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Posted: 27 December 2009 at 3:21am | IP Logged
ahhhhhhhhh koi toh continue karooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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Posted: 31 December 2009 at 7:02am | IP Logged
sonam i am sorry dear 4th se exams hai aur abhi main bangkok chali gayi thi.. toh nahi ho paya... i can do al this after 15th only

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Posted: 09 January 2010 at 7:32am | IP Logged
someone please continue :)

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 12:44am | IP Logged
ok i will continue.. sine sana was requseting me for a long tym..
so this update is dedicated to sana.. dnt knw whether it will be good or bad..

ok next day in college
mayur had gone for academic meet to shimla

corridor
g: samrat mijhe di ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai..
s: janta honn chashmish
g: pata nahi di theek se pahuchi bhi hogi yaa nahi... mujhe toh bahut chinta ho rahi hai
s: chashmixh.. um fikar maat karo.. woh theek hogi
g: ha woh toh hai phir bhi..di pehli baar kahi akele safar kar rahi hai
s: akele... kaha akele uske saath mayank hai na..
gunjan nods her head
sam coming closer to gunjan and says aur tumhare saath main
gunjan blushes..
s: aaye hai.. ek baat bolu
g: bolo
s: jab tuum sharmati hon naa toh bhaut cute lagti hoon
and then touches he r nose the way he always..
gunjan blushes harder
g: bas ab flirt karna band karo aur class ke liye chalo
gunjan starts moving and sam catches he r hand
s: chasmish (in a way as if he is tired and innocent bacha)
g: kya hia samrat
s: mujhe class nahi jaan ( making a puppy face)
g: samrat nahi.. hum classes bunk nahi karenge.... exams bhi pass aa rahe hai..
samrat now with a naughty smile
s: toh maine kab kaha ki tum bhi mere saath classes bunk karo..
gunjan looks that side coz shez nervous
g: woh woh....
s: kya woh woh kar rahi hoon
g:mujhe class ke liye der horahi hai mai jaa rahi hoon..
s: arrey ek min... main bhi tum,hare class main parta hoon
g: pata hai
s: toh saath saath chale
g: par tum bunk kar rahe the naa
s; nahi .. woh toh sirf asie hi tha... main tumhe chod kar kahi nahi jaane waala
both smile and go for shukla sirs class... they sit together..
in the class..
samrat holds gunjan's hand
g: kya kar rahe ho
s: pyaar
g: samraaaat
s: chashmish
g: pchh class main dhyan do
s: tum samne ho toh dhyan kahi aur kaise jayenga?
g: uufo samart .. sir abhi hume daatenge
s: acha main yeh band kar dunga agar tum mujhe kuch promise karo toh
g: promise kya
s: ki college ke baad pura din hum akale ghumge... as in DATE pe jayenge
g: DATE ?????
s: ha kyun?
g:nahi
samrat holds her hand more tightly and coes closer
s: sochlo
g: sochliya
s:paaka coing more closer
gunjan gt nervousand then said a yes
g: theek hia chlaenge ab pls chodo
samrat leaves her hand
i love u chasmish
next continue

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 10:43am | IP Logged
great update .. was very good,   loved all the SAJAN romances
chooo chweeeet ;D

add me to your pm list, n do pm me when you next update. thanks
will be waiting

Raviee.xx

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part  pragya fabulas 

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Posted: 14 January 2010 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
 IN SAMRAT HOUSE

door bell is ringing at door it was benji and armaan at the same time they both came.

Samrat open the door hey u guys come inside we are waiting for you guys .

armaan and benji went inside  after samrat closing the door.

 IN LIVINGG ROOM

G: Hey benji hey ammy.

Ar&B: said toughter heyy gunjan.

G: ammy ghar find karana mai koi problam to nahi whoi hai.

Ar: pari koi problam nahi whoi hai thanks for giving samrat address.

G: koi baat nahi ammy did u meet my samrat.

Ar: yea i did saw your samrat hahahahaha tell u what your choise is amazinggg he is super cool dude.

G: ammy sometimes  mujhay bhot dar laghta hai kahi main apana samrat ko naa kho doo.

Ar: Pari itna acha insaan hai samrat wo kabhi nahi chay ga ka tum daro iusay khona say samrat such main acha hai ab tum mujhay samrat say nahi milwal rahi ho.

G: soo soory ammy i forget about samrat.

Gunjan calling samrat idhar ayo.
samrat went in living room.

S: heyy chashmish tumna mujhay bula hai.

G: haan samrat meet my childhood friend armaan this is my sweetheart samrat.

Ar: heyy samrat dude  how are you.

S: i am fine dude meet my friend  benji.

B: heyy dude nice to meet u gunjanis really lucky to have caring friend like you.

Ar: Pari is lucky she have super cool dude  samrat is also nice person from heart.

S: Thanks dude.

S: chashmish  tumhara pass koi plan hai dia ka liya.

G: samrat meara pass plan to hai lakin ammy ko yea karana para gaya .

Ar: guys kon say plan hai jo sirf main he kar sakta ho.

G: ammy meari ek cousin hai dia jo mujhay say bhot nafrat karti hai jo kissi bhi gandi haad thak jaya sakti hai i got rape coz of her.

Ar:  WHATTTTTTTTTT THE HELL U TALKING ABOUT PARI U GOT RAPED BY YOUR COUSIN DIA.

S: dude this is true dia is also my ex best friend she used me as well and telly me fake story of herand chashmish.

Ar: I am in your plan  pari what i have to do.

G: ammy sub girls tum par marti hai kay tum dia pata sakta ho apana pyar main i just want know ka ayasa kyoi kari rahi hai meara saat our samrat ka saat  jab dia khud say such bati gi akhar kay chati hai hum say.

Ar: pari tum worried mat karna samrat tum say ek baat pucho dude tum too bhot acha person ho to dia jasi girl ka dost kasa ban gay she dont deserve your friendship.

S: dude plzzz just forget about dia right now i dont want talk about her your right dude she didnt deserve my friendship its just my mistike tht  i trust her i though she was nice friend of me but i am wrong soo i dont wana talk about dia plzzzzzzzzzz.

Ar: ok as u wish dude soo samrat tell me how you met pari.

S: Chashmish our main hospaital main frist time miley tha.

Ar: heyy what guys saying u guys met in hospital in frist time most pepole meet at colloge our park.

G: that was true ammy me and samrat met in hospital  frist  time i will tell u story abou us how we meet?

Ar: just tell me your story plzz pari.

G: ok here we go it was few days back main community libray  say wapas aya rahi thi main dhaka ka kuch goons samrat ko mara raha tha danda say dhori whoi jaldi samrat ka pass ayai thi on time when he about fell i hold him no one is there i try call for help then some saw  us i tell him plzz help me to take the samrat in hospital plzz its emergency plzz guy help me i take samrat to hospital we reach hospital .

  FLASHBACK

       IN HOSPITAL

we reach hospital i said it emergency plzz nurse can call doctor plzz tht boy is soo injet plzz nurse.

NU: plzz lady be pashiant  i u stay here i call doc.
nurse is left call of doctor.

Gunjan phone is ringing she pick it up.

G: hello dii how are you.

N: gunji main theek ho main bhot parashan hoo abhi tha to nahi ayai ghar .

G: di main hospital hoo kisi boy ko goons na bhot danday mara hai abhi bhi main na ius hold kaya ho hai doctor ka wait kara rahi hoo abhi phone rakho bye i think doctor it here.

N: byee take care  you and boy .

call end

D:  tht boy nurse take tht boy to ICU i will start op it was searies ingery .

D: lady thank you agar app time par na ayati na isa larka ko kuch bhi ho sakta tha app iss larka ko janti hai.

G: nahi doctor main ina nahi janti yy any problam doctor.

D: ya paper sing karana hai to hee hum iss laraka ka op kar sakta hai.

G: doctor main sing kar dhaty ho i dont care just save tht boy plzz doctor .

D: ok i will try my best thanks once again here is boy cell phone if any call for his friend jst tell them come to city hospital ok.

G: ok doctor.

doctor went I.C.U OP OF THT BOY.
 
Gunjan was walking then boy cell is ringingg.

G: hello

B: heyy samrat yaar kaha hai tu main kitna perashan ho raha ho abhi tha dia pass nahi poncha.

G: hello app ius larka ka friend hai to plzz jaldi say app city hospital aya jaya qq ka app ka friend u call samrat he is in city hospital.

B: WHATTTT samrat city hospatal hai i am coming thanks for tell me byeeeeeeee.

call is end

Benji arrive at city hospital.
benji saw beutifull girl sitting there he reach her.

B: hello app waho phone wali hoo na.

G: yes main wahoi hoo. Heyy  iam gunjan bushan

B: heyy i am Benji main ho ius larka ka bestfriend.

G: then nice to meet u i  am your best friend saver.

B: really thank you soo much for  saving my friend can u tell me what happend to him.

G: i just saw  some goose are hitting your best friend with danda on his head n shoulders i ran to him save him on time.

B: thankss.

G: no problam.

after tht boy op doctor came to us .

D: lady u can meet him now thanks for everything to save him .

G: no problam doctor.

B: hey  doctor uncle how are you .

D: i am fine benji u and tht lady can meet my son now .

G: doctor plzz just call me gunjan plzz.

D: preatty name

G: thanks


       now gunjan and benji went to see tht boy .


       IN samrat hospital room

B: dude main to bhot dar  tha kahi main apan sub say acha friend na kaho doo.


S: benji main theek hoo main kabhi tumhay nahi charo dude ya preety girl kon hai tumhar saat.

B: ya gunjan bushan hai jisna tumhay bachaya hai some goose say.

S: hey gunjan i am samrat shargill  nice to meet u can we be friend .

G: sure samrat friends .

they both shake hands.

S: chashmish kay tum plzz ya bato i wana share with u something.

gunjan went to sitt near him.

S: main tumhra thank you kasa karo tum bhot achi ho  mujhay jasa larka ko tum na save kaaya hai plzz .

G: samrat tum bhot acha insaan hoo i am glad tht iam your friend u are lucky to have friend like benji he is soo caring person ek baat yaad rakhan apani sari problam mujhay bata sakta ho u can trust me khabi apani masoom chara ko is super cool attuied me mata daba dana qq ka tum bhot cute bho hoo inocent bho ho jab hum baat kara ga tab tum samrat bana kabaat karo ga mujhay okk

S: ok chashmish tell u what ajj thak mujhay kisi nah inna pyara coment nahi kaya his eyes are now teary .

G: heyy plzz dont cryy samrat u dosent look nice in tears i dont want to see u like i promise i will take reveng for tht goose  how hit u ek ek blood ka reveng loo gii i am not fread of tht goose .


S: how sweet of u chashmish phela main tum kabhi collage main nahi dhaka  .


G: qq ka jab meara  our di frist day tht to app nahi thay bb precite kar raha hi iusa baad main app ko kabhi nahi dhahka ajj miley hai frist time .

samrat hug gunjan she also hug him back .


 samrat also discharge  for hospital samrat and benji also drop gunjan at her house then they left.

Flashbach ends

now someone contuied soon


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awesome work safoo plz some one continue

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