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Posted: 29 October 2008 at 11:59pm | IP Logged

here is a short ff on RN which i wrote...the genre of this fic is pathos....i have also posted it in the RP FC...

PROLOGUE

DEATH- such a painful word...it only brings sorrow, agony and misery.

The pain of separation is too much for the living to bare...especially when we lose our loved ones. We often wish to bring them back, back from the dead, alter this law of nature, change the fact that once dead, nobody can come back, everyone has to die someday and each one has to die their own death.

Death is so cruel that it leaves a void, a pang of emptiness in the people who are left behind.

No one actually realizes that it also brings solace to the person enduring it. It removes him/ her from the worldly torture and transforms them into a different world where they r no longer mere beings but r entities..they r souls...

They do not have any kind of craving..any kind of lust...just they are pure souls, pure entities who look upon humans as puppets who dance accordingly as their strings are being pulled.

Well death is an inevitable guest who cannot be ignored. Surely no one actually wishes to pay heed to it but neither can they ignore it.

*****

"ahhhhh!!!" her shriek filled the whole academy.

******

the next part will be posted tomorrow....

Edited by mystified - 19 November 2008 at 3:16pm

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watch rajeev

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ye accha hai pehle khud hi hasaao...aur phir khud hi rulaaao bhi........its aint my fault ke baad ye ff....gr88888888....u hv described everything sooooooo well.....i mean i dont think anyone looks at the other side of death d way u hv described here....but even them when we think deeply we'll realise that its so true.....absolutely true....hats off to u dear......such deep thoughts..!!!!!!!!!! excellent....10 stars to u....cont soon

rituka7

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 12:13am | IP Logged

update was seriously very nice
u explained death so well
update soon

prerna1

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 2:17am | IP Logged

that sounds so good

nice start

plz continue soon

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 2:24am | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Death was very well described!!!!! Smile

Why did Naina scream?? Confused

saridena

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 7:11am | IP Logged

nice intro

sounds interesting

update sooooooooooooooooooooon

do pm me

luv soumya

mystified

Goldie

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 5:20pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by watch rajeev

ye accha hai pehle khud hi hasaao...aur phir khud hi rulaaao bhi........its aint my fault ke baad ye ff....gr88888888....u hv described everything sooooooo well.....i mean i dont think anyone looks at the other side of death d way u hv described here....but even them when we think deeply we'll realise that its so true.....absolutely true....hats off to u dear......such deep thoughts..!!!!!!!!!! excellent....10 stars to u....cont soon

awww...this comment was so flattering....thanku for such a lovely comment and appreciating my work...

Originally posted by rituka7

update was seriously very nice
u explained death so well
update soon

thanks rituka...

Originally posted by prerna1

that sounds so good

nice start

plz continue soon

thanks prerna...

Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Death was very well described!!!!! Smile

Why did Naina scream?? Confused

thanks shai...ab there is nothing too mysterious abt this fic...it s all abt their mindset and emotional turmoil...

Originally posted by saridena

hi

nice intro

sounds interesting

update sooooooooooooooooooooon

do pm me

luv soumya

thanks soumya...

mystified

Goldie

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Posted: 30 October 2008 at 5:23pm | IP Logged

@everyone...

thanku guys for reading it...now this fic may not turn out to be a fairytale...i am trying to make it as realistic as possible....

and yes all the pics for this fic has been provided by shaina......shai thanku so much....

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