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Rahul and Muskaan in Lonavala - pg23 - last part (Page 2)

ramusk IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
hey yaar...u rock with ur dreams and hope they both are safe after dat car goin outaa control Unhappy.....continue dear...n i think she's gonna go over him with her scoldings once she gets upWink

-Mishti_Divz- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 November 2008 at 12:45am | IP Logged
ClapClapthxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx alot sonia wow yaar u have such a amazing dreams. plzzzz continue soon
-Sakina- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 November 2008 at 1:23am | IP Logged

goodness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!they'll be safe na?

why do you say you don't have a good imagination?
you're amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
do pm me!!!!!!!!!!!!
luvingRM Senior Member

Joined: 14 September 2008
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Posted: 13 November 2008 at 4:33am | IP Logged
abb mai samajh gayi tu YE NATAK HAI K MAIRI IMAGINATIONS ACHI NAHI ...etc Tongue
hope to c next part really soon and this one was really gr8
-Mansi- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 November 2008 at 10:56am | IP Logged u did start this one!! Its awsome like the mesemerizing..i reali cant wait for ur updates nw..continue soon!!:))
x.sonia.x IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 November 2008 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
if you stopped the other one - atleast continue this one...
-Mishti_Divz- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 10:43am | IP Logged

Crywhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy u r not continueing yaar u stoped last one but plzzzzzz don't stop it here Cry plzzzz update soonnCry Cry

SuhaniSonia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 November 2008 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Ok so I decided to actually write this out in parts as the other one became quite confusing to read without parts.  So I will continue this one and will try to figure out something with the other one soon.  Hope you like it.  Thanks for the comments.  They are very much appreciated. Big smileBig smileBig smile
Aur yaar natak nahin hai.  Meri imagination kuch achi nahin hai. 
Magar mujhe to bas itne ache sapne aate hain.  Thank god. Big smile
Star Part 3 Star
He finally gets the car under some control and starts feeling safe when he realizes there is a tree in the middle of the road.  Ofcourse he does not notice this until the last second as it is dark outside.


He hits the tree but not head on luckily. 

All this commotion wakes up Muskaan and she jerks away trying to fix herself up as she realizes that she was leaning on him in her sleep. She doesn't know why they aren't moving and she is also confused as to why she woke up.

Rahul looks over to her to make sure she is ok.

Muskaan - ( shouts) Rahul! Yeh kya kar raha hai?  Hum yahan kare hoye kyun hai.  Gaddi chalane ke liye hoti hai, aise bathane ke liye nahin.

Rahul - Abe.. tujhe kuch patha bhi hai?.. abhi abhi itna bada accident hua hai aur tu na...

Muskaan - Accident?  Kiska?

Rahul - Budu.. humara.  Aur kiska?

Muskaan - Kya?

Rahul - Bahar ja ke dekhta hoon.

He walks out and looks so upset.  The front half of his car is all smashed in and on top of it all there is a flat tire.  Muskaan joins him and is amazed that all this happened and she had no idea. 

Rahul - Meri pyari si nirdosh si car!

Muskaan - (honestly feels bad for him for a split second) Haan.. yeh bohot bhura hua hai Rahul. 

She then starts thinking about what happened and starts getting angry at Rahul.

Muskaan - Ullu ka pata!!  Yeh teri waja se hi to hua hai.  Gaddi chalani nahin aati to...

Rahul - Yeh to teri waja se hua hai.. (thinking about how he was distracted by her but doesn't know why he said that out loud as he could not explain that to her)

Muskaan - Kya?  Maine kya kiya?  Tu hi to chala raha tha. Aisi hi dusron pe ilzaam laga raga hai.
Tu na.... cursing (sorry I am not good at that stuff)

Rahul isn't completely paying attention as he is quite upset about his car but then he hears the
end of her ranting.

Muskaan - still cursing


And she actually listens but she isn't happy about it. Making a grumpy face and muttering again.

Muskaan - (muttering) Kya sochta hai apne aap ko?  Main kyon chup rahoon?

She goes to sit down on a rock on the side of the road and quite perplexed as to what to do.  You could barely make out anything down the road as it was so dark out.

Muskaan - Ab kya karein ge?

Rahul looks over at her and feels bad for snapping at her.  She looks so concerned.

Rahul - Ab hum raat is 'khatara' main bitaenge.

Muskaan - Kya?

Rahul - Yeh 'kya kya' kyun lagaya hua hai?  Tujhe kabhi kohi ideas aaye to pata dena.

Muskaan - Tera to pata nahin hai.  Main to yahan bathne nahin wali.  Lift le loon ghi kise se.

Muskaan gets up and grabs her bags from the car and starts walking down the road muttering to herself. Rahul is just standing there with his mouth open in shock that she thinks she can just do that.

Rahul - Abe.  Kahan ja rahi hai itni raat ko lift mangne aur woh bhi akeli.  Kabhi lift mangi hai kisise?

Muskaan - Terese to behetar aathi hogi. Waise to main akeli hi theek hoon.  Magar tera kya hoga?
Chal, tu bhi chal. Main teri bhi madhat kar lethi hoon.  Tu bhi kya yaad rakhe ga.
(realizes she probably doesn't want to walk around alone but won't tell him that)

Rahul - Haan haan.  Tu aur meri madhat?

Muskaan - Nikamma!

Rahul - Bhootni!

He grabs his bags and tries to help with hers but she just keeps tugging on it and won't let go. They walk along yelling at each other every so often.  Despite the yelling, Muskaan is so glad that he is with her because it is quite scary out there on the unlit road with just the stars and moon to provide them with some support.

There are no cars that pass by for an hour when finally they see lights and note a truck coming from
from behing going their way.  It actually stops for them.  There is a dirty looking man inside but
Muskaan runs towards the truck and jumps in anyway.

TD (truck driver) - Oye hoye soniyo! Tussi ini raat nu kithe jande paiyo? (with a bad punjabi accent)

The truck driver is eyeing Muskaan up and down and she doesn't seem to notice as she is extremely
happy that someone stopped and she has a huge smile on her face.  Rahul on the other hand is not
so happy with this guy.

Muskaan - Hum na..

Rahul cuts her off - Main aur meri biwi .... (explains what happened and that they need a lift)

He agrees to drop them off.  Muskaan jumps into the seat next to him and Rahul on the other side is not happy about this.  He puts his arm around Muskaan being possessive. 

Muskaan - Rahul!  yeh kya kar raha hai?

Rahul - Kya?

Muskaan - Yeh.. (picks up his hand from her shoulder and throws it off)

The driver is watching all this in amusement. 

Eventually Rahul drifts off to sleep and his head falls on her shoulder.  Her initial reaction was
to pull away but she is too tired and feels bad for him.  She also drifts off to sleep with her head
against his.

The driver puts his hand on Muskaans leg and she pushes it away in her sleep not realizing what is
actually going on. He is persistent and eventually she wakes up feeling something weird. Thinking
it is Rahul she his him and as Rahul awakens the driver moves his hand away.

Rahul - Owww!  Kya Muskaan?

Muskaan - Mujhe chune ki himmat tujhe kaise huo?

Rahul - Maine kab..

Rahul sees the driver looking over at them and he realizes he has to play it off like they are really married.

Rahul - Main tera pathi hoon. Main tujhe touch bhi karoon to tujhe.. waise maine tujhe nahin touch kiya. Main
to so raha tha.

Muskaan - Oh... haan haan..  main to kuch woh sapne main..

Rahul - Tu aur tere ridiculous sapne.  Kitni baar mar chukhi hai tu mujhe sapne mein.

Muskaan - Woh main asliyat main nahin mar sakthi hoon na tho aise hi khush rehti hoon.

Rahul - Chal chup ho ja. Bolthi rehti hai.  So jha.

Muskaan is wide awake and can't sleep but Rahul does go to sleep right away this time turning away from her.

TD - Woh so gaya.  Acha hua.  Bahot thang kartha hai tujhe. Yeh aaj kaal ke ladke itne sundhar gori ladki
ki kaddhar kya jane. 

Muskaan - Haan woh to hai.

As he is saying this he reaches over starts touching her hand and holds it tight.

TD - Aaja - zara paas akhe baith. Main tujhe nazdeek se dekhna chatha hoon.

Muskaan - Nahin main yahan hi theek hoon.  Zara haath chodiye.

He stops the truck and pulls her closer by the waist.  She is very uncomfortable with his touch and struggles to get away from him.  She turns to wake Rahul up but then he pulls her away.

TD - (whispers harshly in her ear) - Tune kuch kaha to main usko mar mar ke kitni buri halat kardoon ga.
Chup chap ho ke chal.

He pulls her out of the truck and starts groping her. Rahul is still asleep in the truck. Muskaan is so
scared but she is even more scared that Rahul will get hurt if she does anything to try to get away.
Finally she decides to scream when she feels the scruffy skin of the drivers face when he moves in to kiss her.  (Ewww! - this almost felt like a nightmare at this time)

Edited by SuhaniSonia - 14 November 2008 at 10:34pm

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