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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dmg_sonia

hey hina

superb start...the intro only hooked me...i cant stop thinking what must have happened with my poor armaan....i cant stop myself 4m u know feeling bad  him...gosh am i sounding crazy? u see this is armaania hehe but seriously outstanding concept...loved the intro....n yea i liked muski too, i think she will be a wonderful support 2 armaan


luv, sonu

 
hey sonu,
thanks for the comments hun
haha u sad too for him?
yeh u do sound crazy sorry lolz
hmm lets see what Muskaan does
hope u enjoy pat one hun
thanks
 
luv
 
 
Originally posted by dmglovernimisha

i dint understand it much but... lolz
as u said its a serious love story then is it that Armaan's sorta mad here?? yeh kinda
lolz
PM me!!! i did
upd8 ASAP!!
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha
 
thanks Nimisha


Edited by hinanaziri - 20 November 2008 at 11:01pm
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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 12:05am | IP Logged
great update.... work us with the clues heheh
 
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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Hey Hina!!!!

OMG hina it was OUTSTANDING....your taking the story ahead beautifully!!!

i am loving muskaan's character, the way she just cant stop herself, just cant keep herself away...i can see some light here, maybe she will soon gang up with atul....atul-minnee combo is again different, nice 2 see they are helping armaan

great part...update soon



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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Hey hina di its realy gr8 part i loved it very much thnxs a ton for the PM luv nruti
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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 7:23am | IP Logged
wow hina!!  awesome part!! getting me hooked more and more...when is ammy dear entering? mystery mystery hmmm....very nice concept!! thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 7:49am | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG!!! clearer!?!? things are much more shocking!!! armaan in rehab!!!!Shocked coz of ridhimma!!!Shocked nd he not at fault!!!! minnie also derShocked...poor gal!!!bt aisa kya hua ki he in rehab!!!?!!

nd hang on muski is ammy's doc..ryt??? nd atul a visitor!!! bt anji nd rahul dont know abt it!!!??

superb part di.....luvd it....

thnx for pm...cont. soon!!
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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 8:02am | IP Logged

hey di...long time..i missed out on wishing u on ur engagement anniversary, it was quite late wen i got to know...hence didn't attempt a belated one..lots of gud wishes to u all!

this story  is  just so unlike ur usual ones...so serious, so real, n so different....the intro left me puzzled, n part 1 compels me to read more...there's so much to be revealed yet, much of which m sure doesn't sound very pleasant... i hope this fic even if serious, does have a happy ending, n sumthing in here gives me a feeling there is one, just can't figure out wat makes me feel so...its just my head, shayad, it sumhow cannot  combine  u n a tragedy together...

please pm me wen u update...needless to say u've written it all beautifully...not sure if this adjective fits in here, cause i feel pained, n dunno y, but i relate to it...blame my instincts..
luv,
anu.
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Posted: 21 November 2008 at 8:10am | IP Logged
heyloo..
im ust say it is a very unusal concept.....unusual but heart wrenching.....
i ove the way you portray thins ......
ur simply amazing....
plz update soon n pm(if that is possible..)
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