mujhe pyaar hai FF .....open for all...do see - Page 4

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#31
hey cmon plz sum1 continue....iu didn't think that my ff will go on so interestingly .....
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neeraja it's very interesting so cont.. soon
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sam.....main kaise bachaoon apni chashmish ko ?
gunjan is still unconscious ....gunjan aankhien kholo gunjan ....gunjan meri baat suno
 
samrat had got his backpack wid him ....and some water ....he sprinkles water on gunjan's face
 
samrat .....gunjan ....aankhien kholo ....
 .....he sprinkles water again
 
gunjan gians consciousness somewhat ....
 
gunjan ....haan ...main kahan phas gayi hoon ....koi mujhe bachao
samrat ....gunjan ....gunjan dekho main tumhaare paas hoon ....tum bilkul theek ho
gunjan .....sam ....samrat ?
samrat ....gunjan main hi hoon
gunjan ....accha main yahan kaise ?
samrat ....gunjan shhh .....ab koi baat nahi ...pehle hum camps ke paas chalenge phir tum sab jaan logi
gunjan ....theek hai .....par tum mere saath hi rehna ...mujhe pakde rehna
samrat ....theek hai madam ....ab chale ki aur kuch ......?
 
gunjan keeps looking at samrat all the way .....she falls asleep in between while walking .....keeping her head on samrat's shoulders ....
   ...........samrat realizes that gunjan's asleep .....and then smiles his million dollar smile at gunjan .....he knows that he can't keep looking at her like this and so he carries her in his arms ......
 
then he dreams .....
 
*dream sequence begins*
 
samrat and gunjan on the hill tops .....with conifer trees all around .....
 
samrat ......bakhuda tumhi ho har jagah tumhi ho
haan main dekhoon jahan jab uss jagah tumhi ho
yeh jahan tumhi ho woh jahan tumhi ho
iss zameen se falak ke ....darmiyan tumhi ho
tum hi ho beshuba ....tumhi ho
tum hi ho ....mujh mein haan ....tum hi ho
tum hi ho .....tum hi ho .....tum ho ....
 
kaise bataien tumhe aur kis tarah yeh ....kitna tumhe hum chahatein hain
saaya bhi tera dikhe toh paas jaake ...uss mein simat hum jaate hain
 
gunjan .....raasta tumhi ho
rehnumaa tumhi ho .....jiski khwaish hai hum woh ....
woh panha ..aa tumhi ho
 
samrat ......tum hi ho beshuba ....tumhi ho
tum hi ho ....mujh mein haan ....tum hi ho
 
chorus ....tumhi ehsaason mein ....
tumhi jaise baaton mein ....
tumhi lamhaaton mein
tumhi jaise raaton mein
 
 
*dream sequence ends*
 
 
now guyz u continue ...
 
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow  neeru it is fantastic
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Originally posted by: kavya.b

wow  neeru it is fantastic

thank y don't u write ?😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnx for the appreciation !😊
 
neeraja
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Originally posted by: devilofkindness

thank y don't u write ?😊

i'm busy with xms
i really cant write now
 
 
i dont think my ff that nice
this is going very well, n i dont want 2 spoil this anymore
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Posted: 15 years ago
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samrat is carrying gunjan in his arms 😳.......*dream sequence ends*
 
he comes to real life ....arrey yeh main kahan kho gaya ? ...arrey gunjan abhi tak soo rahi hai ? arrey yaar gunjan ko pro marne ka mauka nahi mila abhi tak .....aur ....yeh kya ....tents bhi dikhai dene lage hain
 
it is next day morning -
 
samrat carrying gunjan in his arms , reaches the tents ....where nupur is very tensed
mayank is waiting outside when he sees sajan arrive ( with gunjan in sammy's arms πŸ˜† )
 
mayank ....arrey samrat ? tum aakhir aa hi gaye
benji smiles to himself seeing gunjan in samrat's arms ......shayad plan kaam kar gaya hai
nupur ....haan kya....gunjan tu aa gayi ?
nupur faints seeing samrat carrying gunjan
mayank is tensed now ....arrey nupur ....he sprinkles water on her face ....arrey nupur gunjan theek hai
just then gunjan wakes up from her deep sleep .....she realises that she's being carried by samrat
 
samrat .....arrey gunjan uth gayi aakhir ....?
gunjan ....arrey samrat ...pehle tum mujhe neeche utaro
samrat didn't want to do that but he can't keep carrying gunjan .....so he keeps gunjan down
gunjan sees everyone and realises that nupur has fainted
 
gunjan ....di ....nupur di utho
nupur gains consciousness .....her head is resting on mayank's knee
nupur .....mayank ...gunjan kahan hai .....
mayank ....nupur ...gunjan theek hai ....samrat ne usse dhoond liya hai ...woh tumhaare saamne hai nupur
nupur ....gunjan ...gunjan
gunjan ...nupur di ....main tumhaare paas hi baithi hoon .....sahi salamat hoon
 
nupur hears gunjan's voice and regains consciousness ....
then everyone go into nupur n mayank's tent
 
mayank ....tum theek ho na nupur ?
nupur ....haan mayank chinta mat karo
gunjan ....main khush hoon tumhe dekhkar di
nupur ....main bhi gunjan - accha samrat ...tum gunjan ko uthai huye kyun the ?
samrat ....arrey nupur ....yeh bhi koi sawal hai kya ?
nupur ....samrat ....jo poocha hai uska seedha seedha jawab do
samrat ...arrey nupur lekin ....mujhe bolne ka mauka do ....
mayank ....nupur chill .....
nupur ....mayank tum kuch mat bolo ....mujhe samrat se baat karne do
mayank ....tum toh kabhi mujhe baat karne do toh naa ... ( to himself )
nupur ....haan toh samrat ....shuru ho jao ....tum gunjan ko kyun uthaye huye the ?
gunjan  .....di ab chodo bhi na ....aaj agar samrat na hota toh na jaane main kahan hoti ....tumhe toh samrat ka shukriyaada karna chahiye
nupur ....tu chup reh gunjan tu kuch nahi jaanti
gunjan ....di par meri baat suno toh ...
nupur ....GUNJAN !
    ......ssammmrrattt ......safai do ...chalo
 
samrat starts telling the whole story .....what happened ....how he found gunjan .....he explained her state .....how he saved her .......and because of whom she's well and alive today in front of everyone ......
 
then suddenly someone claps hearing the whole thing ......it was none other than dia ....
 
along with her everyone including benji , mayank start clapping at samrat's bravery ....at such a young age .....nupur had no other choice than to thank samrat ......
 
nupur .....samrat thanks a lott !! tumhaara bahut shukriya .....meri behen ko bachane ke liye😊
samrat .....it was my duty to save her nupur .....
gunjan .....aakhir tum maan hi gayi di ....thanks soo much
       ......and she winks at samrat πŸ˜‰ .....and samrat too winks back at her πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
guys .....now its ur turn .....shuru ho jao
 
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: kavya.b

i'm busy with xms
i really cant write now
 
 
i dont think my ff that nice
this is going very well, n i dont want 2 spoil this anymore

 
ur aren't gonna spoil this ff ....cmon be a sport ....and ....no probs u van write after ur exams ....anyways best of luck !!! cheers 😊
devilofkindness thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEY U WRITE NOW NA ? PLZZ ...ive been hearing only ur comments lately😊