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~Betrayed by fate~ pt 12 uptd 27/04 (Page 7)

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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by missypatel

reserved!! :( mera intezaar nahi kiyaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! LMAO,is baar kiya yar,sorry about pichli bar

hmmm didnt i already tell yaaaa...luved it!!
muskaans curiosity..anjiez concern...atulz secret care and d patient in talks...let him sleepin for a while!! ahah!! lmao...and d story frm a 3rd personz view...awesome!!!Clap
grt one hini....update jaldi se!!!!likhooooooo abhii!!

315 :)

Aww nij
u know u'r comments make me smile and laugh sometimes
thanks for the motivation and liking
yeh the third persons view is something new,well i did try before with addictive but this one feels diff
hoping u all will like
cheers nij
luv ya nutter
Originally posted by missypatel

hini...finally watched yur vm...i watched it mute in skool bfr lol!! lol i cud totally expect that from u

but aah luved it!!ya yaaa hez nt bewaffa ...i koe!!!! hez a darlin..he never does ntn...yeh right ,u been chatting to Jia a bit too much ,eh?
its always d girl..cuz wen guys like armaan fall in luv....tey literally get jinxed...ahhahhh!! i wud koe ;)!! haha yeh u wud know LMAO

updated ma comment too...incase u!! thanks honey


Edited by hinanaziri - 20 November 2008 at 8:23pm

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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Finally found time to read the first part..YAY!
Okay so did I tell you how much I am loving this? If I didn't let me repeat it again for you...I LOVE it Hina! Your doing a fab job with it! I love the simplicity with which you describe every single thing..It is awesome!
Loved how you showed Muskaan's mood being upset due to that case..I'm totally able to feel for her since I know how hard it is to get something of your mind once it gets in there...
Rahul is a sweetheart! I can totally tell!
You've like sketched an awesome persona of Atul! I loved it...Him and Minnie interaction was like "awww" So cute! Hina, you did a fab job with the first part...I'm positive the rest are going to be just as good!
" Its ok Mr.Joshi, I can be funny at times, no wonder I'm here ...the fragile world outside couldn't handle a crazy me so here I am.... well lets forget me for now... who are you here to see?...I'm sure you're not a new entrant to this nut house ,and if you are ,you seem a little overdressed for rehab....,haha I'm sorry for being such a nuisance,you must be a visitor right?..." Atul couldn't keep a straight face at her remark on his appearance...
"yes I am Minnie...I'm here to see my friend Ammy....Armaan Malik ??? do you know him? "
LOL...You couldn't help add something nuttery now could you Hina?Aww I loved the lines Hina! Minnie had amazing dialogues..
I think Ritu and Riddhi are connected in someway...hmmmmmmmmmm..Aaron? Endless possibilities coming in my mind...
Update soon! Lovely update!
Love ya
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ttimpy

sad stories make me sad......i dont like to see armaaan in a sorry state of mind.............sob sure u have sumthing up ur sleeve...............get going gal....lets see what u update..........lolzzzzzz
Aww timpy,dont be sad,hope u like what i did with him in part one
sorry if u'r disappointed ,thanks for the comment hun
Originally posted by Catwoman

Wow paagal premee landed in Surrey hehehe
great intro.....
Love Kat
haha Kat yeh the pagal premee had to come Surrey,my county beckoned him
thanks Kat
Originally posted by SuhaniSonia

Wow!  Really nice intro.  Different story.
Please continue soon.
thanks Sonia,hope u like it further
Originally posted by Jodubai

Awesome Intro Hina di!!!!
Poor Arman in mental khana, think he is the friend Atul was talking about
Hopefully Muski will be able to dig into his past
take care
ps: I am reading pardes now, will comment soon, but sad as there is no Ridz in there but Tamz
thanks Jo,glad u liked the intro and
yeh hopefully osm eof your questions will be answered i the first part
 take your time wid pardes,i'll b eupdating the next part on it tom

Edited by hinanaziri - 20 November 2008 at 9:56pm
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krati.mehra

OMG...this is like gr8...has me hooked...

Armaan in rehab??? like are you serious...hehe...k k...ya so hes in rehab and i don't see riddz nywhere...muski worried...hmmm...Atul's mysterious friend...WOW...Wat many mysteries...i can't wait to read more...
Plssss update this soon and the other ones as well...i hv not read all of them...wil read them today i guess....but loving this and Pardes as well...these are the only two i read...haha...
kk....loved this one...and looking forward to more..
Love ya
luv u too Kratz
thanks for liking the intro,got u hav eso mnay questions for me
i duno half the answers yet lolz ,
thanks for reeading both my fics,these ar ethe current two i'm updating anyway
i'll let u know when i revive my other two too LOL
cheers Kratz hun
Originally posted by dmgfan19

very intriguing...i m hooked to this ff for sure...will wait for next pair...amazing startClapClapClap
hey Harika
thanks hun ,hope u'll find part one interesting
thanks for the  sweet comments
and i'm totally lovin gyour fic so far
thanks to nj for recommending it
Originally posted by samijan

sounds interesting. continue soon!
thanx Samira,part one updatedBig smile

Edited by hinanaziri - 20 November 2008 at 10:11pm
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aravi

HAILA!!!!!!! hinu di another one!!!!1 seems sooo different frn ur usual soft romance wala angle!!!!! but armaan mentally ill haawww yeh kab hua? kaise hua???? ...          god it has a mysterious tinge to it naa wid muskaan's curiosity n atul's unknown frnd something fresh n new i feel!!!!!!! srsly cant wait for d next part!!!just gng to check d VM !!!   luv ya aravi
haha Aru ,ek aur jhatka sorry lolz
yeh me just wante dto try a serious fic ,bohot hua mushy romance
mystery yep its full of it throughout the fic
hope u like the vm and part one Aru,thanks for the comments
luv ya 2
Originally posted by pal_279

omg di!! 1 mor ff... :)) wat an intro...nic mystery nd all!!

havent seen d vm yet...will see nd comment soon...

thanks Palnika hun
hope u liked the vm
and the update is up now....

Edited by hinanaziri - 20 November 2008 at 10:27pm
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
oh  god!!!

in great sorrow too there is great beauty...and it just shines through in your writing. great concept, great writing...i am thrilled...

could u pls pm me...
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jia..

OMG OMG OMG......hang on did i just read my poor guy mentally ill???? Haioooooo Rabaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *faints* haha nautanki Jia fultoo fimli LOL

LMAo ok done with my hindi heroine drama, cuming to the ff, Waah Hinna i surely deserve a *pat on my back*
Cool for being the last strw of motivation to u for making u pen this outstanding fic. i know an di really wanna thank u for that extra push Embarrassed

Its fabulous!!! I mean the mystery u created, Muski curious, Atul's mysterious frnd, as i said nuthing shot of outstanding!!!  aww thanks so much Jia ,it mens a lot coming from an outstanding writer herself

Hinnu Di u better update this one soon, my poor guy *Sob* grrr how dare u??ROFL haha Jia ,sorry he still aint any better ,this will take some time i think

Ok enuf of my nautanki, waiting very eagerly to this one!! Luv ya Di
luv u 2 Jia ,hope u like part 1
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Posted: 20 November 2008 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dmg_sonia

hey hina

superb start...the intro only hooked me...i cant stop thinking what must have happened with my poor armaan....i cant stop myself 4m u know feeling bad  him...gosh am i sounding crazy? u see this is armaania hehe but seriously outstanding concept...loved the intro....n yea i liked muski too, i think she will be a wonderful support 2 armaan

luv, sonu

hey sonu,
thanks for the comments hun
haha u sad too for him?
yeh u do sound crazy sorry lolz
hmm lets see what Muskaan does
hope u enjoy pat one hun
Originally posted by dmglovernimisha

i dint understand it much but... lolz
as u said its a serious love story then is it that Armaan's sorta mad here?? yeh kinda
PM me!!! i did
upd8 ASAP!!
hugs & luv
thanks Nimisha

Edited by hinanaziri - 20 November 2008 at 11:01pm

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