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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kavya.b

wow  neeru it is fantastic
thank y don't u write ?Smile

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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lrl_01

so romantic
 
thnx for the appreciation !Smile
 
neeraja

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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by devilofkindness

Originally posted by kavya.b

wow  neeru it is fantastic
thank y don't u write ?Smile
i'm busy with xms
i really cant write now
 
 
i dont think my ff that nice
this is going very well, n i dont want 2 spoil this anymore

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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 6:32am | IP Logged
samrat is carrying gunjan in his arms Embarrassed.......*dream sequence ends*
 
he comes to real life ....arrey yeh main kahan kho gaya ? ...arrey gunjan abhi tak soo rahi hai ? arrey yaar gunjan ko pro marne ka mauka nahi mila abhi tak .....aur ....yeh kya ....tents bhi dikhai dene lage hain
 
it is next day morning -
 
samrat carrying gunjan in his arms , reaches the tents ....where nupur is very tensed
mayank is waiting outside when he sees sajan arrive ( with gunjan in sammy's arms LOL )
 
mayank ....arrey samrat ? tum aakhir aa hi gaye
benji smiles to himself seeing gunjan in samrat's arms ......shayad plan kaam kar gaya hai
nupur ....haan kya....gunjan tu aa gayi ?
nupur faints seeing samrat carrying gunjan
mayank is tensed now ....arrey nupur ....he sprinkles water on her face ....arrey nupur gunjan theek hai
just then gunjan wakes up from her deep sleep .....she realises that she's being carried by samrat
 
samrat .....arrey gunjan uth gayi aakhir ....?
gunjan ....arrey samrat ...pehle tum mujhe neeche utaro
samrat didn't want to do that but he can't keep carrying gunjan .....so he keeps gunjan down
gunjan sees everyone and realises that nupur has fainted
 
gunjan ....di ....nupur di utho
nupur gains consciousness .....her head is resting on mayank's knee
nupur .....mayank ...gunjan kahan hai .....
mayank ....nupur ...gunjan theek hai ....samrat ne usse dhoond liya hai ...woh tumhaare saamne hai nupur
nupur ....gunjan ...gunjan
gunjan ...nupur di ....main tumhaare paas hi baithi hoon .....sahi salamat hoon
 
nupur hears gunjan's voice and regains consciousness ....
then everyone go into nupur n mayank's tent
 
mayank ....tum theek ho na nupur ?
nupur ....haan mayank chinta mat karo
gunjan ....main khush hoon tumhe dekhkar di
nupur ....main bhi gunjan - accha samrat ...tum gunjan ko uthai huye kyun the ?
samrat ....arrey nupur ....yeh bhi koi sawal hai kya ?
nupur ....samrat ....jo poocha hai uska seedha seedha jawab do
samrat ...arrey nupur lekin ....mujhe bolne ka mauka do ....
mayank ....nupur chill .....
nupur ....mayank tum kuch mat bolo ....mujhe samrat se baat karne do
mayank ....tum toh kabhi mujhe baat karne do toh naa ... ( to himself )
nupur ....haan toh samrat ....shuru ho jao ....tum gunjan ko kyun uthaye huye the ?
gunjan  .....di ab chodo bhi na ....aaj agar samrat na hota toh na jaane main kahan hoti ....tumhe toh samrat ka shukriyaada karna chahiye
nupur ....tu chup reh gunjan tu kuch nahi jaanti
gunjan ....di par meri baat suno toh ...
nupur ....GUNJAN !
    ......ssammmrrattt ......safai do ...chalo
 
samrat starts telling the whole story .....what happened ....how he found gunjan .....he explained her state .....how he saved her .......and because of whom she's well and alive today in front of everyone ......
 
then suddenly someone claps hearing the whole thing ......it was none other than dia ....
 
along with her everyone including benji , mayank start clapping at samrat's bravery ....at such a young age .....nupur had no other choice than to thank samrat ......
 
nupur .....samrat thanks a lott !! tumhaara bahut shukriya .....meri behen ko bachane ke liyeSmile
samrat .....it was my duty to save her nupur .....
gunjan .....aakhir tum maan hi gayi di ....thanks soo much
       ......and she winks at samrat Wink .....and samrat too winks back at her Wink
 
 
 
guys .....now its ur turn .....shuru ho jao
 

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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kavya.b

Originally posted by devilofkindness

Originally posted by kavya.b

wow  neeru it is fantastic
thank y don't u write ?Smile
i'm busy with xms
i really cant write now
 
 
i dont think my ff that nice
this is going very well, n i dont want 2 spoil this anymore
 
ur aren't gonna spoil this ff ....cmon be a sport ....and ....no probs u van write after ur exams ....anyways best of luck !!! cheers Smile

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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 6:46am | IP Logged
v.v.nice

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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lrl_01

v.v.nice
 
HEY U WRITE NOW NA ? PLZZ ...ive been hearing only ur comments latelySmile

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Posted: 03 November 2008 at 7:07am | IP Logged
@neeraja- thank u
it's very nice
finally boys n girls 2gether
 
atlast the winking is perfect

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