Raat ko mere zaruri kaam ki waja se dair tak jaag raha tha is liye aaj tym par nahi uth saka.
K:Chota samajh kar use bohot dheel de chuka hun lekin kab tak doon.Aaj me iski achi tarha se class loonga.
Q:Mere hote huwe to kabhi bhi nahi.
K:yahi wajah he k wo baat nahi sunta,aap ki wajah se.
Q:Aap chorein in baton ko.
Meanwhile,Ranbir went upstairs to see whether his bro was awake or he was still sleeping.But he was shocked to see that Raj was still sleeping in his bed.
Ranbir:Han! ye to yaha ghore(horses),gaddhe(donkeys),khacchar(mules)sab bech kar so raha he..
Ranbir:Raaaaaj...Raaaaaj,utho subha hogai he.Maa,papa tumhara neeche wait kar rahe hain,chalo.
Raj:Wait kar rahe hain to karne do.Kya fark parta he.
Ranbir was amazed by his response & he was shocked to a great deal.
Ranbir:Hosh me to ho.Tum jaante ho k tum kya kehrahe ho.Aese kehte hain baron k baare me.Tum dekh lena aaj me papa se tumhari pitaai karwakar rahun ga.
Raj:(In an addictive voice)Hosh me nahi hun tabhi to kehraha hun.Aur mene tumhe kitni baar kaha he k tumhare in boring subah k lectures se I am totally fed up dude!jahan tak baat he dad se pitaai karwane ki to "JUST CHILL ABOUT THAT!"kyun k muje dad ko pataana' un k mood ko badalna achi tarha se aata he.And one more thing,mom to meri side hamesha se he hi,un k saamne sab ki bolti band hojati he.
Ranbir:Unhi ki waja se hi tum itne bigre hue ho.Tum uthte ho ya nahi.
Raj:NO CHANCE!
Ranbir:Abhi batata hoon
He pours a full bucket of water over him & HE suddenly gets up.
Raj:Yaar yeh kya tareeka he uthane ka.
Ranbir:Bas ab bohot hua puja k liye der ho rahi he
Raj:Ma gaya,puja me to bhul hi gaya tha.
Ranbir:Papa bohot gusse me hain.
Raj:Choro,mene kaha na un ko me pata loon ga bas un ko 15min wait karne ko kehna me bas aata hun ok?
Ranbir:Acha
 
Saying this he goes down to the main hall
Q:Kya hua?
Ranbir:Jee bas araha he.
K:Isse aaj me baat karun ga.
Meanwhile Raj enters;
Raj:Hey dad,hey gorgeous.
Looking at his dad's serious face he winks Ranbir & he says innocently to his dad,
Raj:Uh..,sorry dad mujhe pata he k aap mujh se ghusse hain aainda aesa nahi hoga.
I promise.
By seeing Raj's innocence the king's anger vanishes in no tym.
K:(With a smile on his face,& holding Raj's ear)Theek hai mene maaf kiya lekin agli baar khayal rakhna.Aao puja ke liye bethjao.
 
After puja.
K:Chalo,ab nashta karlo.
All four sit around the breakfast table,while having breakfast Raj starts his conversation with Ranbir;
Raj:Waise aaj mausam kitna acha he na?aaj to confirm baarish hogi.
Ranbir:Haan acha he.pata nahi barish hoti bhi he k nahi.
After a little while it starts to rain heavily.
Raj:Lo..baarish shuru hogai,tumhe aese mausam ko dekh kar kuch yaad nai aata?
Ranbir:Ummm....nahin.
Raj:Arre buddhu!hum kuch arsa pehle manali gaye tab bhi aesa hi mausam tha.
Ranbir:Han ab mujhe yaad aya.
K:Me soch raha tha k kyun na tum dono aik mahine ke liye kahi ghoom aao wese bhi bohot der ho gai he tum dono Mehal se bahar nahi gaye.
Raj:(In excitement)Aap ne to mere moon ki baat chiin li.
K:Acha?to batao kahan jaana he?
Raj:Uhhh....Haan! Manali hi jana he.
K:Acha,bhai,tum kya kehte ho Ranbir bete?
Ranbir:Ah..papa,mujhe koi aitraz nahi he lekin hum dono k jane ke baad peeche mehal ko kon sambhalega?
K:Tum us ki tension mat lo me aur nandini hain na yaha.
Ranbir:Theek he papa,phir me jaon ga.
K:To theek hai aaj se theek teen tin bad tum log jao ge meri gaari lejana(while getting up)or han mujse paise bhi lejana zarurat par sakti he,waqt par nikalna,khaas kar tum Raj.theek he.
Both of them(R&R) say:jee.
After king goes,Raj gives Ranbir a biiiig Five and says:YESSS!!!
 
!PRECAP!:
Intro of the kingdom of Dehli. & two princesses
 
!UPCOMING UPDATE!:
Next Weekend 19th/20th/21st of December 2008.

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Posted: 11 December 2008 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
 
!SOME LUV STORIES LIVE FOREVER!
 
!An Unforgettable Voyage!
 
It was a cloudy morning outside the kingdom of Arya,inside the kingdom there were many rooms.There was room of a prince who was sleeping in his bed,it was the room of Dharam.He woke up at 7 a.m.Everything was well-organized,neat & clean.He took a shower & changed his clothes.At sharp 7:30 a.m he went down to the main hall,the King & Queen were already there for the morning puja.He goes to them & touches their feet in respect.
Dharam:Namaste papa,namaste maa.
K:Khush raho
Q:Jeete raho
K:Beta tum puja k liye taiyaar hogaye.
Dharam:Jee papa.
K:Achi baat he.Chalo puja k liye chalte hain.
Dharam:Jee chalain,aaiye maa.
Q:Are rukiye! aap dono puja k liye aese kese ja sakte hain?
K:Kyun kya hua?
Q:Aap shayd bhul rahe hain k humara ek dusra beta bhi he Veer,us ka to intezaar kar leejiye.
K:Tumhara matlab he k wo abhi tak so kar nahi utha?
Dharam:Uh..sorry papa jaldi me aaj mein usko uthana bhul gaya tha.Mein abhi usko uthadeta hun.
K:Haan please jaldi uthao use.Pata nahi ye aage jaakar kya karega.
Dharam:Dekhiye aap pareshaan kyun horahe hain me jaakar use uthata hoon bas 5 min.
Q:Maharaj,aap pareshan kyun hote hain,wo samajhdar he.
K:Uski samajhdari ka saboot to mene dekh hi liya hai.
Q:Aap ko us par bharosa hona chahiye.Raat ko mere zaruri kaam ki waja se dair tak jaag raha tha is liye aaj tym par nahi uth saka.
K:Chota samajh kar use bohot dheel de chuka hun lekin kab tak doon.Aaj me iski achi tarha se class loonga.
Q:Mere hote huwe to kabhi bhi nahi.
K:yahi wajah he k wo baat nahi sunta,aap ki wajah se.
Q:Aap chorein in baton ko.
Meanwhile,Dharam went upstairs to see whether his bro was awake or he was still sleeping.But he saw that Veer was still sleeping in his bed.
Dharam:Ye to yaha ghore(horses),gaddhe(donkeys),khacchar(mules)sab bech kar so raha he..
Dharam:Veeer...Veeeer,utho subha hogai he.Maa,papa tumhara neeche wait kar rahe hain,chalo.
Veer:Wait kar rahe hain to karne do.Kya fark parta he.
Dharam was amazed by his response & he was shocked to a great deal.
Dharam:Hosh me to ho.Tum jaante ho k tum kya kehrahe ho.Aese kehte hain baron k baare me.Tum dekh lena aaj me papa se tumhari pitaai karwakar rahun ga.
Veer:(In an addictive voice)Hosh me nahi hun tabhi to kehraha hun.Aur mene tumhe kitni baar kaha he k tumhare in boring subah k lectures se I am totally fed up dude!jahan tak baat he dad se pitaai karwane ki to koi masla nahi kyun k muje dad ko pataana' un k mood ko badalna achi tarha se aata he.And one more thing,mom to meri side hamesha se he hi,un k saamne sab ki bolti band hojati he.
Dharam:Unhi ki waja se hi tum itne bigre hue ho.Tum uthte ho ya nahi.
Veer:NO CHANCE!
Dharam:Abhi batata hoon
He pours a full bucket of water over him & HE suddenly gets up.
Veer:Yaar yeh kya tareeka he uthane ka.
Dharam:Bas ab bohot hua puja k liye der ho rahi he
Veer:Mar gaya,puja!me to bhul hi gaya tha.
Dharam:Papa bohot gusse me hain.
Veer:Choro,mene kaha na un ko me pata loon ga bas un ko 15min wait karne ko kehna me bas aata hun ok?
Dharam:Acha
 
Saying this he goes down to the main hall
Q:Kya hua?
Dharam:Jee bas araha he.
K:Isse aaj me baat karun ga.
Meanwhile Raj enters;
Veer:Hey dad,hey gorgeous.
Looking at his dad's serious face he winks Dharam & he says innocently to his dad,
Veer:Uh..,sorry dad mujhe pata he k aap mujh se ghusse hain aainda aesa nahi hoga.
I promise.
By seeing Veer's innocence the king's anger vanishes in no tym.
K:(With a smile on his face,& holding Veer's ear)Theek hai mene maaf kiya lekin agli baar khayal rakhna.Aao puja ke liye bethjao.
 
All d After puja.
K:Chalo,ab nashta karlo.
four sit around the breakfast table,while having breakfast Veer starts his conversation with Dharam;
Veer:Waise aaj mausam kitna acha he na?aaj to confirm baarish hogi.
Dharam:Haan acha he.pata nahi barish hoti bhi he k nahi.
After a little while it starts to rain heavily.
Veer:Lo..baarish shuru hogai,tumhe aese mausam ko dekh kar kuch yaad nai aata?
Dharam:Ummm....nahin.
Veer:Arre buddhu!hum kuch arsa pehle manali gaye tab bhi aesa hi mausam tha.
Dharam:Han ab mujhe yaad aya.
K:Me soch raha tha k kyun na tum dono aik mahine ke liye kahi ghoom aao wese bhi bohot der ho gai he tum dono Mehal se bahar nahi gaye.
Veer:(In excitement)Aap ne to mere moon ki baat chiin li.
K:Acha?to batao kahan jaana he?
Veer:Uhhh....Haan! Manali hi jana he.
K:Acha,bhai,tum kya kehte ho Dharam bete?
Dharam:Ah..papa,mujhe koi aitraz nahi he lekin hum dono k jane ke baad peeche mehal ko kon sambhalega?
K:Tum us ki tension mat lo me aur nandini hain na yaha.
Dharam:Theek he papa,phir me jaon ga.
K:To theek hai aaj se theek teen tin bad tum log jao ge meri gaari lejana(while getting up)or han mujse paise bhi lejana zarurat par sakti he,waqt par nikalna,khaas kar tum Veer,theek he.
Both of them(DV) say:jee.
After king goes,Veer gives Dharam a biiiig Five and says:YESSS!!!
 
!PRECAP!:
Intro of the kingdom of Dehli. & two princesses
 
!UPCOMING UPDATE!:
Next Weekend 19th/20th/21st of December 2008.


Edited by sweet_1 - 08 March 2009 at 8:24am

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Posted: 12 December 2008 at 5:56am | IP Logged
hi maheen
 
i really loved it it dear
 
very good n great job dear
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Posted: 12 December 2008 at 11:13am | IP Logged
gr8 maheen i jus loved it it was out standing btw is it set in 21 sentury or 13LOLLOL

Edited by hiri - 12 December 2008 at 11:20am
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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Good Job Maheen...A very good start pls. do continue.....will wait for your next update.....
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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 10:55am | IP Logged
hey the concept n charecters are realli interesting
plz continue soon...i wanna know how story unfolds
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Posted: 23 December 2008 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
lovly update do contiune waiting for ur pm
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Posted: 26 December 2008 at 7:32am | IP Logged
gr8 do cont soon

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