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Posted: 01 November 2008 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
me writing ff 4r the 1st time n most of it will b in english
 
gunjan falls asleep , samrat laso tries 2 sleep but he cant sleep
suddenly he sees gunjan, she was looking very beautiful n innocent.
he stares at her n stares at her....... n falls asleep
it is morning now
gunjan wakes up n sees samrat
while sleeping he looks very innocent , so now she recalls wat all happened yesterday nyt n then suddenly she comes into her senses n get tensed n wakes samrat
 
gunjan-samrat, samrat
he wakes up lazily
samrat- kya hua, tum kyun chilla rahi hoon
gunjan - it is morning now, we have 2 go to the resort
         di will b tensed
samrat- if di is not tensed , will u stay here with me
 
then gunjan gives a confusing n serious look at him
 
samrat- oho dont b serious , i'm sry
ab chalo
 
at the resort everyone is tensed
nupur 2 mayank- i'm very afraid , gunjan is very afraid of dark
this samrat always plays wid her,  both of them didn't come till now
 
mayank- daro math, kuch nahi hoya, veyseybhi isme samrat ka koyi galthi nahi hai
 
nupur- galthi nahi hain!!!!!!!
u boys always support boys only
instead standing still here , u can go n search for them....
 
she will be continuing her bashings 2 mayank without giving him even a chance 2 speak
then suddenly , avoice comes frm back "di"
n it is gunjan along wid samrat
 
mayank - thank god gunjan u came or else nupur would have made me mad with speech
 
hope u liked it n sry 4r mistakes
 
plz someone continue now
 
 
PS:guys as this is my 1st ff
plz do comment / criticize on this
so that i'll know how it is
plzzz


Edited by kavya.b - 02 November 2008 at 9:01am

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Posted: 01 November 2008 at 5:38pm | IP Logged

hi...i'm new here....btw u guys r awesome...cont soon

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Posted: 01 November 2008 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 01 November 2008 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
hi ramshah123
welcome here
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 12:44am | IP Logged
gunjan..di
nupur...gunjan tu kaha chali gai this she see samrat and yells on him
tum tumhe maine kitni baar kaha hai ki meri behan ko pareshaan karna band karo but tum apni harkato se baaz nahi aaoge na
gunjan interrupts di listen
nupur..cuts her off
ruk ja gunjan yeh samrat samjhata kya hai apne aap ko darsal iski koi galti nahi hai saare ladke hote he aise hai
mayank....by the way tum saare ladko ko kyubeech mein la rahi hun
nupur...kyunki tum saare ek jaise he hote ho bas ladkiyun ko pareshaan karna he aata hai tumhe
samrat...hey nupur ek toh maine tumhari behan ko safety se yaha pahachaya aur tum ho ki
nupur ...oho bada ehsaan kardiya tumne use problem mein bhi tum he ne phasaya tha na
maya...tumhaari behan ne he game mein dare maanga that isme sam ki koi galti nahi hai
nupur..tum toh chup he raho na mayan toh acha hoga bas maine decide kar liya hai ki aaj se ladke apne raaste aur ladkiyaan apne raaste
diya..wat nonsence its not possible
nupur...u have to make it possible dia tumhe meri baat mani he hogi
sam..thinking oh no kaise rahonga main chashmish se dor
sam...dekho nupur
nup..cuts him off tum dekho aaj se hum yaha trip apne tarike se enjoy karenge aur tum apne now the groups will be divided boys their ways and girls there ways
aur haan aaj raat hum part ke liye ek jajah par jaa rahe hai waha aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
mayank...jao jao in a teasing tone jab kisi problem mein phaso ki na tab mat bolana
nup...arey jao jao main tum me se kisi bhi ladke ki koi help nahi longi
bye
chal gunjan
gunjan walks away looking at sam both look to each other with sad faces
precap.......the place jaha par saari girls party kar rahi hai waha par landslide ho jaata hai aur toh aur dia ne apna revenge nikaal ne ke liye uske coldrink mein behoshi ki medicine bhi mix kardi thi
boys comes to know about that and they go there for the girls rescue all the girls r safe suddenly sam realises that gunjan is nowhere to be see.where is gunjaN?will sam be able to find her

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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 1:06am | IP Logged
plz cont... soon
it's interesting
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 1:29am | IP Logged
dear u too write so well why dont u cont
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Posted: 02 November 2008 at 1:51am | IP Logged
hey neeraja
nice idea ya
 
mayb wen i get over wit my exams i will also participate !!!!

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