Manzil (AR FF) Discontinued! - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi

nice starting dear

armi changed de tohis dad sooo sad

ridz poor girl

update sooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

if u can do pm me plzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi simran

thks for the pm dear

it was rocking yaar

armi was toooooo bold asking ridz that

armi is now not going to leave ridz

it is too interesting and well protayed dear

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zhasan2
great start!! seems really interesting! plz cont. soon! and can u PM me once you continue?

Thank you so much and your PM is sent!

Originally posted by: Robin_M
great concept, do continue!

Thank you please continue reading and commenting

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
hey gr8 part! im excited to read ur fan fic! hope u can cont soon :)

oh nd can u pm me when u cont again? thanks!

Thank you so much for reading it means a lot and of course I will PM you!

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
love your concept

if you have pm list can i please be added to it?

Thank you for liking the concept, I liked it too I just hope I can do justice to it and will add you to my list

Originally posted by: Catwoman
OMG what an first part

Wow Rid been threw so much!!

Cant wait for u to progress!

Love Kat

Kat you are such a doll thank you for commenting it really means a lot hope you enjoy how it unfolds

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Huma

@HS.KaSh

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Posted: 15 years ago

mindblowing update...............

so both AR r amazed by each other's looks

lets c whnta's coming next form ur pen!!

thanks for pm

chandni

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: armaanridz

wow great start

i luv armaan's line sita no radha or watever her name is ...............lolzxx

cotinue soon yaar ........can't wait for their meeting

chandni

I know I loved writing the Sita and Radha part I hope you like their meeting and thanks for reading

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ so touching😭😭😭 feel bad for ridhima😭😭 and intresting one😊😉 plz continue it soon😊 and send me pm😳 when u update it😳 if u dont hv any problem😳

"Thukra k usne mujhko kaha muskura do,
Main hans dia akhir sawal uski khushi ka tha..
Main ne khoya wo jo mera tha hi nahi,
Usne khoya woh jo sirf usi ka tha?..!"

You say the sweetest things when you comment thank you very much and I promise to PM

Originally posted by: aarora
hey dat sounds interesting..luvd it..update soon..can u plz PM me whnvr u update...

Thank you for liking it will PM

Originally posted by: cool_pisces
Hey Simran

Just went through ur entire ff , its sounds really interesting and different

Cud u pls PM me whenever u update

Thanks Mini

Thanks for readings Mini will definitely PM you when I update

Edited by simran1285 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: saridena

hi simran

thks for the pm dear

it was rocking yaar

armi was toooooo bold asking ridz that

armi is now not going to leave ridz

it is too interesting and well protayed dear

update soooooooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

Thank you liking it and phew glad the PM thing worked I am still learning the hang of sending multiple PM's and quoting more than one person

Armi is very bold but don't worry the Ridz in my story is not that far behind hope you like how it unfolds!

Originally posted by: armaanridz

mindblowing update...............

so both AR r amazed by each other's looks

lets c whnta's coming next form ur pen!!

thanks for pm

chandni

Glad you liked it Chandni thank you for commenting

Edited by simran1285 - 15 years ago

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

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Posted: 15 years ago

thank you for the pm

his pony tail reminds me on big b from cheene kum lol

can't wait to see what happens next

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Tanasha

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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome intro cum first part

poor ridzy has been through alot

and that jerk vivek shld just go to hell

haha armaan is kinda hilarious with his

sita no radha or whatever her name is;D

cnt wait for the next part

love

tanu

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kripa

@vennelachowdary

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Posted: 15 years ago

hii dear.......

iread all 3 parts........

u explained everyones charecter very well ......

its a different story.....

3rd part is hillarious.....update soon.....

waiting for the next part....

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360913

Posted: 15 years ago

this is execellent totally minblowing, rids and armaanz characters are sounding gr8. both definately lyk wat they see cant wait till da story unfolds. do continue soon

luv iram

p.s finding it realy hard to imagine armaan in a ponytail (lol)

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