~Betrayed by fate~ pt 12 uptd 27/04 (Page 9)

Originally posted by spln

reserved

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di i duno how to not say im speechless to u, but il try n pass it somehow....

seriously....u were nervous abt this???LIKE REALLY??? or did u just say it so i dont build hopes too high ...i cud have actually, n u stil wud have met them n much more...its so hard to control the emtions flowing when i read this fic, n look at me talking as if its been one for ever, u only just did part 1, i feel a starnge attachement to it...i think i agree with nij, its deja vu for me, n i cant believe um saying this, for deja vu with hospital environscan never be welcome, i almost cant get enuf of it...i dint re read this part at all...there have been many things in life iv read over n over for the love of them...but very few iv read once n thats it....i think the few one time things are those i know il remember, almost by word in just that once....it happenes rarely but believe me it does.....

personally i cant tell u how much i am happy abt some facts, heres one the atul minnie bond...um glad u chnaged it from armaan minnie to atul minnin i eman armaan stil stays but oh well u know wat i mean....for another um glad ur making atul n muski characters i wud want them to be like...i wish dmg did this...like i was watching this dam old dmg epi n i relized atul was alwaz the clown but now they tunred him so brainless the humor doesnt appeal anymore...somehow this solmen side to him, which i bet is only a consequence of the gravity of the fic, essentially i think u will let him hold onto his soothe the atmostphere image, well this character of his...its incredibly drawing...anji so far i almost dislike (no hating hehe)...but she shud be so, ur literaly holding tru the char essence of what the names make u think of the chars as....

rahul muski extrememly shirt reaction but it 5touched a cord...with a nice feel to it, rahul the talker n muski usually that except rare times, we have to admit everyone has those rare times um glad u allowed muski one....

armaan n ridhima....i dun o wat to say abt them il let this wait for as long as u make me wait for the update haha...dint think u cud be the only one holding unto suspense!!!....aaron is, i duno where u picked the name, but i know for one its jewish....i loved the name when i read it another book i love...n i almost gleefully grinned reading the name, i say almost coz u dint, the scene dint let me, but i loved the name n had to tell u...


with everything else, the plot the chars, the watever...u have to know this one thing....i hold zuz n u in esteem...theres lots of potential story tellers on the forum, only u two who touch details in a professional way...nij was close in her serious fic update...but she can do better justice to the detilas..she will i think in a few parts from now it comes with doing the writing...i loved the part u must know by now....nothing to edit, i wudnt change even an ' A' in there!

n yeh 315 dil se re hahahah stop getting cheesy!!!

Originally posted by missypatel

reserve!! damn!! **edited**

dam ya!! but for d gud!! tht was sooooooo unexpected..lke a total bouncer bt juss a betrayal of d word!! does dt mkie sense?? lol!! i luved it!! it was totally wacko!! mkes me wonder...do i really koe u...cuz tis part defin unbelivable dt it cme from u!! ( dtz a compliment!!..i koe ur a better accepter..bt m a hard goner wit dem ;) )

okaaa d part!!...ummm...lets start wit ritu-atul-RIDZ..scene..tht did give out a lot...yet ntn(i luv dt line...u n nj bth do dt..all d time!!)..dtz a sexy kidz nme..m sure ive heard bfr bt for sum reason..it juss didnt sound tis gud ten...i was wonderin...tryna catch d meanin in betwn d lines...n i soooo cudnt...yaar cudnt u hve been a lil easy on us readers!!lol..rahul-muskaan scene..hmm tey r fightin..m doesnt lke him..cuz hes bein too ovbious...d fight continues...bt wit a dift angel..i c!! niicceeeee!!!..atul-minnie...okay it took me a while 2 picture her image..bt i still dnt c it..bt shes defin taller n more sensible...bas dtz it..atul-minnie...aahh i like it...cuz watever reason it is..d better for armaan...luv dt abt tem its lke...all r tryna protect n tke better care of him....oooohhh I LUV DT!!..bt its still a mystery..i still c armaan on d bed..wearin those yellow hosp robes..bt i still dnt c hiz face..dnt..:(!!

ahhah yehh!! i tld nj yest..dt deja vu..it was almost lke i was part of d scene..lke i was ter bt mybe wearin HPz invisible coat..or smg!!weird!!

d whole nute house..crazy fragile self world....i luv all dt..its new n fits lke a puzzle!! :)

again..luved d update..stilll dazed...its so not u..atleast nt a part of u dt i m aware of...bt hell like i rote...open d book 2 learn...guess mes doin d same..!! :D

315 =)
nij

ps..do check pardes 2 later...nw dt ive resd it..ill mke use of it!! lol

Originally posted by simran1285

Hina - I hope that's right, ok now where do I start, I am at a loss of words and let me you tell that rarely happens with me. Yes I even posses the awful Muski laugh, but back to the point.haha Simmi the nutter shines again