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simran1285

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 6:36pm | IP Logged

hmmmmmmmm now this is interesting, Armi mad and Ridz (has to be Ridz) betrayed him, but how did muski find out these little details??

I guess this means Anji and Ridz are not related, please update soon this is very intriguing!!

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pickytg

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 7:28pm | IP Logged
reserved!! :( mera intezaar nahi kiyaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
**edited**

hmmm didnt i already tell yaaaa...luved it!!
muskaans curiosity..anjiez concern...atulz secret care and d patient in talks...let him sleepin for a while!! ahah!! lmao...and d story frm a 3rd personz view...awesome!!!Clap
grt one hini....update jaldi se!!!!likhooooooo abhii!!

315 :)
nij~




Edited by missypatel - 18 November 2008 at 7:28pm

cutie13

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
gr8 intro
i wonder why armaan is in mental department
where is ridz
god too many questions in my head lol anyways
cont soon
 
p.s can u tell me what other fan fictions beside pardes u write

arshluver_15

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Hey Hina Wow new concept i loved it It seemes very very interesting to me i m gald that u have wrot this its something new thnxs luv nruti

anitamalik

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 7:57pm | IP Logged

Hinaaaaaaaaa!

I'm so excited for this to start! Man, that was a captivating teaser right there...I'm like longing to read more!!! Feed my hungry self Hina...lol...Jokes apart, Hina this was one awesome start! The way you explained Muskaan's curiosity to Armaan's case was unbelivable..I was intrigued right then and there..Awesome job! And then I loved how you brought in a important real life fact through Anji---"patient-doctor confidentiality."

Atul doesn't like to recall painful disasters...Hmm...why am I getting the feeling that Armaan is somehow connected to Atul?
 
Damn Muskaan is so curious about Armaan...She got his case files right then and there...lol....I'm loving her character!
 
My poor Armaan---he's mental! Cry I wonder how he has been betrayed in love...I have a strong feeling its because of Ridz...Cry
 
Great job Hina! I loved it completely...and to put the cherry on top, I'm actually reading this on time..lol...I'm still catching up on Pardes--hopefully, by this weekend I will be caught up since I have next week off due to Thanksgiving...
 
You better PM me...and if you don't, I will still check up on this FF!
 
Thnks Jia, NJ, Nij, and all others for your encouragement for making Hina post this...or else we would have missed out!
 
Love ya too Hina!Hug
 
Anita


Edited by anitamalik - 17 November 2008 at 7:58pm

bollywoodqueen5

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 8:00pm | IP Logged
amazing intro...cant wait till you continue the story

hinz

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
Thanks everyone for the interest and response
I sure will be putting up part 1  soon
hopefully it will give u all a bit of relief
 
love
Hina
 

anitamalik

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinanaziri

Thanks everyone for the interest and response
I sure will be putting up part 1  soon
hopefully it will give u all a bit of relief
 
love
Hina
 
 
You better post it soon! It would sure give me relief...lol..LOLEmbarrassed
 
Aww and thanks for those sweet compliments on my short story! I will update Jeevan Saathis this week...since I have next week off due to Thanksgiving..lol..So I will update it soon! Sorry to keep you waiting!

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