DVFF:SOME LUV STORIES ATTENTION PLZ!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

!SOME LUV STORIES..LIVE FOREVER!

Hi everyone,
I am a new member of this forum, and I am starting a Fan-Fiction of "DHARAMVEER" on the above mentioned title.I thought that to write a fan fiction is the best way to interact with you people.And I am sure that you all will welcome me whole heartedly then, I will be a good addition to your "DV Group" and you all will find me a pleasant personality.😃
OK now, that's enough of my intro! back to the main topic, well, my ff will not be in pure hindi, I am using a bit of english in the dialogues.Ok guys I am just writing the character sketches.I am only going to update my "FF" on weekends(i.e: friday,saturday or sunday).ok now here are the character sketches:

CONTENTS:

!Character Sketches!(Pg#1)

!An Unforgettable Voyage!(Part 1)(Pg#2)

!Journey Begins!(Part 2)(Pg#3)

!The Meeting of the 4 Royals!(part 3)(pg#3)

!Veer Aditi thinking about eachother!(part 4)(pg#4)

PRINCE DHARAM:
He is the elder son of King Aryavardhan & Queen Nandini in the kingdom of Arya.His persona depicts that he is a real prince by his code of conduct and kindness towards the people within the kingdom and outside the kingdom.He gives real importance to the kingdom affairs.He is best buddy and elder brother of Prince Raj.He is quite shy & sober by nature but due to some magic spell, he falls for a princess of kingdom of Dehli Princess Radhika.

PRINCE VEER:

He is the younger $on of the King and Queen & younger bro of Prince Ranbir.His persona is perfect he is best sword fighter and he is the same in nature as his bro's but one thing that makes him a unique personality that he has exceptional negotiating skills a sharp six sense,extra ordinary kind towards princesses*❤️ahem..and a true rule-breaker,😉 he is opp.to Princess Aditi, princess of Kingdom of Dehli. He is dominating and determined=strong-headed.

KING ARYAVARDHAN:
He is a man of really strong nerves.He belongs to RAICHAND FAMILY.After his father King Yashvardhan died in a furious battle.According to his father's last wish,aryavardhan took over the throne at the age of 19 years and took care of the kingdom after getting married to his Queen very well.Both his sons are inspired by his personality.

QUEEN NANDINI:
She is the Queen of the kingdom and mother of Prince Veer n Prince Dharam and she loves both of them but as Veer is youngest in the Royal Family so she gives extra attention on him.Due to this Dharam feels neglected sometimes.

NOW, comes the royal family of KINGDOM OF DEHLI!!!

PRINCESS RADHIKA:

She is the elder daughter of King Karan Singh Rathore & Queen Nivriti and elder sis of Princess Aditi.She can be called a true RAJPUTHNI, because of her beauty,proudness, & by seeing other aspects of her personality.

PRINCESS ADITI:

She is the younger daughter of the King and Queen.She is very stubborn if her needs are not fulfilled.She can go to any extend to achieve her desires.........

PRINCE ARUN:

He was the elder brother of radhika n additi who died in battle by an accident but the king thinks that king aryavardhan killed him.

KING KARAN SINGH RATHORE:

He is the king of Dehli and father of Princesses Radhika and Aditi.He loves her daughters very much,but at times really stubborn and he can go to any extend to satisfy his ego.He is deadly against the relation of Dharam Radhika and Veer Aditi.

QUEEN NIVRITI:

She is the Queen of Dehli,she loves her daughters alot.She is not against the relation of her daughters with Dharam and Veer,she likes both of them.

SIDE ROLES:

KING BHEEMDEV:

He was the king of Surya nagar but he died in a battle fought against kingdom of Dehli and Arya.After his death,Princess Rahul,his elder son took over his throne as king.

KING RAHUL:

He is the King of Kingdom of Surya nagar wnted to marry radhika and her father agrees.(negative role)

PRINCE VEVAAN:

Younger bro of rahul,he gets inclined towards aditi(negative role)...

HOPE U ALL ENJOYED THE INTO OF MY FF PLZ LEAVE UR COMMENTS ALL OF U SPECIALLY THE SENIOR MEMBERS.....😊

Edited by sweet_1 - 14 years ago

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aashni

@ashah03

Groupbie

Posted: 15 years ago

heyy!!!

it is soooooooo good..... plsss continuee

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esha

@bunny007

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

it's mind blowing plz cont soon...

esha

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mahi

@larki_punjaban

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

nice

post ur FF's into fan fic sec

thnk u

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Samiksha

@~samy~

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

Hii Maheen..😃

Welcome to IF and DharamVeer section..🤗

Ur Fic is reallly nice...do continue it...

But plz open it in the fan fiction section...not here..😊

The development team has requested to open new fics in that section...

and all fics frm here also hav been moved to that section..😊

chk this topic...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1067321

Hope u enjoy ur stay wid us..😃

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Kiran Baidya

@kiru_maau

Goldie

Posted: 15 years ago

hie Mahhen!!!!!!

wonderfull itro yaar......really really luved it....hope u'd continue it soon.....and yaa......update it in the f-f section....as all hv been shifted there....waiting for ur first update😃

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Ams

@CutieA

Senior Member

Posted: 15 years ago

wooow...ur FF sounds great! x

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Goldie

Posted: 15 years ago

Hey dear Mehaan di..

Now this is a mind blowing concept..

so dushmaani in both kingdoms I suppose...

hmmm...so who will fall for whomm..well thats clear buh how....

well I guess better..

P.S. : Why did u change the names...did u not like the names of DV characters....

btw..update sn

n yes thanx for the PM darling..Plzz PM me wheneva u update (if possible)...cont asapppp........

Love ya loads hon.....t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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396387

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Posted: 15 years ago

!SOME LUV STORIES LIVE FOREVER!

!An Unforgettable Voyage!

It was a cloudy morning outside the kingdom of Arya,inside the kingdom there were many rooms.There was room of a prince who was sleeping in his bed,it was the room of Ranbir.He woke up at 7 a.m.Everything was well-organized,neat & clean.He took a shower & changed his clothes.At sharp 7:30 a.m he went down to the main hall,the King & Queen were already there for the morning puja.He goes to them & touches their feet in respect.
Ranbir:Namaste papa,namaste maa.
K:Khush raho
Q:Jeete raho
K:Beta tum puja k liye taiyaar hogaye.
Ranbir:Jee papa.
K:Achi baat he.Chalo puja k liye chalte hain.
Ranbir:Jee chalain,aaiye maa.
Q:Are rukiye! aap dono puja k liye aese kese ja sakte hain?
K:Kyun kya hua?
Q:Aap shayd bhul rahe hain k humara ek dusra beta bhi he Raj,us ka to intezaar kar leejiye.
K:Tumhara matlab he k wo abhi tak so kar nahi utha?
Ranbir:Uh..sorry papa jaldi me aaj mein usko uthana bhul gaya tha.Mein abhi usko uthadeta hun.
K:Haan please jaldi utho use.Pata nahi ye aage jaakar kya karega.
Ranbir:Dekhiye aap pareshaan kyun horahe hain me jaakar use uthata hoon bas 5 min.
Q:Maharaj,aap pareshan kyun hote hain,wo samajhdar he.
K:Uski samajhdari ka saboot to mene dekh hi liya hai.
Q:Aap ko us par bharosa hona chahiye.Raat ko mere zaruri kaam ki waja se dair tak jaag raha tha is liye aaj tym par nahi uth saka.
K:Chota samajh kar use bohot dheel de chuka hun lekin kab tak doon.Aaj me iski achi tarha se class loonga.
Q:Mere hote huwe to kabhi bhi nahi.
K:yahi wajah he k wo baat nahi sunta,aap ki wajah se.
Q:Aap chorein in baton ko.
Meanwhile,Ranbir went upstairs to see whether his bro was awake or he was still sleeping.But he was shocked to see that Raj was still sleeping in his bed.
Ranbir:Han! ye to yaha ghore(horses),gaddhe(donkeys),khacchar(mules)sab bech kar so raha he..
Ranbir:Raaaaaj...Raaaaaj,utho subha hogai he.Maa,papa tumhara neeche wait kar rahe hain,chalo.
Raj:Wait kar rahe hain to karne do.Kya fark parta he.
Ranbir was amazed by his response & he was shocked to a great deal.
Ranbir:Hosh me to ho.Tum jaante ho k tum kya kehrahe ho.Aese kehte hain baron k baare me.Tum dekh lena aaj me papa se tumhari pitaai karwakar rahun ga.
Raj:(In an addictive voice)Hosh me nahi hun tabhi to kehraha hun.Aur mene tumhe kitni baar kaha he k tumhare in boring subah k lectures se I am totally fed up dude!jahan tak baat he dad se pitaai karwane ki to "JUST CHILL ABOUT THAT!"kyun k muje dad ko pataana' un k mood ko badalna achi tarha se aata he.And one more thing,mom to meri side hamesha se he hi,un k saamne sab ki bolti band hojati he.
Ranbir:Unhi ki waja se hi tum itne bigre hue ho.Tum uthte ho ya nahi.
Raj:NO CHANCE!
Ranbir:Abhi batata hoon

He pours a full bucket of water over him & HE suddenly gets up.
Raj:Yaar yeh kya tareeka he uthane ka.
Ranbir:Bas ab bohot hua puja k liye der ho rahi he
Raj:Ma gaya,puja me to bhul hi gaya tha.
Ranbir:Papa bohot gusse me hain.
Raj:Choro,mene kaha na un ko me pata loon ga bas un ko 15min wait karne ko kehna me bas aata hun ok?

Ranbir:Acha

Saying this he goes down to the main hall

Q:Kya hua?

Ranbir:Jee bas araha he.

K:Isse aaj me baat karun ga.

Meanwhile Raj enters;

Raj:Hey dad,hey gorgeous.

Looking at his dad's serious face he winks Ranbir & he says innocently to his dad,

Raj:Uh..,sorry dad mujhe pata he k aap mujh se ghusse hain aainda aesa nahi hoga.

I promise.

By seeing Raj's innocence the king's anger vanishes in no tym.

K:(With a smile on his face,& holding Raj's ear)Theek hai mene maaf kiya lekin agli baar khayal rakhna.Aao puja ke liye bethjao.

After puja.

K:Chalo,ab nashta karlo.

All four sit around the breakfast table,while having breakfast Raj starts his conversation with Ranbir;

Raj:Waise aaj mausam kitna acha he na?aaj to confirm baarish hogi.

Ranbir:Haan acha he.pata nahi barish hoti bhi he k nahi.

After a little while it starts to rain heavily.

Raj:Lo..baarish shuru hogai,tumhe aese mausam ko dekh kar kuch yaad nai aata?

Ranbir:Ummm....nahin.

Raj:Arre buddhu!hum kuch arsa pehle manali gaye tab bhi aesa hi mausam tha.

Ranbir:Han ab mujhe yaad aya.

K:Me soch raha tha k kyun na tum dono aik mahine ke liye kahi ghoom aao wese bhi bohot der ho gai he tum dono Mehal se bahar nahi gaye.

Raj:(In excitement)Aap ne to mere moon ki baat chiin li.

K:Acha?to batao kahan jaana he?

Raj:Uhhh....Haan! Manali hi jana he.

K:Acha,bhai,tum kya kehte ho Ranbir bete?

Ranbir:Ah..papa,mujhe koi aitraz nahi he lekin hum dono k jane ke baad peeche mehal ko kon sambhalega?

K:Tum us ki tension mat lo me aur nandini hain na yaha.

Ranbir:Theek he papa,phir me jaon ga.

K:To theek hai aaj se theek teen tin bad tum log jao ge meri gaari lejana(while getting up)or han mujse paise bhi lejana zarurat par sakti he,waqt par nikalna,khaas kar tum Raj.theek he.

Both of them(R&R) say:jee.

After king goes,Raj gives Ranbir a biiiig Five and says:YESSS!!!

!PRECAP!:

Intro of the kingdom of Dehli. & two princesses

!UPCOMING UPDATE!:

Next Weekend 19th/20th/21st of December 2008.

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396387

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

!SOME LUV STORIES LIVE FOREVER!

!An Unforgettable Voyage!

It was a cloudy morning outside the kingdom of Arya,inside the kingdom there were many rooms.There was room of a prince who was sleeping in his bed,it was the room of Dharam.He woke up at 7 a.m.Everything was well-organized,neat & clean.He took a shower & changed his clothes.At sharp 7:30 a.m he went down to the main hall,the King & Queen were already there for the morning puja.He goes to them & touches their feet in respect.
Dharam:Namaste papa,namaste maa.
K:Khush raho
Q:Jeete raho
K:Beta tum puja k liye taiyaar hogaye.
Dharam:Jee papa.
K:Achi baat he.Chalo puja k liye chalte hain.
Dharam:Jee chalain,aaiye maa.
Q:Are rukiye! aap dono puja k liye aese kese ja sakte hain?
K:Kyun kya hua?
Q:Aap shayd bhul rahe hain k humara ek dusra beta bhi he Veer,us ka to intezaar kar leejiye.
K:Tumhara matlab he k wo abhi tak so kar nahi utha?
Dharam:Uh..sorry papa jaldi me aaj mein usko uthana bhul gaya tha.Mein abhi usko uthadeta hun.
K:Haan please jaldi uthao use.Pata nahi ye aage jaakar kya karega.
Dharam:Dekhiye aap pareshaan kyun horahe hain me jaakar use uthata hoon bas 5 min.
Q:Maharaj,aap pareshan kyun hote hain,wo samajhdar he.
K:Uski samajhdari ka saboot to mene dekh hi liya hai.
Q:Aap ko us par bharosa hona chahiye.Raat ko mere zaruri kaam ki waja se dair tak jaag raha tha is liye aaj tym par nahi uth saka.
K:Chota samajh kar use bohot dheel de chuka hun lekin kab tak doon.Aaj me iski achi tarha se class loonga.
Q:Mere hote huwe to kabhi bhi nahi.
K:yahi wajah he k wo baat nahi sunta,aap ki wajah se.
Q:Aap chorein in baton ko.
Meanwhile,Dharam went upstairs to see whether his bro was awake or he was still sleeping.But he saw that Veer was still sleeping in his bed.

Dharam:Ye to yaha ghore(horses),gaddhe(donkeys),khacchar(mules)sab bech kar so raha he..
Dharam:Veeer...Veeeer,utho subha hogai he.Maa,papa tumhara neeche wait kar rahe hain,chalo.
Veer:Wait kar rahe hain to karne do.Kya fark parta he.
Dharam was amazed by his response & he was shocked to a great deal.
Dharam:Hosh me to ho.Tum jaante ho k tum kya kehrahe ho.Aese kehte hain baron k baare me.Tum dekh lena aaj me papa se tumhari pitaai karwakar rahun ga.
Veer:(In an addictive voice)Hosh me nahi hun tabhi to kehraha hun.Aur mene tumhe kitni baar kaha he k tumhare in boring subah k lectures se I am totally fed up dude!jahan tak baat he dad se pitaai karwane ki to koi masla nahi kyun k muje dad ko pataana' un k mood ko badalna achi tarha se aata he.And one more thing,mom to meri side hamesha se he hi,un k saamne sab ki bolti band hojati he.
Dharam:Unhi ki waja se hi tum itne bigre hue ho.Tum uthte ho ya nahi.
Veer:NO CHANCE!
Dharam:Abhi batata hoon

He pours a full bucket of water over him & HE suddenly gets up.
Veer:Yaar yeh kya tareeka he uthane ka.
Dharam:Bas ab bohot hua puja k liye der ho rahi he
Veer:Mar gaya,puja!me to bhul hi gaya tha.
Dharam:Papa bohot gusse me hain.
Veer:Choro,mene kaha na un ko me pata loon ga bas un ko 15min wait karne ko kehna me bas aata hun ok?

Dharam:Acha

Saying this he goes down to the main hall

Q:Kya hua?

Dharam:Jee bas araha he.

K:Isse aaj me baat karun ga.

Meanwhile Raj enters;

Veer:Hey dad,hey gorgeous.

Looking at his dad's serious face he winks Dharam & he says innocently to his dad,

Veer:Uh..,sorry dad mujhe pata he k aap mujh se ghusse hain aainda aesa nahi hoga.

I promise.

By seeing Veer's innocence the king's anger vanishes in no tym.

K:(With a smile on his face,& holding Veer's ear)Theek hai mene maaf kiya lekin agli baar khayal rakhna.Aao puja ke liye bethjao.

All

d After puja.

K:Chalo,ab nashta karlo.

four sit around the breakfast table,while having breakfast Veer starts his conversation with Dharam;

Veer:Waise aaj mausam kitna acha he na?aaj to confirm baarish hogi.

Dharam:Haan acha he.pata nahi barish hoti bhi he k nahi.

After a little while it starts to rain heavily.

Veer:Lo..baarish shuru hogai,tumhe aese mausam ko dekh kar kuch yaad nai aata?

Dharam:Ummm....nahin.

Veer:Arre buddhu!hum kuch arsa pehle manali gaye tab bhi aesa hi mausam tha.

Dharam:Han ab mujhe yaad aya.

K:Me soch raha tha k kyun na tum dono aik mahine ke liye kahi ghoom aao wese bhi bohot der ho gai he tum dono Mehal se bahar nahi gaye.

Veer:(In excitement)Aap ne to mere moon ki baat chiin li.

K:Acha?to batao kahan jaana he?

Veer:Uhhh....Haan! Manali hi jana he.

K:Acha,bhai,tum kya kehte ho Dharam bete?

Dharam:Ah..papa,mujhe koi aitraz nahi he lekin hum dono k jane ke baad peeche mehal ko kon sambhalega?

K:Tum us ki tension mat lo me aur nandini hain na yaha.

Dharam:Theek he papa,phir me jaon ga.

K:To theek hai aaj se theek teen tin bad tum log jao ge meri gaari lejana(while getting up)or han mujse paise bhi lejana zarurat par sakti he,waqt par nikalna,khaas kar tum Veer,theek he.

Both of them(DV) say:jee.

After king goes,Veer gives Dharam a biiiig Five and says:YESSS!!!

!PRECAP!:

Intro of the kingdom of Dehli. & two princesses

!UPCOMING UPDATE!:

Next Weekend 19th/20th/21st of December 2008.

Edited by sweet_1 - 15 years ago

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