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~Betrayed by fate~ pt 12 uptd 27/04 (Page 51)

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Posted: 26 April 2009 at 3:37pm | IP Logged

reserved..right behind you barnz!

*edit*

loved the update hinz....:D i am like in this awesome mood rite now...3 reasons for it...one the update *eeeeh* 2nd your "PS" :D and 3rd the blog....read it...ull hve a gud laugh!! okay...bck to the part...yeh its movin...and to wer i want to see it...its so subtle...everything....i think dts d catch..! :D yur choice of discription and expressions are different....and yet impressive...!! AR scene was fantabulous...one ill remember for long...it was just the touch of it...*magical* hinz Smile ..!!

chalo..jaldi se dusra update bhi kardo...am loving it!

mmuuahh!!
..KSGz elder bro :P




Edited by missypatel - 27 April 2009 at 2:34am
Prasanthi IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 26 April 2009 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Hinu...part was small but sweet.. Armaan as always close to the kids... loved his small interaction with the boy... ab jaldi se... aage ki kahani.. update kardo.. want to see lots more happening.. continue super soon and thanks for updating this part...
suvi_rox1 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 April 2009 at 1:55am | IP Logged
hi..hina......how r u?sweeto....
the prt was lovely so slowly u r unleashing the beginning of their acquaintances n all....hey bt i think the prt was quite shorter.....it ended so soon..plz post the nxt prt soon as u said u have almost completed.....thnx.....
n by the way i didnt get ur pm this time...
tc..hugss
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Posted: 27 April 2009 at 2:04am | IP Logged
hmm so she claimed him as a friend?! i guess thats a start! great part di, was waiting for sometime quite eagerly to read it! i love the way u mix the past and the present, it really makes u feel like your part of the tale!
glad to hear your almost done the next part, looking forward to it!
nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 April 2009 at 7:44am | IP Logged
woah diHug its really awesome oneStar superb dearDay Dreaming plz continue it soonTongueWink

"Smile in pleasure,
Smile in pain,
Smile when trouble pours like rain,
Smile when someone hurts u,
Smile coz someone still loves to see u smiling."

pal234 Senior Member
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Posted: 28 April 2009 at 6:06am | IP Logged

Such a lovely part dii...the sudden change in their interactions seem so magical....awesome part di..

 
thnx for d pm...nd cont. soon  :)
prernawaghray IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 April 2009 at 8:11am | IP Logged
hey hinu
finally u updated heheeh
i enjoyed reading this part a lot
so AR got to go together without anyone's disturbance lolz
thats nice
that scene where ridz clashes with armaan n he holds her face
was really cute
update soon
cutie13 Senior Member
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Posted: 29 April 2009 at 5:41pm | IP Logged
gr8 part
like the way how u mix the past n present together
cont soon

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