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hey guyss!! im here with my first update...as i promised!! hope u all enjoy!!!


Part 1

 

          It was a cold, misty morning in the city of Dehradun; it was a quiet and calm morning, the chirping of the birds and the melodious sound of the river. Dehradun was on of the most beautiful cities in India. Dehradun was the place where the Gurukul of the most famous Guru was, Sri Balraaj Maan. He was said to be a strict and much disciplined principal. He did not allow casual clothes; students had to wear their school uniforms, which were maroon and white. This year, his daughter, Heer Maan was enrolled to the Gurukul, and so was Prem Juneja, son of the biggest business man, Lalit Juneja. This was the same Gurukul that they met in, and fell in love, love that was eternal, love that could never separate them because they were made for each other; our one and only Prem and Heer.

 

 

 

          On that fine morning Heer stepped out of her hostel room to her balcony, she had a sweet smile on her face with a glow. She was wearing a nice simple white churidar, yet it was so elegant. Her payals were making sweet sounds of "chan chan". She had the most perfect almond shaped dark brown eyes for any guy to be lost in. Heer was just simply beautiful; in fact there were no words to describe her beauty and elegance. Whenever Heer woke up early, which was basically everyday, she would always take a shower, get dressed and step out in the balcony to do "surya namaskar".

          Today as she stepped out the wind blew through her hair, making her look even more beautiful. One thing she didn't notice was that somewhere out there, there was someone staring at her with his eyes open wide…On the other hand Heer had a feeling something special was going to happen today, or even better, that she was going to meet someone special. After finishing up her "surya namaskar" she went inside her room to wake up her two best friends, Ashlesha and Meher.

 

Heer: Meher! Ashlesha! Jaldi utho hamein class mein jaane ka time hogaya hai!!...said Heer in her sweet voice.

 

Meher: Arre common Heer di! Abhi to sirf 6:30 hua hai…hum to saath bajje uthte hain!

 

Ashlesha: Haan Heer di, sone do na! abhi aadha ghanta hai!

 

Heer: Offo! Mein tum dono ka kya karoongi?! Agar class jaane mein der huiy to phir mein tum dono ko khud apne papa…matlab principal ke yahaan le jaaoongi! Samjhi!

 

Meher & Ashlesha: KYA??!!!....both were exasperated by hearing the principal's name.

 

Heer: (giggling)…tum dono to aise darre huey ho ki jaise koi bhooth ko dekhliya!!!...hahaha…arre yaar..mein to mazaak karrahi thi! Yeh to sirf tum dono ko uthaane ke liye meine kaha tha! Khair chodo..ab jaldi jaake tayaar hojaao.

 

Meher: Kya heer di..aap bhi na!

 

Ashlesha: Haan..mera to bp high hogaya tha!!!

 

Heer: Accha meri maa…mein aage se aisa nahin kahoongi..ab please jaake tayaar hojaoo!!

 

All three of them had a sisterly bond between each other, which is why Meher and Ashlesha call Heer 'didi'.

 

 

         

          Same time in the morning, a young, tall, handsome boy woke up with his dreamy-chocolaty eyes. As you all have guessed, it was Prem! He had a heart of gold and was one of the nicest boys in Gurukul, also the most disciplined. He too had a habit of getting up early in the morning and doing "surya namaskar". As he stepped out to his balcony, he felt the fresh air hit his face, with the sound of payals.  He suddenly opened his eyes, trying to figure out where it was coming from. As his eyes were searching, they landed on the balcony across from his in the girl's hostel. Prem couldn't believe his eyes, she was the prettiest girl he had ever seen. Prem was lost in her beauty, and the girl was none other than our Heer.

          Prem was staring at her endlessly, however she did not notice him looking at her. He was astonished by how gorgeous she was. Usually Prem was not the type of boy to be interested in girls, he focused more on his studies. But there was something different about her, he felt as if he was meant to be with her and she was meant to be with him. While Prem was in deep thoughts about this 'special' girl, Preet came in from behind saying…

 

Preet: Yo PB! Aap itni subha subha kiska chehra dekhrahe ho? (NOTE: Preet and Harman call Prem PB)

 

Preet: HELLLOOO!!! PB!!! Kya sochrahe ho?!...waving his hand in front of Prem's face.

 

Prem: Ha?...uh…woh…Preet mein…bas kuch nahin aisehi suraj ko dekhraha that…vaise tu kyun itni jaldi uthgaya?

 

Preet: Woh kya hai na…aaj mujhe koi ladkiyon ke sapne nahin aaey..to socha ki mein jaldi uthke aaphi se thodi der baatein-shaatein karloon.

 

Prem: Tu kabhi nahin sudre ga!...chal tu tayaar hoja..tab tak mein Harman ko jagata hoon.

 

Prem: (inside the room) Eh Harman! Uth…class mein jaane ka time horaha hai! Chal uth!

 

Harman: mmmmm…bas uth rahahoon Prem bhai!

 

So all of them got ready and left for class, and the same happened on the other side; Heer, Meher, and Ashlesha left for class also.


So how was it??? plzz tell me!! next update will be ummm......friday morning?? i guess...if not i'll put up a note....byes<33333

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awwwhhssssssss! i lovelovelovveeeddd thattt!! it was a great intro of all the characterss and aww Premm saww Heerrr!! i loove your FF. cant wait till your next updateee Smile
 
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awwwhhssssssss! i lovelovelovveeeddd thattt!! it was a great intro of all the characterss and aww Premm saww Heerrr!! i loove your FF. cant wait till your next updateee Smile
 
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heyy...thank you soo much!! im glad u loved it!!! i'll update soon!!!

~Garima

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
hey garima.....
awsome update yaar..
it was gr8 as expected..
loved the way prem saw heer 4 the 1st time...in the morning,at the balcony,in the cool breeze..wow!!
will wait 4 ur next update..

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Posted: 05 November 2008 at 11:57pm | IP Logged

nice beginning, waiting for next part.........

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awesomeeeeeeeee too good update soon asap.

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Posted: 06 November 2008 at 6:20am | IP Logged
great waiting for the next part

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Posted: 06 November 2008 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashpush

hey garima.....
awsome update yaar..
it was gr8 as expected..
loved the way prem saw heer 4 the 1st time...in the morning,at the balcony,in the cool breeze..wow!!
will wait 4 ur next update..


lol...thank you..will update soon!!! Smile

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