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FF ..In His Heart (DMG)#2 Part 32 Pg 74 (7/1) (Page 4)

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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
omg awesome part! loved it! wat a cliff hanger though! thanks for the pm :D .. will look forward to the next part
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
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 u noe wot, ammy says is rite.. weneva he wants 2 spend tym wid basket.. sum1 cumz n disturbz.. n here josh..(btwn is josh ammy's son. frm d prev marriage..) wen ridz said dat dey luk similar dis was d 1st reaction dat came across.. n d cliffhanger...
luvd it loads.. n btwn congooo 4 d new thread...
thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon



Edited by meow23 - 03 November 2008 at 10:00am
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
AWWWW what an lovely part.. AR romance was just soooooo cute.. hai.. sweet.. josh is so oblivous.. cuz he is too focused on his girl.. hehe.. and aww.. love the way armaan talks about minnie too.. damn adorable.. HAHA!! MUSKI saw.. OMG!! man man .. cant wait to read her reaction.. what will happen.. what will she say.. what will they explain about their relationship.. AHHHH!!! i hope you update soon!! please..
 
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Congrajulations on the new thread, you deserved every bit of it......you are so good at this whole FF writing....
 
Loved this part, there is so much cutness (if there is such a word) to AR's romance, they are just so adorable......romancing infront of little Josh, that was nice as well , the last bit of Ridz comparing Arman to Josh was too good, but now we are stuck with this clifffhanger.....
so do continue soon
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Awww vini babe i'm sooooooooooo sorry to hear abt your fan fic being copied!! We all know that instant messaging was your hard work and that your the amazing writer behind it...i'm sure that girl got enough comments to make her realize that she CAN"T steal your work!! Smile hun =]
Anyways coming to this part:
    I loved the kiss scene..and actually i'd completely forgotten that josh had gone away to get ice cream..haha i'm so bad..forgetting abt cute adorable kids...lolz
Armaan and ridz convos are amazing..it seems like they're both really free with each other now..and i lvoed how they were both constantly teasing each other!!
Now i'm not soo sure if muski saw them kissing..cuz u nvr know with her..she could be freaking out abt something else!! haha i love muskaan
I loved this part soo much vini..seriously you know how to keep ppl hooked to your fan fic..=]
thanks soooo much for the pm
luv you
  mira
p.s. congrats on your second thread!!!


Edited by Gotta_luv_KYPH - 02 November 2008 at 10:58pm
mar- IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
grt part really good pls continue sooon
tnx for the pm
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
really gud
yachna IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
hey vini wow yaar totaly romantic wth their cute cute talky lvd it yaar ar hayeee ridz bhi kuch kam nahi hai n djosh ws also suspectng hahahaha nd ar mssng his sweatheart minnie awwwwwwwwwwww chooooooo cute nd thy wre kissng nd kissng hayeee chooooooo romantic yaar lvd it soooooooooooooooo mch nd muski tapak pdi hehehe wow cnt wait
cont sooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

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