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Posted: 29 January 2006 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by khushi19

Originally posted by sharanb

awwwwwwwwwww thx guys
if i take to long feel free to cont when ever u want

no i don't think anyone can make your story better except youEmbarrassed

aw thx khushi di

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Posted: 29 January 2006 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Everyone is sitting down eating
a-hey kripa you going to finish that?
K-finish wat?
a-that piece of chicken
k-uff angad dekho tum kitne motia hogaye ho
a-kripa you noe I don't care wanna noe y?
k-nahin par tum phir bhi bhatanai valle ho na?
a-well you guy shud stay fit if he wants a gurl and I already have one
p-oh rly and whos the unlucky gurl
aa-hehehehehehehehe angad you got burned
a=hey chipko waise, tere pas tu ladki tu hai nahin, so why don't you try and stay fit
p-coz angu beta, my gurl is gonna luv me not my body
k-awww prithvi that sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet
p- I noe(giving angad another dirty look)
aa- waise why do you guys always fight
a- coz I luv kripa and prithvi keeps looking at her(thinking_oh shit wat did I jus say, I didn't mean that)
k-angad!!!!!!! Shut up! I've had enough! Im going home
a-oh come on kripa im sry
k-shut up angad! (walks away)
a-[follows her] ok kripa I went to far im sry plz don't go
k-[turns around] you find that going to far?
a-well yea
k-angad you went way to far I cant believe you jus did that to prithvi!
a-hold on a miniut your acting like you luv him or sumthin
k-maybe I do but y wud you care you jus care about getting aaliyah don't you?
a-kripa im sry
k-sry isn't enough angad!
a-but kripa I cudnt help it
k-well that your problem not prithvis, he helped me thro all of my lil problems, when you were busy mooning over aaliayh
a-kripa im sry
k-if you like aaliyah so much y are you going out with me
a-wat I min(thinking-wat the hell is she talking about)
k-I;ve had enough angad!!!!!
You see aaliyah and prithvi standing behind a tree listening to wats happing
Aaliyah walks away with prithvi

a-hey kripa you wanna tell me wat your talking about
k-sure, aaliyah was standing behind that tree
a-so you jus told her that I luved her?
k-your way was takeing to long so I thot I shud try my way
a-oh(for sum reason he felt bad)
k-shud we go back
a-yea and I take aaliyah in my arms and tell her I luv her rite?
k-yuck now you sound like kekta, no now you pertend that we worked everything out and are happy
k-uff! Becoz then she wont feel so bad about takeing you away from me!
(they start walking back)

angad stops, kripa turns around

a-ahh kripa did you mean wat you said about prithvi being there when I wasn't
k-kinda, you see I was having sum prob's with my parents
a-wat! When
k-see wat I mean, my parents wanted to get me engaged to this guy in the USA. He's rly nice and he;s sweet and good looking but I didn't want to marry him
a-why not? Don't tell me "mrs. Kripa I dontbelieve in luv", is waiting for her prince charming come
k-no angad im not waiting for him to come, im waiting for him to say "I luv you"
a-[thinking-don't tell me she luvs me] huh?
k-angad I rly luv prithvi
a-wat![thinking-I cant believe this! She luvs chipko!> since when oh god why do I even care?]
k-[starts laughing rly rly hard] omg I cant believe you fell for it! Me and prithiv??? Hehehe no way!
a-wat do you mean, if you don't luv chipko then why did you refuse to marry the other guy?
k-coz I didn't want to leave my family, my friends, I didn't twant a whole new world, I like my lil world, its mine and a luv it, im keeping it for as long as I can
a-but hey how did prithvi help you then
k-hehehe ok well when the family came over to see me, prithvi came in with flowers and said I cudnt marry the other guy coz he luved me,
a[thinking that stupid chipko!! How dare he, omg wat if kripas parents want her to marry him now! No wonder he;s so cocky] and wat did your parents say?
k-they didn't say anything, the other people left tho, they jus walked out, then when they left prithvi told my parents the turth about how I didn't want to marry the guy, and how he didn't luv me either, it was jus a plan to get me out of a sticky situation
a-[thank god he told them the truth]
k-ok we shud get going now
a-yea lets go
they start walking
a-[thinking why was I thinking all of those weird thots??][he stops walking[oh god I luv kripa, shit I cant tell her that, ok we'll jus go along with wat she planned and I'll jus make her fall in luv with me, I'll be the perfect bf she wont be able to resist]

Edited by sharanb - 29 January 2006 at 2:54pm
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plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon. Clap IF-Dazzler

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wow that was great cont soon
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lovely con soon
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great fan fic continue soon
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