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AR l From Midnight to Morning lPrt 13/Pg 59: 14/03 (Page 7)

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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
gr8 part!
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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
omg whats he going to do?!?! 

really great concept, loved the first part! ridz is a smart girl, and this aman is a pig! hate him already!

please continue soon!

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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
allrite dtz some catch...u got a lot goin..bt really i have no clue how its all linked..!!
but dt was nt a nice thing to do ridz!! lol!!

cudnt she hve waited for him 2 do smg on hiz own?? duhH! hez habituated...dt nasty guy..wud hve dne it sooner or later!!
sumtimes girls naaa tey dnt use ter brains rite..!!lol

okay!! my bad!! stupid rattlin...but i luv it!!dtz wat i meant to say..i small part n u got me tlkin much!!ha!

grt goin!! =)

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Wow!!! This girl could not be mistaken as shy n naive...Fabulous start Liza, loving the plot. I wonder how'll u put the con track in it....thanx for the pm...
 
Cont soooon...
 
Luv Shivani
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Posted: 08 November 2008 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by missypatel

allrite dtz some catch...u got a lot goin..bt really i have no clue how its all linked..!!
but dt was nt a nice thing to do ridz!! lol!!

cudnt she hve waited for him 2 do smg on hiz own?? duhH! hez habituated...dt nasty guy..wud hve dne it sooner or later!!
sumtimes girls naaa tey dnt use ter brains rite..!!lol

okay!! my bad!! stupid rattlin...but i luv it!!dtz wat i meant to say..i small part n u got me tlkin much!!ha!

grt goin!! =)
 
Hi........first of all thanks for commenting!!! Actually, if she would have waited for him to do something, then it's not necassary that she would be there to see it while happening..........and even if it would happen infront of her, she wouldn't have time to call her boss............like i wrote in the 1st part.........she asked her friend to hold the position for 2 mins, so that she can go call her boss......
 
I hope this helpsSmile
 
Thanks
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Posted: 08 November 2008 at 7:37am | IP Logged

thanks for the pm liza

loved part 1
there was quite a bit happening there
awsome track tho
cant wait for you to reveal more
esp the con part
cont soon
 
love
Hina
 
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Posted: 08 November 2008 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by perfectpiscean

Very interesting concept!
 
Would love to be PMed once u upd8 =D
 
thankyou for the comment!!.........you'll defenitely be PM'ed by me!!Smile

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