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ShWeEt @nGeL 16 Senior Member
ShWeEt @nGeL 16
ShWeEt @nGeL 16

Joined: 28 September 2008
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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 9:13am | IP Logged

hey this is diva............... all 5 parts were excellent............ its so intresting............. wooooooooooooo m waiting 4 da nxt parts................

plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.......... & do pm me when u will cont

mishti4maan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 9:45am | IP Logged
gr8 part. continue soon!!!!
sea_nyx Goldie

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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 10:22am | IP Logged

Hey simran (is that your real name?), first of all I'm so happy to meet a fellow KIT-ian Smile. I was a regular watcher of Ran-Kan since the very beginning of the serial and in fact when I first came to IF, I was active only on the KIT forum, and then I jumped to the DMG one (I know its horrible of me, but KIT kinda lost its charm for me after Ranbir had to go and live in Godbole house and then the whole Natasha track was just plain weird. I loved it best when they were fighting; remember sand and chipkali…….LOL) now I visit just this forum since what with univ. and all there's no time to visit the DMG forum either Cry. Anyway loved the ff so far and I loved the way u adapted the concept to fit AR.



I can't believe I missed this ff till now Confused, I loved it Star, especially the way you described Armaan or should I say Ranbir cause when I visualised the scenes especially their first meet, instead of ridz reacting to Armaan's pony I was seeing Kanya reacting to our "hate guru" Wink  but thatz an added benefit 4 me cause now I get to imagine not one but 2 hot guys in the same scene  Embarrassedand talking of scenes, the one that just happened in armaan's cabin was freaking mind-blowing!!!!!!!!! Clap Can't wait for the next part





spln IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 06 December 2007
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Posted: 07 November 2008 at 10:35am | IP Logged
o man simmy u take the track down well...dam well in fact...great job...the pace the plot, um so happy udecided to take up this fic again, it truly deserved a shot!!!great job!
UnKnFascination IF-Rockerz

Joined: 30 October 2007
Posts: 6394

Posted: 07 November 2008 at 10:50am | IP Logged

wow simran excellent update

gosh..........both r going crazy for each lets c how wil u make them end up together..............dat b wud interesting to read


nidha1983 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 03 January 2008
Posts: 21049

Posted: 07 November 2008 at 10:56am | IP Logged
waohThumbs Up its superbStar so sweetSmileWink so she signed the contractCool and armaan is impossibleWink plz continue it soonSmile and thanks for the pmWink

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perfectpiscean IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 July 2007
Posts: 5021

Posted: 07 November 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Haha I really enjoyed this part!
Especially the dialogues...U penned them really well! And im totally waiting 4 the next part =D
Please continue soon...And thanks 4 the PM hun!
Robin_M IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 August 2006
Posts: 5709

Posted: 07 November 2008 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
simran that was such an awsome part! OMG!!!!!!!! your soooo good girl, fabulous writter! love the way u describe things! very very good! hehehe armaans thoughts are so dirty! the way he was checking her out and wanting to take her right there and then! he is determined to have sex with her! wonder how and what he will do to break ridz!!!!!!
and ridz, like wow the girl sure has will power, to resist him! she definately wants him too, with the way shes attracted to him! and she deserves it too! shes a 27 year old divorced virgin, its time she explores her sexuality...and who better to do it with then armaan! lets see how long she will resist armaan!!!!
omg im sooo excited for the upcoming, he has her for 6 months mwhaha cant wait for more! please continue soon sim!

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