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sharanb IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 January 2006 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Nxt day
Everybody is having a picnic in the park

n-angu beta can you go get the blanket from the car, I forgot it Smile
a-ok mom, kripa you wanna come?? Wink
p- (looking jealous) why angu cant you get the blanket urself Ouch
a-(with a cocky look on his face) oh I can, but it would be much much more fun with kripa there to Embarrassed Tongue Wink

gayatry and naina are looking vry vry happy Big smile

k-ok angad im comeing Smile
a-(puts his arm around kripa and walks away with a cocky look pointed in prithvis direction) Evil Smile Cool

when kripa and angad cud'nt see anyone anymore angad still didn't let kripa go
k-(elbowing angad rly hard in the stomache) wat the hell was that for???? Now mom and naina aunty are gonna think we're in luv Confused Ouch
a-so that's even betta, it makes it look more real Wink
k-uff fine but whats with you and prithvi?????? Angry
a- (rolls his eyes)don't tell me that you don't see the way he looks at you Shocked
k- I have no idea wat your talking about
a-sure you don't, every time I touch you he gets tense, every time I say sumthin to you he gets upset
k- hold up that's coz you always harras me, and he doesn't like it Big smile
a-how about , today we'll focas on prithvi not on aaliyah, just watch him turn green with envey
k- fine but im telling you it wont work
(angad smiles grabs the blanket and they walk back to the group)

a-hey guys
n-angad beta wat took so long?
a-moooooooom, (fakes a blush and looka at kripa) Embarrassed
k-(looks at prithvi jus in time to see him look away from her)
aa-god angad took you long enough
a-w/e aaliayha
k-hey guys lets go for a hike!!!!!
a-yea if we do we have to take partners Wink
p-yea your rite we wudnt want our poor lil angu to get lost, hey krips I'll be your partner Wink
a-(gives kripa that look that say told you so) acattally prithvi I think I shud go with kripa
k-(looks at aaliayh as if to say "boys!") why don't we go in a group
a-mom you guys comeing
n-no beta you noe at our age
g-speak for your self naina, im still jawan Wink (tries to get up but her arthritis is to much) ok maybe I shud sit this on out LOL

the hike is full of cute lil moments between angad kripa and prithiv(every one ignores aaliyah) Embarrassed   
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Edited by sharanb - 29 January 2006 at 1:36pm
Anam Ali Coolbie
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Posted: 28 January 2006 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
continue soon
Rhydima Senior Member
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Posted: 28 January 2006 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
Continue..
khushi19 Goldie
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Posted: 28 January 2006 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
finally you cont and it was great pls write more soon can't wait for the next part i just love your fanfic Big smile Big smile
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Posted: 28 January 2006 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
great plz cont soon. Clap
sharanb IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 January 2006 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwww thx guys
if i take to long feel free to cont when ever u want
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Posted: 28 January 2006 at 9:45pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by sharanb

awwwwwwwwwww thx guys
if i take to long feel free to cont when ever u want

no i don't think anyone can make your story better except youEmbarrassed

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