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hinz

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Posted: 23 April 2009 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Prasanthi

Hinu... shall we have to wait till 25th for this one to get continued... since 2+5=7 ...lolz...WinkSmile.
 
continue soon... lekapothe telusu kada.. ee fic ni , nannu mosam "betrayed" chesinattu avutundi...LOL


haha Praz awesome logic
well i was planning to update today coz its the 23rd ,another special day LOL
but then my plans never work the way i'd like them to
working on the part now ,shall update as soon as i'm done
don't keep ur hopes high tho (u probably know that by now lolz)

aunu naku  telusu ,kani plz naku inkaokkati chance iwwa


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Posted: 23 April 2009 at 5:29pm | IP Logged

Tears are dry...In Pain
Smile has caught the flu...
Holding one hand pinching my thigh
The other in between my teeth,
Read my mind....mindreader...
Need an update here, for the long life of my beau! :D

Update madamji!


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Posted: 23 April 2009 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Originally posted by Prasanthi

Hinu... shall we have to wait till 25th for this one to get continued... since 2+5=7 ...lolz...WinkSmile.
 
continue soon... lekapothe telusu kada.. ee fic ni , nannu mosam "betrayed" chesinattu avutundi...LOL


haha Praz awesome logic
well i was planning to update today coz its the 23rd ,another special day LOL
but then my plans never work the way i'd like them to
working on the part now ,shall update as soon as i'm done
don't keep ur hopes high tho (u probably know that by now lolz)

aunu naku  telusu ,kani plz naku inkaokkati chance iwwa
 
firstly.. congrats on completing 50 pages for this fic...Thumbs Up
 
secondly.. lolz... "kani plz naku inkaokkati chance iwwa"...
after reading this line. i remembered khadgam movie in which Ravi teja tells the same dialogue...LOLLOLLOL
sarele.. nee kosam aa maatram cheyyalena.. nee ishtam. take how many ever chances you want...Tongue
 
ps: 23rd ki ento special Shocked...

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Posted: 24 April 2009 at 11:02am | IP Logged
heyy hina diiBig smile

luvddd ur updates.....sply d way u blend dem....d past nd prsnt nd dat 2 by diff ppl...nd d way all characters are fitting into d story...m luving it mor nd mor.....muuuaaahhh..Clap hats offf.....

pls pls cont. soon...dnt kno kab tak free rahungi..wanna read as much as i can... :)

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Posted: 25 April 2009 at 2:42am | IP Logged
hey plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update..................
its been vry long since u updated plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Suvarna....

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Posted: 25 April 2009 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Hinu ... when are you updating next bit for this? Please do so soooooonnnnnnn. :)

hinz

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Posted: 26 April 2009 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
part 12 posted on page 1
hope u guys like it
please leave your comments
they keep me going...........

love
Hina


spln

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Posted: 26 April 2009 at 3:35pm | IP Logged

reserved ....yayyyyy me first!

*edit*

laut ayi main... late latif...:D

hinu.... biggieeee hug!!! for getting into Armidz past.... gosh for all the time i was thinking about how it would be and the whole mess of their clashes and then reconcilation and ultimate love.... loved the balcony scene... the clothed wall :D:D:D oh well clothed for a while you should have said...her nose turning rudolph... but i guess the best bit in a very cute yet touching way was him wiping off her tear... i mean... with the defense still high and no real truce pulled up only temporary.... it was... just the most naturally inevitable intimacy you could share with someone where the spark had come about... think it will be one of my fav scenes ever in the history of fighters turning lovers transition tales....

and the whole ride to the hospital... him resounding and abiding ... her being irked and pretty stumped by him if she cares to admit.... loved it all... of course i always enjoy the way you weave through past and present and minnie being the cheek... can hardly wait... hinu... please... do like a couple of be trayed parts next before GND... pretty please... i like... just want to sit and read about AR... they are so rivetting... with all the chars you're doing absolute justice to, i cant get enough of the two... or maybe it is, what you call the, playing hard to get to game they are playing here... not amongst themselves but with us, in you not letting them open all at once.... me like...

hugs again hinu... and 315 to hai hi apna purana takhiya kalaam!!!

nj :)


Edited by spln - 30 April 2009 at 12:37pm

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