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..luv_shahid..

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Posted: 16 November 2008 at 11:50pm | IP Logged

hello friends...
i came up with a FF on RagVir which starts from: when ranvir gets all the evidences of vinu being innocent and vinu gets bail with ranvir's help...

A special thanx to shagun di for providing d banner for my fan fiction... loved dis banner....

Ragini is all alone in her room standing infront of the window and she hears someone opening the door of her room.... she turns back and gets surprised to see sadhna.....
she greets her and gives her a warm hug...... she then asks her to sit down.... after they both sit down a strange silence surrounds the room... sadhna senses that something is surely there that is bothering ragini....

she asks her "jiji kya sab theek hai??? kyunki jab se main yaha aayi hu mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha hai... aisa lag raha hai ki aap bohot badi pareshaani mei ho"

Ragini takes a deep breath and says "kya karu mai sadhna, jo maa bauji ke liye khushiyo ki bahaar leke aaya hai wohi cheez mere dukh ka karan ban chuki hai... tum toh jaanti ho na sadhna ki ranvir ko bhulana mere liye mushkil hi nahi balki namumkin hai...... ranvir ki baatein, unka pyaar, unka mere liye itna badaa sacrifice bhulane ki koshish bhi karu na toh bhi nahi bhulaya jaa sakta....."

"Main jaanti hu Jiji..... jo haal aapka yahaa hai na wohi haal waha ranvir ji ka bhi hai".... ragini looks at sadhna with tears in her eyes coz she could feel the pain through which ranvir was going.....
"aapko pataa hai jiji jis din mummyji yahaa aayi thi na us din ghar jaane ke baad mummyji aur ranvirji mein thodi kahaa suni ho gayi aur tab mujhe ehsaas hua ki ranvirji aapse kitna pyaar karte hai aur aap unke liye kitni special ho...."

after a small silence sadhna says "jiji abhi bhi kuch nahi bigdaa hai, aap chahe toh abhi bhi apna decision badal sakti hai aur mujhe poora yakken hai ki mamaji aur mamiji aapke faisle ke saath honge..... aap ye faisla karke mamaji aur mamiji ko toh khushiya de dengi par woh dukh ka kya jo aapke saath, ranvir ji ke saath aur yaha tak ki shishir ji ke saath hamesha rahega aapki shaadi ke baad.... ye baat aap bhi janti ho aur main bhi ki aap sirf aur sirf ranvir ji ke saath khush rahoge...."

"main jaanti hu ki meri saari khushiyan, saari ummeede, saare sapney sirf ranvir ji ke saath hai par......"

she was about to say something when she saw malti running toward the hall..... both ragini and sadhna gives each other a strange look and walks out of the room and follows malti......
they both reach the hall along with malti and see that vinu is standing at the door and ranvir is also standing with him and was continuously looking at ragini with eyes full of love for her....
ragini froze for moment to see ranvir at her home and she turns back to go to her room when she hears ranvir saying something to mamaji and stops there itself......

please comment about tis please and after your comments i will continue

*~VASUNDHARA~*

Edited by cuty_pie - 06 December 2008 at 3:24am

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ANJANA

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 1:02am | IP Logged

Nice FF ,Please continue,This will work as Tonic till new episodes start

talkativetaurus

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 1:32am | IP Logged

nice one ... keep writing!

..priya..

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 1:35am | IP Logged

good job

........do continue.....

sweet_shagun

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 2:15am | IP Logged

Really a nyc Fan fiction Vasundra, nyc start, do continue
Here is the banner for your fan fiction!!

LINK-->http://i38.tinypic.com/20g0cq1.png

Hope you like it!!

Luv,

Shagun

..luv_shahid..

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 2:49am | IP Logged

Originally posted by ANJANA

Nice FF ,Please continue,This will work as Tonic till new episodes start

thanx a lot ....
wud try to write better by the next part....

*~VASUNDHARA~*

..luv_shahid..

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 2:53am | IP Logged

Originally posted by talkativetaurus

nice one ... keep writing!

thanx a lot ....
wud try to write better by the next part....

*~VASUNDHARA~*

just_in

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Posted: 17 November 2008 at 2:53am | IP Logged

Nice one. Do continue. I wanna see what ranveer says and how ragini reacts. Big smile

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