KYPH Ended! - Page 5

Posted: 15 years ago
as always love ur updates...........i know u r also busy but i wish u could update faster............never mind.

thanx for updating regularly.
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by yogitz


as always love ur updates...........i know u r also busy but i wish u could update faster............never mind.

thanx for updating regularly.
 
Hey thanks glad u liked it! this ff is fresh so will be updating more regularly than the others. hopefully by thursday! then rankan meet!!!!!
 
Nadz
Posted: 15 years ago

 Kaisa yeh pyar hai?

       Khwaishon ki kashmokash mein...

 

 
Part 4
Next morning kanya and mahi get dressed and go to kanya's house.

K: hey harry, kahan jaa rahe ho?

H: who ek friend  ke yahan.

M: aha, simi??

H: [blushing] shhh, koi sun lega!

K: to mama ko bata kyun nahi dete?
H: kanya tum janti hai na mama ko simi bilkul pasand nahi!
M: [laughing] that's because who tumhe lalu bula ti hai.

Kanya and mahi clap hands and laugh.

H: whatever, tum dono? oh btw mahi tum aaj jaa rahi ho?

M: ya in the evening!

H: oh okay, will come to the station. Okay gals see ya at the station. Bye!

K & M: bye!

M: chal ab jaldi se papa ko convince karna hai!

K: ya the toughest job!
M: chal!

They go in the house. Mansha is watching TV.

K: hey mansh kya dekh rahi hai?

Mansh: di, fashion show, your fav chaliye mere saath dekhiye na?

K; nahi abhi nahi, kuch important bat karni hai!

Mansh: okay di, waise bhi main record kar rahi hoon!

K: you're the best sis, love u!

Mansh: same here!

Pooja is getting all her luggage out.

K: hey di! Aaj aap bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho!

P: kanya, [suspicious look]  tum theekh to ho na?

M: waise aap kya kar rahe ho?
P: mera saman nikal rahi hoon, im also goin tonite, same train as yours!

M: really, oh that's cooool! Im so happy main akeli nahin hoongi!

They start discussing what they'll do in the train, play cards, monopoly etc?

K: [getting annoyed] hello, main bhi yahan hoon!

M: sorry, di kanya ko aap se kuch baat karni thi!

P: kya, jaldi kaho main bohot busy hoon!

K: woh di, aap to janti ho, meri school khatam ho gayi hai

P: to????
K: aur main bhi aapki tarhan independent banna chahti hoon?

P: aha?. Age?

K: to di, mujhe bhi Mumbai aana tha, but papa?

P: oh, to yeh baat hai, isliye itna butter mara jaa raha tha? well I cant help in that, tu to jaanti hai na papa ko? tu na mama se baat kar!

K: but di?

P: gals mujhe bohot cheezein karni hain see ya later! Bye!
K: oh no, ab???

M: mama!

K: chal!

They go to pammi, shes in the room packing poojas other things.

K: mama

P: are tum dono agayi, aao.

K: mama, mujhe kuch baat karni thi!

P: kya hua?

K: mama, main Mumbai jaana chahti hoon!

P: kya [shocked]

She leaves what shes doing and pays more attention.

K: mama, main bhi di ki tarhan independent bana chahti hoon, main bhi kaam karna chahti hoon.

P: kanya, tu jaanti hai na, tere papa kabhi nahin manenge?
K: par kyun mama? Agar di akeli wahan reh sakti hai to main kyun nahin, aur mere saath to mahi aur dib hi hongi. Sonia aur amber bhi jaa rahi hai!

P: haan, par kanya tu jaanti hai na who pooja ke iss faisle se kitne gusse hue the? Ek mahina usse baat bhi nahin ki thi!

K: Lekin akhir me maan gaye na??? aur mama di akeli thi isiliye unhe problem tha, main akeli nahin hoongi to kya problem hai???

P: kanya tu jaanti hai na tere papa kabhi haan nahin karenge.

K; kyun mama, kyun sirf mere saath kyun [crying] mama agar harry aur mansha apne doston ke saath der raat tak rahe to koi problem nahin hai, lekin agar me bas no bage tak bhi bahar rahoon to papa mujhe dant te hain, agar harry aur mansh movies kelie jayen apne doston ke saath so no problem lekin agar me apne doston ke saath jaoon to papa ko accha nahin lagta, kyun mama kyun???? Kya papa ko mujh par bharosa nahin hai??? Kya main itni buri hoon?  di akeli Mumbai me rahe to koi problem nahi lekin agar me sirf yahan bazoo me ice cream lene jaoon to papa ke nazar me woh bhi paap hai na? kyun mama?

P: kanya,

K: nahin mama, agar mansha school mein dance competition me part leti he, sleeveless backless kapde pehenti hai to theekh hai lekin agar main jeans aur ek short top pehenloon to problem agar main school mein fashion show me hissa loon to papa mera graduation bhi miss kardete hain kyunki woh nahin chahte the ke main hissa loon, Kyun mama, itna farak kyun?? Kya main apki beti nahi?? Kyun mama????

She runs out angry,

P: kanya, meri baat?

and on her way out sees anand standing and hearing the story. She just sees him and runs away in her room. Mahi runs behind her. Anand is very upset and starts to walk out of there.

P: suniye?

He stops.

P: aapne dekha na, use kitna bura lag raha hai?? Aap uske saath itni sakti kyun karte hain? Woh bhi aapka khoon hai, usme bhi humare sanskar hai to aap kyun use?

A: pammi, abhi mujhe iss bare mein baat nahin karni!

P: woh Mumbai jaana chahti hai, wahan kaam karke parahi karna chahti hai!

A: mujhe thodi der akela chod do!

He goes away to the balcony.

In kanyas room.

M: kanya, plz darwaza khol?

K: mahi plz abhi yahan se jao I'll call u later!

M: kanya plz!

K: jao mahi!

M: okay bye! Time ho to mujhe bye kehne aaja na! [angry]

K: [she takes her phone and dials] hello mahi!
M: kanya, ab kyun phone kar rahi ho?

K: mahi agar main over react nahi karti to papa aur mama pe asar kaise hota, dumbo main sirf over act kar rahi thi, I know ab papa akele behet ke sochenge aur phir haan kehdenge!

M: kanya tu kabhi nahin sudhregi!

K: I know!
M: jab haan ho jaye jaldi se mujhe inform karna okay!

K: kardoongi!

Anand sits and thinks about every word that kanya said and hears other voices .

Girl: main jo karna chahti hoon wahi karoongi! Okay!

Anand: maine kaha na, tum usse kabhi nahin milogi!

Girl: aap jo bhi kahein, main wohi karoongi jo mujhe karna hai!

Anand has tears in his eyes. And pammi enters.

P; aap kyun, wohi baatein sochte rehte hain? Jo guzargaya so guzargaya, aaj main jeena sikhiye, aapki beti par bharosa kijiye, woh aapki beti hai!
A: main janta hoon, lekin main usse galat raaste pe nahin jaane de sakhta!

P: woh kabhi kuch galat nahin karegi!

A: mujhe lagta hai tum sahi kehrahi ho!

P: [smiles] (she looks at the time its 3:00pm) chaliye aap dono ne khana nahin khaya hai!

A: haan bohot bhook lagi hai!

P: chaliye

In Kanya room?

Kanya is listening to her ipod and exercising. She finishes and feels hungry.

K: ab kya khaoon? Idea? Chocolates!

She takes out a whole packet of chocolates from her draw and starts eating them.

Anand and pammi go to kanyas room. They knock the door.

P: kanya darwaza khol!

K: [oh shit mum, she hides her chocolates in the draw]

P: Kanya darwaza khol!

K: kya hai mama???

P: chalk hale!

K: mujhe bhook nahin hai!

A: kanya, darwaza khol!
K:  papa [smiling😊]

She gets up and opens the door and runs away to her bed.

A: Kanya, tum Mumbai jaa sakhti ho!

K: what [all smiles😃] really? She looks at her mum and dad.

P; [nodding] haan!

K: huh, thank you sooo much papa, I love u! [she hugs him]

P: ab chal khale!

They all eat and then go and book the ticket. Its evening everyone comes to meet them at the station.

Shabd, rohit, amber, dhara, chunnu, simi, harry and the whole gang is there. They all meet eachother. And sonia, kanya, mahi and pooja get on the train and leave!

 

Hey that's all for now next update in Mumbai, hopefully will have all the guys! Lolz. [Angad, aayan and Ranbir] But I hope you liked it!

Please read and comment!

 

Nadz

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago

Wow!!!!😲 Kanya is very sneaky even moreso than KK from your other FF!!!!!!😆 Yeah, why is Anand so overprotective of Kanya?!!!! 😕Interesting!!!! 😃 Yeah, I can't wait for the next update since they will arrive at Mumbai!!!! ðŸ˜‰Please continue soon!!!!😃 Thanks for the update, Nadz!!!

 
Shreya
Posted: 15 years ago
good plot nadz! eonder wassup between kanya nd anand!
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by punjabi.princes


great update
continue soon
 
Hey thanks im glad u liked it!
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by spate22


Wow!!!!😲 Kanya is very sneaky even moreso than KK from your other FF!!!!!!😆 Yeah, why is Anand so overprotective of Kanya?!!!! 😕Interesting!!!! 😃 Yeah, I can't wait for the next update since they will arrive at Mumbai!!!! ðŸ˜‰Please continue soon!!!!😃 Thanks for the update, Nadz!!!

 
Shreya
 
heya, yeah shes really sneaky and mean too, she lies to her parents does all the nonsense but at the end of the day she loves them but i had to show how sneaky she is coz later in the story she'll be lieng, lieng and always lieng. lolz😆😆 the anand story wont be coming for sometime coz in mumbai its only love and dreams...lolz😆 next update in the train and then welcome to mumbai! but rannu is not yet in mumbai, but i'll show him in america... Im glad u liked it will continue soon!
 
love
 
Nadz
Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
Posted: 15 years ago
Originally posted by nidhieya


good plot nadz! eonder wassup between kanya nd anand!
 
Hey glad u liked it and anand kanya story is in the background at the moment!
 
Nadz

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